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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 60)

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Posted: 29 October 2013 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
nice update
loved it

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

Hopefully today my net won't betray me
Let's see shall we

Thanks for the review!Big smile

Poor maan I so feel for him

Well not as much as I feel for his geet though

Oh ho so she is back in your dreams

Wearing your mother given saree for her bahu wow

And this was bound to happen which is why dev gave geet this job

Exactly! Dev ki mehnat aise hi thodi na waste jaayegi!Wink

He wanted those feelings of love for geet that you have buried in you to be alive again

And you did just that

Well your heart for sure did

But of course this wont be enough for maan to be with his love again

Ufff at least in your dreams don't run from her itna toh aap karr sakte hain ji


Ek saal hoy a 50 saal pyaar toh aap unhi se hi karenge and you know it

You can try to keep her away but the truth is you cant really succeed dude

Ufff maan you feelings aren't some clients or employees that they will listen to your MSKness


They will do what they think is right

And for your feelings and heart she is the one naa

Waise jitni bhi koshish karr lijiye but you cant let those feelings for her stay buried some deep corner of your heart

They are bound to come out when you see her feel her and that's what happened


Ufff abb pyaar toh aisa hi hota hai you cant supress it even if you wanna so sorry maan or is it MSK you cant win against it and you know so

Well there he wanted to send her further from him but instead she seems to be getting closer

What a timing my man now that's something

Big smile

Maan kya baat hai aap ke toh bhaag hi khul gaye

But of course you wont let that get to you that easily

After all you are in your DD mode naa

What a scene that is and after so long too haiyye main toh flat ho gayi ji

Achcha laga last line padhke!Big smile

  Sorry dear this just isn't in your control to be away from him

You have been too much apart from him but not anymore

Arrey inhe apne crush ki padi hai aur wahan maan ka control aur mushkil hota jaa raha hai


Kya situation paida kari ji aap ne ji

Dude snap out of it chaddo why bother


That's the second time mate and in the office too

Sheesh adi pinky and tasha  and full staff oh ho bas inhi logon ki kami thi


Wow he was too lost in her and she had to do something to bring him out of his stupor for sure

Don't you glare at her mate she tried to bring you back to reality but you were too lost in her

And here comes his MSK mode for sure

Haila khud toh dekh kar nahin chal rahe the aur inhe blame karr rahe hai

Bechari geet inki toh kismet hi kharab hai ji

So true!

Oh ho don't come to such conclusions dear but of well now that you have that's okay too

Aap ki aankhon ko kya hua who bhi toh button jaisi ho jaati hai with her close by


Man that was bound to happen

If it didn't well then it wouldn't be MSK naa

But that's a start anyway hai naa so lets continue with that

So she don't want to be near him are ya sure sweetie

When we all know that isn't the case but further from it right

Sorry babaji cant listen to that pray of yours


 Ahhh so here cometh ASR yeh toh MSK se bhi do kadam aage hain

Ufff him and his anger issues


Poor khushi yaar

She is the one who is faring out the worst and all because of one mistake of breaking his heart

After all according to arnie only he is heart broken while khushi is being so happy and living her life peacefully

I can feel the sarcasm here!Big smile

As if its even worse for her not only has she lost her love to her sister but she cant see her sister with that love but she has to for now

Great so this means he is gonna be a rakshash again aint of course what else to expect

So true!

Just once I wanted for him to think of it from her pov

He will! One day!Smile

But guess that wont be happening

So I hope she makes him pay for all this he is doing now when all is well

That will teach him few things for sure

He will pay!

Arrey yeh bua bhi naa give him more chances to taunt khushi

But then she don't know naa

No wonder khushi was willing to go and get the Prasad to avoid him

But guess her luck is not going well for now

Don't make it worse I keep saying it but he wont listen

When did ASR listen to anybody but himself?

Rakshash laad governor

Now how is he gonna taunt her with buaji absence

I would like to see him try it in front of other agar itni hi himmat hai inme

But if he did then this situation wouldn't have come either would it

So true! Maan toh ise dho daalta! Aur phir Anjali ise kachcha chabaa deti! Phir Naani aur Buai bhi toh peeche nahi rahenge! Aur phir Geet ka keher bhi barsega! in short, agar Arnav ne Khushi ko sabke saamne taunt kiya toh uski full on band baji!

You know what arnav you are asking for your own down fall


Khushi don't just don't give a damn to him please

He is not worth it at the moment if at all


Dammit arnav even I have doubts if you ever loved

What kind of love is this that takes satisfaction I making her cry

He just cant be understood by me but then he was betrayed or so he thinks

This is how he behaves when he thinks he has been betrayed. By the way, dont ask me how he thinks. I just write what I saw in the show! If you want to understand him, better contact the writers of the show!LOLWink

At least just once as his right of being her love he should have asked why she did what she did

But no why would he after all he is ASR aint he sad man real sad that attitude of his is gonna cause him to loose a lot one hopes

So true!

What is dev up to now with the radio I wonder something good for sure

You are so right!

Uff inka pyaar bhi ajeeb hai naa

But then love is strange in itself for sure

So true!

