A Late Spring Removed. - Page 18

mishal07

@mishal07

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb👏

Beautifully written

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shiv456

@shiv456

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Posted: 10 years ago

your story is excellent very nice i hope youcome with new one soon

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862604

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Posted: 10 years ago

finally the day has come!

arnav and khushi getting married.. there cannot be any better news in the world of Arshianas.. They got married in numberless times... in numberless styles and in numberless places .. (of course in the hands of amazing writers like you!)

but each time, it feels great.. it feels as if its for the first time we are witnessing their union!

loved every bit of the update.. the description of their love-making was just perfect!

what are you planning next?? its not the last chapter, though but looks like will end soon. any epilogue??

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akankha

@akankha

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Posted: 10 years ago

an awesome update!
after all that distance,struggle,now they have become one! finally!
*happy tears!

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 10 years ago

Updated comment in page 20...

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765813

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Posted: 10 years ago

Fabulous jenny..just the passionate union we all wanted for them.loved it.

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 10 years ago

This one surpasses every other update..

Beautiful. Amazing.

Kya bolun main? Not too good with words...but I hope you get that this story itself is very beautiful...and now, Khushi and Arnav got together..forever.

Arnav aur Khushi Humesha. <3

:')

I hope we are getting an epilogue? :P

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 10 years ago

🥳

That was the perfect and most awaited wedding on IF ...

Seriously I had tears in my eyes ...

First Arnav taking Khushi to the cemetery to meet her father ...

The Church being so beautifully decorated with spring flowers and roses ...

Imagining Khushi's father escorting her to the alter ...

Taking the wows ... and most of all little Branny handing over the wedding rings ...

It was so thoughtful of Aunt Rachel and Janice taking over Branny and leaving the

newly weds to spend sometime alone together ...

And then the rain coming down to shower them with more blessings ...

finally the union of the two souls after waiting for what seemed like an eternity ...

Beautifully written Jenny ... just perfect ...

With this story ending there is going to be such a void ...

Thanks Jenny ...

Edited by Kishmish - 10 years ago

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

I don't know where to start from...I am blank still...yeahhh... 😉 ...Aha! Kya chapter tha dear...very beautifully written...And Arnav Foster he was being a sweetheart all the time...so beautifully, so romantic, so gentle that is the way a relationship should be in husband and wife...love and trust between two lovers...hats off for writing it so beautifully...no doubt mainting the innocence at the same time creating an awesome romance between two...I just can't tell you how much I love hour writing style that is probably the reason why IF members love reading your work and always anxiously waiting for the next chapter...only fear is story is nearing the end...
😛Edited by sunitikapoor - 10 years ago

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