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What the hell just happened? The story has taken an expected yet shocking turn... I seriously love your writing style Nidhi... it gives me a satisfaction to read something simple yet so brilliant... And this chapter was totally intense... Absolutely and totally loved it.
Those few beautiful moments when he brushed his thumb across her cheek... was so beautiful... He has fallen for her... considering that he really imagine kissing another woman anymore... But his haunting past would not let him move forward...And then hesitantly he taking her to his home... a home where he grep up... a home that is full of the skeletons of his past...
Khushi was so supportive throughout... She really is a gem and her love is not selfish... She is ready to give him time... to give him space... Yet all that he wants is to remain in his shell!! And he tells her that he wants to leave... She is trying her level best to understand him and be rational about it... But he was hell bent on going into some dark place of no return...
He then tells her that he would be leaving tomorrow... she is shocked at his statement and decision... He truly breaks her heart... Despite knowing that Arnav could never offer her anything... She had let her foolish heart hope against all odds... and now it is mercilessly broken... Payal tries to be Khsuhi's moral support after knowing about Arnav's departure...
I am glad that Khushi refuses to look at him... And how dare he expect her to? I know he is fighting too but he seriously has to let go off his past... It is absolutely not done to keep sulking in your present ruining your future... And then while leaving, he sees her at the beach... I am so proud of this Khushi.. who despite being hurt portrays a strong image... wishing only his happiness... And just like that she walks away from him... He lost his happiness in the literal sense...
I am in awe with your writing Nidhi... and there is no other way left for me than to demand a quick update... I am dying to know where this story heads from here on... π
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