He wants to be sure that geet goes off safely but cant go fight for that love

Yaar sach mein kaise premi mile hain hamari geet aur khushi ko

LOLSo true!

Well phela pyaar hai aur uppar se they both are useless when it comes to heart emotions and stuff

And the only ones who made them feel those things aren't with them so this right

I know who is maan fooling except himself man

As if it is hard to forget your first love whom you still love and will continue to love no matter what

Dev you are right perfect song for maneet that is one of my favs

Mine too!

 Naino se nain ladh rahe hai kya baat hai ji

Kab tak aap apni nazar inse churayenge maan

Well yes she doesn't know now but that wont be for too long either

Aap unhe dekhein ya naa you still cant keep your love for her buried for too long

So true!

Haiyye FB of all their moments wow that was perfect there

Dude you haven't really lost her but how to tell him this right

Ahhh geet if you knew why he is like this well we wouldn't be in this situation but what to do this too was necessary naa

Kya Karen bechare ne apna phela pyaar khoya well not really but he thinks so naa

As if he can forget any memories related to her ever and with her in front of his eyes at KC even more harder not that we would want him to forget her love ever


Pyaar kabhi pooch karr nahin hota hai maan bas ho jaata hai

And you cant stop yourself from falling no matter what

Kab tak yeh appne nazrein inse chura paayenge even I wanna know

Pata nahi! Tab tak kitne Chapters lagenge calculate nahi kiya!Wink

He was very far off in that land where just the two of you were there geet

 Hmmm so her ride is her some relief for maan or not

Jaate jaate she gave him one last look waah kya baat hai

No don't buaji these songs only bring them sadness but she  don't know dammit it why didn't anyone know that was the major headache in their love story


Very few knew of their love compared to maneet

Oh dear this is such sad times for them all

Well you had the right to say something to her once before you started hating her but you didn't do that either

That sure is true his heart is with her while the same is true for her

But he is hell bent on breaking that heart dear

Actually even she wants to know why she met you not just you arnav


Well you are far from him only because of your one decision but as if you had any choice right

 But I wish you had told him just once why you did what you did knowing he wont ask

Thought he also never gave you that chance

Because arnav love cant be gotten rid of that easily I just said same for maan

 But the two of you think that love can be gotten rid of just because you don't have your lover with you sorry but it don't work like that ever

So true! Dono ke dono ullu ke patthe!LOL

Yes if only he did but he didn't and look what happened right well what to do this love lark was new for him so this was bound to happen

 If both maan and arnav didn't do what they are doing that would be so not them naa

So true!

Yes it's a good song but not if you are heart broken then it just makes that heart break even worse and makes you cry too

And so they meet again but of course we still have so much heart break about what to do

So all went in their own groups minus few who aren't here

Well guess annie and jun shall be back in time for the weddings to right partners hai naa

Geet yaar tere veere ko sirf sad songs hi kyun sujhte hain

Veere ko nahi soojhte! Aakash ka bas chale toh woh sirf romantic gaane gaaye! But it is Geet who is requesting such sad songs!

Jabki inko inka pyaar mil chukka hai

Dude when you know you cant win against your little sis why do you even bother


Lo this time it wasn't aki who sang the sad song but geet herself suggested it why yaar

As it is there is enough sadness with her adding more to it

And isn't that the more reason not to listen to such sad songs but guess it goes with the modd of the lovers so why bother

Hmmm one side its arnav accusing his love and the other maan asking her why she did this to him

Oh ho these sad songs sure are making them think of their bhooli bisri yaadien

So true!

Wow it sure again is appropriate for these four lovers

Man I feel so bad for these lovers but what to do no one can win against their fate or destiny but the same will give them their love back

Great there she is enjoying the song the only one but then only because she don't remember well that is the biggest headache naa

Wasn't it ironic that Geet is the only one enjoying it while rest of the three were feeling so sad?

Tears and only tears for them all but not for too long I know so this sad phase shall be over soon we just gotta be patient shame that is one thing I never can be

I know! Even I am impatient to write the rest of the parts but kya karein! My hand cannot type so much so fast!Cry

Aki is the only one who can smile as he is the only one out of these who got his love naa

So true!

Ahh his brother and his wife they are still routing for maneet love unlike his rest of family and also helping him win his love back too thank god for small mercies

Aren't Dev and NT awesome?Wink

Well she left you only to come back again to you only mate

Geet he is in pain as his love doesn't remember him and its you that love

What to do love can be bliss but it can also be painful very much so

So true!

Maan it seems nothing is going in your favour right

Well when once again is destiny bringing your love back to you don't go back from it mate

Haw not again yaar

Ab iss mein iss bechari ka kya kasoor that you didn't fight for her love

That you cant forget her love but she forgot you

Am sure had she a choice she wouldn't have forgotten

Dekh lijiye gaa we so want you to do what you are threatening

Tabhi toh mazaa ayegaa naa kyun

Don't spare him next time my dear

You show him hell from you and make him realise that you aint no pushover

Dont worry! Geet Maan ki bolti band jaroor karegi!

