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FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149 (Page 6)

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
the comfort level is growing. i have always admired the way you show the growth in relationships

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
awesome update beautifully done loved arnav taking her to the places that made him feel happy loved his walk down memory lane remembering the good and just pushing the bad away loved how she was just there for him loved how he was thinking if she would love it or hate is so cute she wants him to heal and be happy even if she is not there if that's not love wonder what is arnav is tired the should have stayed the night awesome update thanks for the email 


Edited by dumas - 17 August 2013 at 7:00pm
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nidsubh007

Originally posted by mem1

AWESOMENESS! 

Nidhi...I was missing you and getting worried. You were gone too long. But now you are back with a bang. That was a beautiful update. Loved every bit of it.

NASCAR Hall of Fame, the Biltmore and a football game. what more could one ask for! LOL

I did have one question :If Arnav is tired, why can't Khushi drive??? Not that I would have complained about  "staying  overnight " ... we know what your Arnav and Khushi do when they say overnight. Wink

Very good question! Khushi doesn't drive and it will be shown soon. Remember her riding her bike in the first chapter?



wow di!
how do u have such little little things in order? i mean i can never do it!
i wud just be writing a chapter and notice how i have never mentioned anything about it before and then i wud just be like "Shit! what am i supposed to do now?"

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Will comment properly once I am back from my vacation
 
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That was so beautifully written. The chemistry between Arnav and is so beautiful to read about.
 
I loved how Arnav, the guy who has long ago buried his past and hated bringing it up suddenly opened up and remembered his past, that too happily all because of a girl he just met.
 
So early on in their relationship Khushi has already changed him so much. I just cannot wait to read about the other changes in him.
 
I feel like this is only the beginning but at the same time I feel like this is the calm before the storm. I just shudder to think of what will happen when Arnav goes back and Khushi remains in the US because though they have not realised it yet, those two are more attuned to one another than they can comprehend. It was so palbable in this chapter. The day they spent was such a mundane day if you looked at it from a far , but up close you could see how this day, the time they spent together was so new to them, but at the same time it felt as if they had been doing this forever, spending time with one another regularly.
 
I loved how you wrote about Arnav not knowing where to take Khushi but then knowing exactly where to take her  as soon as he got into the car.
 
Not only that, but Khushi easy accpetance of both cars and footballs, I cant help but think depicts how as a person she is very understanding, accepting and very open. And just like she has come into Arnav's world and helped him to revisit his past and accepted the things that make up his world, just like that she too will accept him the way he is even with his faults and extra baggage.
 
I loved this chapter and God only knows how long I have been waiting to read it. I loved this chapter. It was just so cute.
 
I cant wait for the new one. Please dont make us wait as long this time else I wont be able to survive the wait.
 


Edited by LondonChick - 19 August 2013 at 2:57am

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Beautiful banner...great portrayal of emotions... Just wondering what will happen now... Excited for your next update...


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dershika Goldie
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Lovely lovely lovely 
Wow full arhi and the memory lane thing so emotional yet so sweet

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GunM Senior Member
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
lovely update
very emotional day for Arnav...but Khushi is always there for him
loved to see him so carefree
and super song choice

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romaisaaa Senior Member
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Finallly...it was very heart warming and sweet...desperately waiting for the cont. update...congrats on new thread...i m in love with your ff so pls keep on entertaining us with your exceptional writing skills...good luck and all the very best:)

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