A Little Bit Mad [ArHi SS] Pt.3-4/Pg.12 & 15 - Page 11

Originally posted by: gifttag

Khushi is coming in and out or her dreams and she does't seem to know what is reality and what did she dream.. she is in a hazy world.. She remembers something's and she forgets the things and Arnav just do not put any pressure on her..if she calls him a cab driver he is one.. If she believes that they are meeting for the first time he let's her believe that..he is playing different roles so that she is tranquil in the present time as she perceives it..

I don't know I might be on a complete wrong wave length and might be on a wrong direction but I feel Arnav knows things about Khushi than she knows herself or remembers..for example she might not have lost the job yesterday that incident might have happened 2 years of 4 years before I don't know. Please do stop me or correct me as I do go on a bit or my imagination runs away from me.

Another awesome chapter.. loved the lines about dreams..is there a hint in those lines? shall I start to dissect them too?
Please continue soon. Please forgive me if I have said too much or out of line completely.
Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: katunkka

Res.
Arnav is extremely sweet and nice which makes me so intrigued about who he is so does khushi btw.
Ill come back to say more.

Originally posted by: Japonica

Finally found the time to read this new one of yours A.

Funny, I'm reading it on a day when I am in a similar state of suspension between the real and dream/ nightmare, wondering what I'm doing and why! 

The description of the state of being suspended in the dream, just like an aircraft feels as it is about to land, at the beginning of chapter 3 was stupendous. So many times I've had that eerie experience when I am asleep and dreaming, yet there is prt of my brain that is fully aware of what's going on around, including the fact that I'm dreaming, yet not being able to do anything, while my limbs feel heavy with the sleep.

Khushi's state has sucked me in so totally, that i'm not even going to attempt to make sense of it. Mercifully, you have told us that you have the story written, I'll wait for you to create sense for me.


Is it a 'little' bit mad??? Boy, in the state I am in, it feels completely and scarily mad!! Get us out of this dream like state soon, Aria.


Brilliant writing!