Aye haiyye so it was dev plan huh

I swear he is even better than rest well experience naa so he can help his bro get his love back

Last time also they fell in love slowly slowly due to their fights only and this time too naa

Bas beta dev don't get caught by maan or you are so doomed for sure

No! Dev wont get caught!

Well anj she knew that already

I knew it he would do this again but why does it matter you hate khushi so why make her jealous

But of course he will do it wont he

Dude she is easy but not that much

And you are underestimating her too she has a lot of endurance for such things

Finally she aint letting it show how much she is hurt by his remarks

It had to be done or he would break her too much and then all could be ruined naa

I knew it she wont show her hurt when he mentioned la and red sarees sorry but she is made of sterner stuff

Exactly! Our Khushi is stronger!

So are we gonna just look at her standing there or give her a lift too mate

Well how can he stop worrying for his love no matter what happened

But of course this time geet wont make it easy for him either

Kya excuse diya hai inhone well sach toh bol nahin sakte toh yehi sahi


He shall never listen to you about this no matter what you say to him

Oh ho maan we waved back to her good that's some progress for now

He will be out of his sadness once you are back with him dear

And of course our maan is good looking

So this is how her love started for him again


And that will help only further to him only

Haiyye kya baat hai kya solid chapter tha boss

And luckily this time my stupid net didn't let me down wooohoo

So lets see what else is in store for maneet and arhi

What ever it is am sure it will be rocking and fun too

Cheers for pm

Thanks for the review! And I hope my story keeps you hooked in future too!Wink

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 02 November 2013 at 12:37pm
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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolflora

arnav acting cruel now make him learn the truth fast
i like this dev at least he is trying to make them together
the big twist i know arnav will learn the truth and geet will also fall in love with maan and may confess too

You are awesome! How did you guess it so perfectly? You understood my plot ek dum perfectly. But I bet you even you wont be able to predict what will happen next after Chapter 64!Wink

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ashavi

well i think Maan was a much better and sincere lover than Arnav...
atleast Maan always thinks abt Geet's safety and happiness even if he s in this much pain...
loved their office encounters...poor Maan s trying his best nt 2 show his true emotions 2 Geet...
love Dev for his efforts 2 bring Maaneet 2gether...
well i pity Khushi for falling for a man lik Arnav who never trusted her and s nw thinking so low abt her and seeking pleasure by hurting her...
if Khushi forgives him soon then i will kill Khushi with by bear hands as Arnav s hurting her 2ooo much vtout trying 2 find actual reason of her act...all he can and will think s only abt himself...selfish guy...don't pity him even a bit...
waiting for Geet 2 fall for Maan...
awesome update...
update soon...
Dont worry! Arnav will suffer! Khushi might forgive him but she will make him regret his decisions! Even after misunderstanding ends, Arnav wont be able to get his Khushi easily! That is for sure! You just wait and enjoy!

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by archa2810

they could have talked n cleared everything... why don't arshi just talk for once
If Arnav and Khushi were that smart that they would actually talk to each other then IPKKND would have ended ages ago instead of last year!Wink

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 58
excellent part dear...
enjoyed it so much...

Thank you!
And thanks for the review!

Maan Geet
poor Maan now itself hes losing his patience and heart...
abhi tho sirf shuruwaat hai...
aur uski yeh haalat...
bechara Maan...

You are so right! Yeh toh shuruvaat hai! Maan ki toh aur band bajegi! Geet will make him reach his breaking point. LOL

the dreams are back full fledged...
all the more to torment Maan and tease him...
and also make him always on his toes or say think about Geet in mind or heart...
yippee second clash...
very good every day they are gonna collide...
day 2 and second clash...
Maan is drowned in his Soni and Geet has a crush on Maan?
that soon?

Geet has a crush on Maan coz somewhere her heart still loves Maan. She thinks of it as crush but it is actually the love she has for Maan in her heart. But she does not know about it and thinks of it as a crush!Big smile

then it wont take time for her to fall for him...
its gonna happen soon...

I am making Geet fall in love with Maan in 15 days. On the 15th day that is Chapter 64, there will be a twist which will bring the story back to main track.

Maan babu what are u gonna do now?
if he gets to know Geet is having a crush on him then he himself will take the matters in his hands and maker her fall for him without any disturbance...

Errr... no! If Maan comes to know that Geet has a crush on him he will distance himself from her more. If you remember in the show, Maan first was hating the fact that he loved Geet coz accepting his love means allowing Geet to break through the defensive wall he had built around himself. Here also Maan will do the same. He will hide himself behind his walls. Already he is doing that. That is why he gets angry when his feelings show up in front of Geet coz that means his wall is breaking and he does not like that!

but that will be too easy and Geet will try to kick the feeling out...
sigh so have to go by Maan's way...
arey people why are u all disturbing the love birds?
oh ho the khadoos wont change...
is it only HER fault Maan dear?
Geet is back to her sherni avatar...
door rakho?
woh tho nahi hone waali dear...

Exactly! Maan kuch bhi karle Geet will always be around him, whether it is due to fate or Dev's plan.Wink

Dev is orchestrating the way to romance or at least think about the past for Maan...
Maan is protecting her so much but still stays away...

