A Late Spring Removed. - Page 60

Thanks for the PM...got two for this last chapter:))

Jenny, disappoint and you never go together. You always always dazzle us with your writing. The ending was perfect...truly beautiful, a fitting end to a perfect love story. I especially loved the poem .

Im getting a little bit emotional here jenny😭

 

U know why

 

The same feeling like or more than that when the impenetrable heart ended

 

Samay ne yeh kya kiya

Badal di hai kaya

Tumhein mene paa liye

Mujhe tumne paya

 

 

U don't have to worry

 

I love Pablo " and so the update was more than beautiful

 

What a journey that was

 

You know what after you gave us the prologue

 

Each update I received and read with a  tug in my heart

 

Their pain, anguish was mine too and landour

 

Landour is part of me a place I would love to visit before I die

 

Only cause of ALS

Mere khwaabon ke is Gulistaan mein

Tumse hi tum bahar chai hai

Phoolon mein rang nahi the lekin

Dil mein khusboon tumhi se aai hai

 

 

They journey began giving lot of heart burns, breaks and then branny happened , the most beautiful factor in this story

 

Khamosh si hai zameeen hairaan sa falak hai

Ek noor hi noor sa abb aasmaan talak hai

 

 

Her pain, her sadness, her helplessness, her agony, her fights, battles with life to sustain and to keep her baby good " all will be intact in me more than anything

 

ALS gave us love and fights the lovers had to sustain their love

 

Kaise yeh ishq hai

Kaisa yeh khwaab hai

Kaise jazbaat ka Umda sailab hai

 

Din badle raatein badli

Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain

 

 

Finally they are one... with my branny getting love of a father, khushi getting her love and arnav his soul

 

Kyon hai yeh arzoo

Kyon hai yeh zustzu

Kyon dil bechain hai

 

Kyon dil betaab hai

Din badle raatein badli baatien badli

Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain

 

 

The lines are from the song i love the most ... and  for u

 

 

In lamhon ke daaman mein

Pakiza se riste hain

Koi kalma mohabat ka

Dohrate farishte hain

 

Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein

Husn hai sari adaon mein

Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein

 

 

 

U know me so I feel this will do justice

 

Love u jen for such beautiful story an for making me part in this

 

Will look forward for more ALS and TIH.

 

I don't want you to stop ur fab fab writer

 

Love to my dear sarah

 

Will wait for epilogue

 

Two lines for my ALS finally

 

Kaise bathaye ki tujko chahe yara batha na paye

 

Baatein dilon ki dekho zuban ki aankhe tujhe samjhayen.

Tu jaane na. Tu jaane na

 

 

Our favorite

Edited by clarissajohn - 10 years ago

When I started reading this one...I wasn't sure how far I would go...it was very different than the ones you wrote earlier...but the journey from the first part till today was amazing...once I got hooked there was no looking back...loved Branny...Khushi and Arnav of course!!!!

beautiful ending...amazing n fabulous update

The last! Chapter! Sigh

You have penned it down is such superb words that I have no words to express how wonderful it is or how moving it is! Clearly! Bliss!

How cute, romantic, splendid and simple it was all! My gawd I dont know where to start!

The lovely sketches the thoughts the mesmerizing toast or the sweet dad and mum moments?

Passion at its best as usual!

Its done! It just began!

Cheers man!

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Dear Jenny u have taken me through a beautiful journey through this amazing story. I am happy because Arnav and Khushi found their much deserved  happiness and sad because the story ended. Feeling emotional. Pls don't stop writing. Pls pm me for all your work. Looking forward to reading an update of Bride with a doll. 

awsm ending its really wonderful ff 👏

wow man it was the perfect end wholesome now eagerly looking foward to bride with a doll pls update it soon