Shirley all I know is that..this is your story..so none other than you can decide for it..its your right...so no need to say thanks..i just tried to help you in my own way..
and as far as I see it..this story was never intended to show that kind of romance..you made it clear at the start only..and the way you have handled it is worth a praise..already told you that your story intellectually stimulated me..like none other..and the credit goes to you only none else..
the base line of this story is pretty different and is loved that way only..and the beauty of this FF lies in this different approach only..no need to change that..their are plenty of other works here which have delved into that scenario and have been equally appreciated..
get one thing..i appreciate you for your individuality..never lose this charm that shines within you..
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