I know!

so Aakash is her driver for pick up and drop...
good they all are very protective of Geet...

They are protective coz last year's events have left an impact on the family! 

Geet doesnt know its all her Dusht Danav's thinking and doings...
the flashbacks were refreshing dear...

Thank you! Had to read all my old chapters to get those scenes right!Embarrassed

poor Maan...
hes in so much pain after thinking them...
Geet is really a clear observer...
shes seeing through things more better than anyone be it for her life and love or her bro Arnav...

Exactly! I made her so observant for a reason! Later on it will help her with Maan and also she will play a key role in getting Arhi together! You just wait and watch errr... read!Big smile

Dev is doing everything subtly and hope Maan doesnt realize it all soon...

No no! Maan will not come to know about Dev's planning!Wink

Geet's chatty nature is making Maan to think of his Soni...
well well well Maan's dil ki baat baahar aana shuru kardi...
well his words are gonna make Geet ponder over them...

Yes! Geet will keep on pondering and that will lead to her investigating about Soni! Which will lead to her falling for Maan!Big smile

her 'maine kya kiya' was cute and funny...
thats the spirit Geet baby go for it...
fight with him, argue with him, make him break the wall and resolution to stay...

Dont worry! Geet will break his walls!

wow Maan is always present to safeguard his Geet...
glad he saw her there and stayed back...
well instances like this are making her think more on Maan and get to know his heart inside...
hes a sweetheart Geet baby...
and u will fall in love with him so much and deep...

So true!

Arnav Khushi
oh ho Anjali is sending this idiot to khushi?
Khushi beware the stupid fool gadha is coming to ur place...

Idiot???? Stupid???? Fool???? Gadha???? Wow! Yaar! So many names for one guy!ROFL Really funny!

OMG that was seriously below the belt Arnav...
how the hell could he talk to her like that?
is this his real feelings for her?
and his faith on her character?
did he ever love her?
hurt her but is this the way?

Dont worry! Khushi wont leave him next time! And one day Arnav will regret his words! Phir aayega asli mazaa!

he wil never be able to take back the words and the marks they have left on Khushi's heart...
this is the second time hes doing this...
so double punishment...
let him grovel the most and Khushi think on forgiving him...
but she shouldnt forgive him easily...
i wanted to sympathize Arnav but i think he doesnt deserve that at all...
poor Khushi...

Go ahead! Dont sympathize! I felt the same way when I was watching the serial! That is why I have kept his character reactions similar to hhow he reacted in the show! I did not want anyone to sympathize with him. So that when he grovels for Khushi, no one will hate Khushi for rejecting his apology!Big smile

sigh Buaji kyun namak chida rahi hai aap?
poor Khushi...
seriously Arnav are u blind to NOT see her pain and her sad face?
i cant believe this guy...
yes she betrayed u but couldnt he see her pain?
if he cant then Khushi is an awesome actress...
she hid her pain so well but whats the use?
Arnav u dont deserve to claim u ever loved Khushi...
damn no...

Arnav cannot see her pain coz he is lost in his own pain. It is human nature to ignore other's pain when you are suffering. It is human nature to think that their suffering has highest form of pain. And when did ASR show compassion for other's feelings? Dont worry! Uska bhi waqt aayega!

oh ho again the rude cruel ASR is back...
why is Khushi getting stuck with him always like this...
is he trying to make her jealous?
well she has crossed all those long back Arnav fool...
she has given up on her life and heart...
well take that back u idiot...
if he is a tit bit smart he will see through this one instance and think about why Khushi has changed like this...
but i dont have much hopes on this idiot until its too late...

You are so right! By the time, he comes to know there will be only 15 days left for the wedding.Cry Phir aayega asli mazaa!LOL

Khuranas and Raizadas
oh its a family meeting and enjoying the dinner and time...
the groups are so nice...
the baby is the highlight here...

Happy that you liked it!

oh ho Geet is back to her saddy songs...
sigh Geet baby come out of that...
OMG her explanation was so emotional...
cant blame her...
but come on sweety u have this family in fact families...
and Maan do something to this...

Dont worry! Maan will make her sing love songs soon! O re Chabeela! Sajeela! Saawan beeta jaaye! Thats all I will say!Big smile

hmm Aakash's songs are making the lover boys to remember their past love and make them go through pain...
am not gonna comment on Arnav unless he changes his ways to vent his anger on Khushi...
insensitive self-centred foolish jerk...
Geet once again saw Maan's pain...

