FF:Intehaa Pyaar Ki:Th.5: Final Ch pg. 61 Aug. 27th - Page 56

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by achdata3


Hi Shirley,

Good Morning... πŸ˜ƒ

How are you?
 
GM, Diksha,
 
I am fine. how r u?
 
replying to all reviews including yours
Posted: 10 years ago
Writer ji.. Is here ??? Woohoo .. 
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by achdata3


Beautiful Chapter.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
 
Thanks a lot Diksha
Liked it very much..❀️ β€οΈ β€οΈ 
 
I am glad.
As this was the last chapter of your FF so thought of adding overall review. I liked the whole story which you have written. Liked Armaan & Anji too. This chapter was very beautiful.

Thank you. It delights me that u enjoyed the story.
 
and even I liked this armaan n anji.
 
I am happy u think this chapter wasn't that bad.
 
 
One more thing through your FF, i started interacting with people in forum and made friends with them including you too, previously i used to be a silent reader so never use to interact much. So thank you so much & will miss you...
 
oh really? I feel honored. I am missing the interactions with u all too. but can't help it.  
I just want you to continue writing whatever you are comfortable in.πŸ˜ƒ

 
of course, I will write since I love to. but maybe not here..
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by deepa17


Writer ji.. Is here ??? Woohoo .. 
  haanji my classes for the week done.. so decided to have some fun.. before I slog on the homework and paper submission over the weekend.
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by pansy123



Lovely Chapter! loved the Ashni moments...thanks for the subtlety!
 
thank you so much Psnsy,
 
I am glad u liked the ashni moments.
 
were they actually subtle? I doubt..
 
 
 
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by deepa17


Superb FF.. One of the best on the forum.. Just loved the whole process of falling in love..

 
Thank u Deepa. aap ne kaha, its a big thing for me.
 
I am glad u liked the process of falling in love
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sshirley


 
GM, Diksha,
 
I am fine. how r u?
 
replying to all reviews including yours

I m fine..

Okies.

U do you r work than we will chat later... 
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by swati62


That was a n amazing FF . So sad it's over. Read both the last last two chapters this morning they were superb. Thks for all the time and effort u have put in it . I will definetly miss reading and waiting for the next chapter.
 
Thank you Swati, I am glad u think the last two chapters were good enough...
 
no need to thank me. the pleasure was mine.
 
frankly, I too will miss writing and the interesting interactions with my readers..
 
 
 
Edited by sshirley - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by ssktlk


Hi Shirley,
I enjoyed your style of romance a lot. The subtlety, the stolen intimate moments when Ashu ate food from Nidhi's plate. His indulgence for Nidhi inspite of being aware of her greedy material desires, and later repenting his words to her when Nidhi mended her ways. Everything was right in place, the hot scenes tooπŸ˜‰. A job well done. Really hope to see more of your writing.


 
Thank u Sanya..
 
I actually wanted to know if I handled the not-so-subtle romance in the last chapter well?
 
Thank you dear for saying it was a job well done.
 
still would love ur detailed views on the romance in the last chapter, if u don't mind and can spare some time 
Posted: 10 years ago
QUOTE=gargpoo]hey shirley di...
 
Hey poonam, how r  ur eyes now? sorry I have been wanting to ask u last 2 days but it has been crazy these days..,
 
fantastic chap...πŸ˜ƒ
 
Thank you
 
i know u r not comfy in writing explicit scenes..it's ok..we imaginedπŸ˜†
 
arre OMG poonam, u r too young to imagine these things..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
jokes apart, was my discomfort too apparent?
 
first scene was great..bechaara ashu itna late utha..πŸ˜†
 
yeah and the poor guy was mortified.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
phone convo was hilarious...πŸ˜†slip of tongue again by ashuπŸ˜†
i enjoyed this scene..transfer of phone between ashni was too good.BB to kuch samajhte hi nahi hai..πŸ˜†
 
I am glad I made u laugh.
 
yeah this ashu is too comfy with his father, since he is biologically related. so slip of tongue ho jaata hai
bb ko thodi hi na pata tha ke they got married again the previous day...
 
liked that scene when ashu brought coffee for her...pyaar ek dusre k liye jeena chaiye right..
 
uh huh
 
loved ashni convo...nidhi wants to change herself for herself..but i agree with ashu too..jo kuch hua uski vajah se nidhi ka confidence khatm nahi hona chaiye...
 
thanks. I am glad u agree with ashu..
 
idea for shutting the mouth was greatπŸ˜‰
 
Really? kyun? u wanna try it on someone kya?πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
 
that scene when ashu felt nidhi is in some problem..u know aapne poora scene aise likha k sab kuch aur soche😳..but kuch aur nikla...i m glad that nidhi now cared about ashu & his family a lot..she did all for that case even without the knowledge of ashu..she was superb..
 
yeah I guess I wanted that nidhi ke redemption me koi kasar nahi rahe..
 
@ bold - u really thought I will introduce a new complication in the last chapter?
i liked that ashu didn't go to say bye to sameer..nidhi ko uska gift jo dena tha..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
 
yeah he didn't go to drop Sameer to airport. instead went to meet him for a while after leaving office.
 
liked sameer mallika convo..i agree with both..they wanted to know each other better before any decision.
 
Actually the way I handled that entire convo, I just loved it.. but wasn't sure how many of u would even understand - it requires reading between the lines.
 
loved that scene when nidhi didn't let ashu to concentrate on his work..πŸ˜‰ye hai hamaari asli nidhi...
 
uh huhπŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
that scene when nidhi switched on the light..i was πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
 
I am glad I kind of gave u a shock - a sweet shock, haina?πŸ˜†
 
i really liked ashu when he convinced nidhi to argue the case...this is the best idea for nidhi's confidence..
 
Yeah, u caught it..πŸ‘πŸ‘ it was to boost her confidence.
 
liked that word K I S S..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
Poonam, don't say it before any guy at least not until u want to be .. u know?πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
 
liked every scene when ashu prepared nidhi for the case..
 
Thank you.
 
finally nidhi won the case..
 
uh huh
 
last scene was fantastic...what a surprise..HM in Switzerland..
 
Thank you so much.
 
i loved ur FF so so much..take a bow...πŸ˜ƒ

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Thank you for loving me and my ff so much dear. I take a deep bow..

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