Loved it.
I think this chapter was not of much consequence.
Also let me tell you a wish of mine. I wished to see how Arnav actually copes up with Branny in their love life. I know that is impossible for this storyline or it should be a sequel. But you did give a glimpse of it in this update by taking Branny along with them.
I do feel there are a bit loose ends. One of the major being Sandra! I'm dissappointed by that aspect of your story. I didn't get the closure I needed. That seemed a loose end!
But all in all, I did love this story. The pain in the beginning, the buddying teenage romance, Branny and the role of fate - everything was enticing.
The pain in the beginning was not soothed completely. Scars in Kushi's and Arnav's mind was dealt a bit easily in my eyes. But it never made me love this story any less!
I want to thank you for writing this work. You and your work will always be close to my heart. Thank you Dear. Please keep in touch! If possible can you give me your mail id?
And I hope you will start reading my work soon too!!!!
What is this new work? I don't know about it. On Arshi itself?
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