Hmm here goes the review for the whole FF...😉
Well I must say the story was gripping...in fact very good...The characters were also realistic whether Ashu, Armaan, Mallika, Baba, Anji or Nidhi...I could actually connect with all of them...😛
Frankly I enjoyed the law background also may be in every FF they are doctors so it actually had different flavors with a certain amount of spices...and trust me it was VERY GOOD...😆😳
Anyways coming back to FF... You portrayed Armaan, Anji, Mallika and Baba really well...realistic characters and no OTT drama...which was very nice... they all were just prefect...!! 😃
About Ashutosh, though I am officially a AD so I was actually drooling over your Ashutosh too but towards the end I couldn't connect with him... I agree he was suspicious after he saw Nidhi with Jagan's assistant but he could have confronted her or investigated properly after all he was mature, it was about his wife, his love and besides everything he was a lawyer...I guess this was the demand of your story so no issues... But you asked for a frank review and here I am...😛
About Nidhi, very frankly in this FF I was looking forward to Nidhi more than Ashu coz I found Nidhi more realistic and blunt...In fact with each and every chapter I use to love her more than Ashu and hate her more than before coz she used Ashu...But I got disappointed with this character also...A sudden change was not acceptable...Doesn't matter how much we want to change for someone we CAN'T change in just one day... There was 360 degree U turn in Nidhi's character...Besides I personally feel if you want to change change yourself not your personality... Just wearing sarees, having tea and making food doesn't mean you have changed for good... I would have loved her if the change was steady and slow... 😊
May be you were in hurry to wind up the chapters so no issues...But still besides these two main character I loved the story...
I actually used to wait till 1 or 2 am for you updates and must say it was worth it... One more thing do I need to tell you again that you are a fab writer please continue writing ... you have something special in you that you write and I imagine😉... I really donno if I am hallucinating 😆 but serious you are too good...So please keep writing...
And I am really very sorry if I hurt you 😔...SORRY !!
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