What a beautiful wedding! You hve described it so well. I felt like I ws watching everything from the front seats.
Aww they went back to her house. That was such a nice touch. With the same fire but this time as man and wife. Their love was very passionate. Their longing for eachother was very obvious. After many years and so many hurdles they are finally one.
The last line where Khushis calls out his name and he swears made me laugh. That was totally him. So well done for sticking to their characters throughout. I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. Looks like the bad wolf has found his happy ending with red riding hood.
Honestly, no offense to anyone but I have to say that I never found Christian wedding to be romantic...but you made the wedding to be soo romantic, beautiful yet emotional in soo many ways that I cannot explain to you. And of course their passion and their bliss union was just beautiful dear! Loved every bit of it! You are one amazing girl I tell you and I won't ever get tired of saying it to you. Keep up the good work!