Arnav will get his comeuppance!Big smile

loved it so much dear...
Maan and Geet's scenes are so nice...
but cant say that for Arnav and Khushi...
Arnav is being really an imbecile...
hope he realizes that soon...
oh 2 days happenings...
thats gonna be interesting...
slow and awesomely taking their love stories...
so till 64th chapter Khushi is gonna be in pain and Arnav is gonna break her?
Arnav has to get double punishment and it will increase if he hurts her in THIS way...
if its not possible to make that here write an OS to make him regret, repent and grovel...
hope this FF reaches 100 parts...
cont soon dear...
Dont worry! Pretty soon Khushi will fight back against Arnav! And Arnav will suffer! And no need for OS, Arnav will regret, repent and grovel in this FF itself!Wink
And this FF will not reach 100 parts coz if that happened I would get bored by then! But then, the one shots I was planning based on wish list if I add those one shots with this FF, it might reach 100 parts!Wink Oh well! Let this story reach Chapter 64, then we will think about the future!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 02 November 2013 at 11:42am

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Posted: 31 October 2013 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mina420

Hi Kalpana Smile,
 what nice updates you gave us. Geet is back and being thrown back into Maan's liveLOL. Maan might not know but he is very lucky to have such a caring brother. To be honest, I am happy to see Dev playing such an important role now, while he was mostly side character in the earlier bits.
And more over, Geet is affeted by Maan's presenseEmbarrassed. She might not remember him in future but what will Maan do once he realises that Geet is in love with himEmbarrassed? Will he accept her as Geet or will he feel that she is not his SoniOuch??? So many possibilitiesGeek.

As for Arnav and Khushi... what to say about them? Khushi sacrificed her love for her familyCry but does she really think that Arnav and Lavanya will be happy with this arrangementDead? And our hot headed Arnav, dear me. He will be a lot more hurt once he finds out that Khushi did not betray him but was under a misconception just as himShocked. What I wonder is why Anjali hasn't noticed anything yetDead, I thought Arnav's siblings/family would have noticed something till now. Plus, didn't you indicate that Lavanya was hiding something in the previous partsConfused? What about her?
Eager to read more, it provides me with a much needed break from my hectic schedule...
All the best and thanks for the pms

Dear Mina,

     Really glad to read your review after so many days! And yes, you are so right! Maan is one lucky fellow in my story to have such a loving family! You know I never thought of giving Dev so much important role coz I thought most people hated Dev so had planned to keep him in side roles only. But recently Dev has been appreciated so much that I decided to give Dev more stronger role here. Really happy to know that my decision is appreciated!Big smile

     Oh my! You almost discovered my plot for Maaneet when you asked about Maan accepting Geet or not! But I wont tell you which guess of yours is right. But you will enjoy the twist in Chapter 64! That's a guarantee!Wink

    And about Khushi, Khushi does not know whether Arnav and Lavanya will be happy or not! She just hopes that both will move on in their life. I know! Kind of foolish! But that is our Khushi! And yes, Arnav will get a Jhatka in Chapter 64 when he comes to know the reason behind his engagement to Lavanya!

    And as far as Anjali is concerned, I have kept her deliberately Obtuse. I dont want anyone to notice Arnav's haalat except Geet. By the way, in the serial also Anjali never noticed anything. So I have kept her just the way she was in the show. And the main reason the family does not know is that Arnav is really good at hiding his emotions. Remember, even in the show, no one knew that he did not love Khushi and married her just because of misunderstanding. So the family not noticing it here is not that surprising.Wink

   About La, she is not hiding anything. Whatever she was hiding I have showed it away. She was just hiding her broken heart. Thats all! And that is why, she said yes to Arnav's proposal. She was so broken hearted that she said yes to the first proposal that came. That is all her story is! But once, NK arrives her heart will mend too!Big smile

     Ok! Have I cleared all your doubts? If no, then do ask! I love answering questions when it comes to DFL coz it makes me feel like I am a famous writer or something.EmbarrassedLOL

All the best for your studies and enjoy the Diwali,

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 02 November 2013 at 10:54am

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Place - Shantivan


     It was around 10 in the morning, Arnav noted as he absentmindedly checked the time while adjusting his tie. For last few days he had been working from home but today one of his important clients were coming to office and hence he decided to personally go and meet them. As he sat down to tie his shoelace, he heard giggling coming around from the poolside. Arnav stiffened. Yeh kaun hai? He got up in confusion and wandered to the poolside. His eyes widened as he noticed Khushi playing with Kanha by the poolside. He blinked twice but the vision was still in front of him. But the moment he realized that Khushi was here, anger surged through his veins. Kyun? Dammit! Kyun? Kyun aajaati ho baar baar mere saamne mujhe apne dhoke ki yaad dilaane ke liye! He opened the poolside door harshly and Khushi looked up. Her eyes widened. Yeh yahaan? Anjaliji toh keh rahi thi ki aaj yeh Office jaayenge! Isliye toh hum aaye yahaan pe! Warna hum toh inke yahaan hote hue is ghar mein kadam bhi na rakhein! Hey Devi Maiyya! Ab hum kya karein? Raksha karna humaari! She gulped and turned her attention towards Kanha.




Place - Aakash's Room in Shantivan


     Aakash fiddled with his media player on his computer. Where is that song? He wondered. Today morning a song started in his head and started haunting him and he wanted to play it so that he can get the song out of his head. Agar is meeting mein main gaane ke baare mein sochunga toh Bhai mujhe maar daalenge! Behetar hoga ki main yeh gaana yahi sun loon aur is gaane ko dimaag se nikaale dun! He nodded and searched through his computer for the song.




