Rythmic Mischief Swaron OS - Page 2 | Channel V Dil Dosti Dance

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Posted: 10 years ago

:P swayam kab bad boy ban gaya3

nyc chpter

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darshita

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Posted: 10 years ago

wonderful and fantastic os... loved it...

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Shweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

Really nice harshita 😊
Loved the way swaron were pretending to be cold to each other in front of everyone else 😊
That is swaron masti !!! 😊
And thanx for the PM :)

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-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res
Unres. .

Harshu dis was awesome yaar. .
I was not able to read it dat day on b.day thread. . Aaj hee pad rahi hun..
Mast tha. .
I loved it. .
Amazing d way u penned it down..
Ur improving a lot with every os..
D way u describe things very well done..
Concept n execution hats off..
Awesome i enjoyed reading..
Dey being husband n wife was a shocker for me..
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 10 years ago

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Varada

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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing as always!!👏
Loved the mischievous Swaron...😳
Keep writing such amazing stuff!!😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 10 years ago

harshi ma'am sorry i'm late...very very late actually.

but take a bow for this one.

smart----challenging----exciting...and misleading . what a combo.

loved the face off. loved kriya's involvement.

and most of all loved the scene whre they both become mr and mrs shekhawat again.

wonderful.

from ur di----lots of love.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Sweetheart...

That was one sizzling oneshot...the whole treatment to the concept was so different...the face off...the war...1st words..thn dance moves...thn the tango..the almost kiss...and twist in the tail...they were married...

Her diva side is such a turn on..and his bad boy side...loved this whole idea of role play...it was amusing...the last conversation was amusing...the jealous swaron ...amazingly written...

Sanskruti's role was beautifully seamed into this OS...loved it👏👏👏👏

I am loving ur style of writing

Love

Deepika

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704537

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome one dear...thx for d PM

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