Place - Poolside


    Arnav walked towards the poolside all the while glaring at Khushi. As he neared her, Anjali came in to pick up Kanha. Arnav stopped at her entry. Anjali and Khushi chatted for a while and Arnav glared at Khushi as she let out a laugh. Yahaan mera dil jal raha hai aur tum has rahi ho! He did not notice when his hand grabbed a glass kept on a table nearby. As he watched Khushi giggle and laugh, his hand gripped the glass tighter and tighter and soon the glass broke.


  Khushi and Anjali looked up at the noise of glass breaking and Anjali shouted, "Chote!" As she walked towards her Chote, she did not notice the broken glass on the floor. Khushi stopped her just when she was about to step on a glass piece. She pulled Anjali away while Arnav stood there staring at his hand in shock. "Aap jaayiye aur Kanha ko khaana khilaayiye! Hum Arnavji ko dekhte hain!", Khushi ordered Anjali in a concern filled voice but Anjali hesitated. Khushi gave her a reassuring smile and Anjali walked away with Kanha but not without giving Arnav a teary glance. Khushi turned towards Arnav and walked towards him all the while skirting around the glass pieces on the floor. She had sent Anjali away because she knew that Anjali would have gone towards Arnav without caring that she might get hurt too. As Khushi reached Arnav, she noticed Arnav staring at his hand. She softly grabbed his hand and he looked up with a glare. His hard gaze softened when he noticed the tears welling up in her eyes. She quietly dragged him to his room and made him sit on the bed. He stared at her as she pulled out the medicine box nearby and started cleaning the wound. Arnav felt his heart fill with love as she did the cleaning. Looking at her tear filled eyes and concerned expression; he did not have the heart to taunt her today. As he stared at her, she applied medicine in his hand and then started dressing it.




Place - Aakash's Room


   Aakash smiled as he finally found the right song. Perfect! He pressed the play button and sat down to enjoy the song.




Place - Arnav's Room




As the notes of Violin floated into the room, Khushi concentrated on bandaging Arnav's hand.


Do Pal Ruka

Khaabon Ka Carvaan

Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


Arnav stared at Khushi as she bandaged his hand.


Do Pal Ki Thi

Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan

Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


Khushi felt Arnav's eyes on her but she concentrated on the hand she was working on.


Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


As the bandaging was done, Khushi got up to walk away when Arnav caught her hand in his. Veena was being played in the song when Khushi turned to look at Arnav; her expression showing vulnerability at the thought of getting taunted by him. Notes of Violin wafted through the window as Arnav got up from the bed still holding her hand.


Tum The Ke Thi Koi Ujli Kiran

Tum The Ya Koi Kali Muskaayi Thi


Arnav slowly pulled her close and she complied like a puppet.


Tum The Ya Sapno Ka Tha Saawan

Tum The Ke Khushiyon Ki Ghata Chhaayi Thi


He slowly cupped her face with his uninjured hand.


Tum The Ke Tha Koi Phool Khila


She closed her eyes at his touch only realizing now how much she missed his touch.


Tum The Ya Mila Tha Mujhe Naya Jahaan


He placed a kiss on her forehead.


Do Pal Ruka

Khaabon Ka Carvaan

Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


She opened her eyes and stared at his love filled eyes.


Do Pal Ki Thi

Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan

Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


He gave her a sad smile.


Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


She looked down confused by his sudden care for her.


Aa... aa...




He nudged her with his hand to look up as again notes of violin filled through the air.


Tum The Ya Khushboo Hawaaon Mein Thi

Tum The Ya Rang Saari Dishaaon Mein The


Her eyes filled with tears at his loving expression.


Tum The Ya Roshni Raahon Mein Thi

Tum The Ya Geet Goonje Fizaaon Mein The


He wiped her tears away and shook his head slowly signaling her to not cry.


Tum The Mile Ya Mili Thi Manzilein


He gave her a smile and she could not resist herself.


Tum The Ke Tha Jaadu Bhara Koi Samaa


She got on her tip-toes and hugged him tightly.


Do Pal Ruka

Khaabon Ka Carvaan

Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


He hugged her back, his hold getting as tight as possible.


Do Pal Ki Thi

Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan

Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


She shed tears of joy at finally being his arms.


Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


He felt as if everything was right as long as she was with him.


Aur Phir Chal Diye

Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan


She felt as if she was home.


Suddenly, they heard Anjali calling for her Chote. Now that her Kanha had been fed, she was more worried about Arnav and came to see him. Khushi realized in what position they were and pulled away from Arnav harshly. She looked at Arnav in horror and ran away. Arnav felt as if his life was leaving him. "Khushi", he hollered and she stopped at the door. "Ab aap pe haq humaara nahi, kisi aur ka hai!", saying this Khushi ran away. Arnav stood there aghast at her behavior. He felt his anger bubble while confusion clouded his mind. What the! What was that? Ek taraf pyaar se haath pe marham lagaati ho aur doosri taraf dil jalaati ho! Why is she confusing me? Jab dressing kar rahi thi ek pal ke liye laga ki woh bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai, par phir ab kyun aisa kahaa? What the! Ek taraf mera dil todti hai aur doosri taraf pyaar bhi jataati hai! Kya hai yeh sab Khushi? Tum chaahti kya ho? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha! Arnav sat down on the bed holding his head in his hands. I fell like you still love me then why? Why did you break my heart? I am so confused Dammit! Mera dimaag kehta hai that I should hate you for what you did to me but my heart... My heart says something else! Damn you Khushi! Damn you for getting me confused! Damn!




Place - Khurana Constructions


    Maan waited in his cabin for Dev to arrive. It was lunch time and both of them were supposed to have lunch together. As the cabin opened Maan got up to blast Dev for coming late. They had a meeting in next hour and his brother was dilly dallying around instead of coming for lunch. But his words dried in his mouth when instead of Dev, Geet came in. Maan's eyes widened. The whole morning he had done everything to avoid Geet but it seems his good luck had stopped right now. Maan sat on his chair and browsed through the papers unwilling to even look at Geet. Geet frowned at this. Hey Babaji! Ignore toh aise kar rahe hain jaise main unki koi ex-girlfriend hoon! She glared at him. Right behind Geet, Dev entered. Dev ushered Geet in when he noticed Geet standing by the door. "Arre Geet! Andar aao! Andar aao! Ise apna hi cabin samjho!", Dev piped up. Maan looked up at these words and glared at Dev for uttering them. Dev gulped and gave him a smile, "Bro! Woh Geet ki lunch partner Pinky aayi nahi! Toh bechari canteen mein akeli baithi thi! Toh maine kahaa mere saath chalo aur lunch karo! Mere best friend ki behen ko aise akela thodi chod sakta hun!" Geet gave Dev a smile at those words while Maan glared at him for even thinking about such ideas. Geet noticed Maan's glare. Itni nafrat mujhse! Ab maine kya bigaada hai inka Babaji! Sach mein Babaji, duniya ka sabse bade khadoos hain mere boss! She thought this as she recalled the movie she had seen with her Veere when she was small and had come to Shantivan to visit the Raizadas. The movie was called The Grinch Who Stole The Christmas. She glared at Maan. Nahi! Khadoos nahi Mr. Grinch hai! Woh Grinch jisne Christmas churaaya tha! Aur yeh hain jo KC ke employees ki hasi churaate hain! She made a face and sat down in the chair in front of Maan's desk with Dev sitting beside her.


     For a moment there was no talking as waiter came from the nearby Hotel serving them with food while Geet opened her small tiffin carrier which Anjali had lovingly packed for her. As they started to eat, Dev noticed the tiffin and smiled, "Yeh Anjali Di ne pack kiya hoga na?" Geet smiled at him and nodded. Dev started speaking, "Mujhe ab bhi yaad hai. Jab hum log School mein the tab aisi hi ek carrier Aakash leke aata tha school ko!" Geet giggled, "Yeh wahi hai! Veere toh ghar jaate hain khaana ke liye aaj kal! Toh AD ne yeh mujhe de di!" Dev nodded while Maan glared at Dev for making Geet talk. He also felt jealous when Geet gave a wide smile to Dev. His glare soon started alternating between Geet and Dev as he continued eating. Dev and Geet both ignored his glare and Dev piped up, "Waise lunch mein kya hai? Di ne kya banaaya?" Dev hoped it was parathas knowing very well that his Geet Bhabhi loved eating parathas. Hence, it was a surprised Maan and Dev looking at Geet when Geet replied, "Pasta, my favorite dish!" Maan's heart skipped a beat as he realized that Geet was calling his favorite dish as her favorite too. Dev looked at Maan in surprise and then back at Geet. Unable to stop himself, Maan spoke up, "But tumhaari favorite toh parathe hain, with lassi!" Geet finally deigned Maan with a smile, "Haan! Accident ke pehle toh thi par pata nahi kyun accident ke baad se mujhe pasta pasand aane lag gaya!" As she continued eating, Dev smirked into his food while Maan was lost in his thoughts. Soon, the lunch ended and Geet wandered away with her tiffin carrier. Dev finally gave his opinion to Maan. He smirked at Maan and mumbled, "Aap toh keh rahe the ki Geet aapko bhool chuki hai toh aaj kya tha Bro?" Maan looked at Dev in shock as he understood what Dev was implying. Dev gave him a smug smile, "Face it Bro! Geet bhale hi aapko bhool chuki ho lekin aap uske zehen mein itne utar chuke ho ki bhoolkar bhi woh aapko khud se alag nahi kar paayi!" Dev left the cabin leaving behind a confused and shocked Maan.


   Meanwhile, Geet who was about to enter Sasha's cabin stopped for a moment. Lekin Mr. Khurana ko kaise pata ki I like Parathas. She frowned for a moment then shrugged. AD ne bataaya hoga! And she entered the room forgetting the lunch discussion not knowing that some cabins away a certain Mr. Khurana was thinking about her.




Place - Khurana Constructions


     It was a beautiful Saturday, Geet thought as she got down the stairs in hurry. She did not see Maan at all the whole day and had successfully avoided her Khadoos Boss. But now she wanted to hurry home because she was already working late in the Office. Infact, she was sure that except her, Sasha, Maan and Dev no one was there in the Office right now. But that was not why she getting down the stairs in a hurry. She wanted to reach home faster today as she and Anjali were planning to go on shopping and it was already 7 in the evening. The lift was under repair and hence, she was using the stairs to get down. She did not notice that almost ten minutes after her departure Maan had followed her foot steps and decided to go home.


     As Geet got down the stairs in a hurry, she lost her balance and slipped few steps. She rolled down the stairs and fell flat on her back. For a moment, she stayed like that unable to comprehend what had happened exactly. After few seconds, she realized that she had fallen down the stairs because of her own stupidity. She slowly tried to sit up and realized that she was alright except for few scraps on her body and breathlessness due to fear. She took a deep breath trying to calm her running heart when suddenly she heard someone shout her name, "GEET!" She looked up and there stood Maan Singh Khurana on the top of the stairs fear and shock written on his face as he stared at her. As soon as he noticed her looking up at him, he got down the stairs. The moment he reached her, he crouched down and hugged her tightly. Geet's eyes widened in shock. Yeh Mr. Khurana ko kya hua? He pulled away and checked her face looking for some injury. Then he gave her whole body a glance and then he cupped her face, "Are you alright? Tum theek toh ho? Jab maine tumhein neeche girte dekha toh main bahut dar gaya tha! Tum theek toh hona Soni? Tumhein chot nahi lagi na Geet?" He hugged her again. Geet did not notice Maan calling her Soni. All she noticed was that Maan was worried for her. She felt her stomach erupting in butterflies as she hugged him back. Her heart started beating faster as she realized that this was the first time her crush was so close to her. She closed her eyes wanting to enjoy this moment.


    Geet was so lost in Maan that she did not notice Maan pulling away. She did not notice Maan scolding her for being so careless. Maan kept on scolding her but she just stared at him lovingly. He got up and dragged her up too. He noticed her arm bleeding a bit and he dragged her to his Office. But she did not noticeit. She just stared at him lovingly as she realized how much he cared for her. She felt as if she was seeing him for the first time. She did not know till now that he had a kind heart hidden behind his hard exterior. She wanted to know him more, understand him more, learn him more. As she stared at him, he dragged her into his Cabin. He searched for the first aid box in the room and after finding it he brought it near her. He made her sit on the chair and started cleaning the box.


    Both Geet and Maan did not know that Dev who was in his cabin was listening to music while finishing his pending work. Dev had a habit of playing the songs loudly when Maan was out of Office. As Maan started cleaning the wound, notes of piano mingled along with flute wafted into the room through the open cabin door.



La la la la...

La la la la...

La la la... la la...


La la la la...

La la la la...

La la la... la la...


Dekha Jo Tum Ko

Yeh Dil Ko Kya Hua Hai
Meri Dhadkano Pe Yeh Chhaaya

Kya Nasha Hai Haan


Maan attended to Geet's hand treating it as if it was the most precious thing in the world.

Dekha Jo Tum Ko

Yeh Dil Ko Kya Hua Hai
Meri Dhadkano Pe Yeh Chhaaya

Kya Nasha Hai Haan

Geet stared at Maan lovingly with a small smile on her face as he tended to her arm.


Mohabbat Ho Na Jaaye

Deewana Kho Na Jaaye
Sambhaalu Kaise Isko

Mujhe Tu Bataa

Maan looked up and his eyes clashed with Geet's eyes. They stared at each other lost in each other's eyes.


Mohabbat Ho Na Jaaye

Deewana Kho Na Jaaye
Sambhaalu Kaise Isko

Mujhe Tu Bataa

Geet felt her heart beat speed up at the love she could see in Maan's eyes.


Dekha Jo Tum Ko Yeh Dil Ko Kya Hua Hai


Maan looked back to her hand and started applying medicine.

Meri Dhadkano Pe Yeh Chhaaya Kya Nasha Hai


Geet stared at Maan's face wishing they could stay this way forever.


As the music started, Maan kissed Geet's hand and pulled her up. She looked at him in surprise. He pulled her close and placed his hands on her waist. She placed her hands on his shoulder. Slowly they swayed to the music. As they swayed, Maan smiled at her. Geet shyly smiled back.


Bheegi Bheegi Alko Se 
Chori Chori Palko Se 
Kyon Mera Sapna Churaaye


Maan kissed her forehead.

Jhuki Jhuki Ankhiyon Se
Dheeri Dheeri Batiyon Se
Kyon Mujhe Apna Banaaye


Geet shyly looked away.

Meri Nazron Pe Chhaye
Khushboo Ke Jaise Aaye
Mera Tan Mann Mehkaaye

She looked up at him and tried to move away.


Saason Mein Yeh Pal Pal 
Jaane Kaise Hulchul
Kuch Bhi Samajh Mein Na Aaye

She turned to walk away but Maan caught her hand.


Shararat Ho Na Jaaye

Mohabbat Ho Na Jaaye
Sambhaalu Kaise Isko

Mujhe Tu Bataa

Maan pulled her close and hugged her tightly.


Shararat Ho Na Jaaye

Mohabbat Ho Na Jaaye
Sambhaalu Kaise Isko

Mujhe Tu Bataa


Suddenly, she felt her hand pain a bit and she looked in front. Maan was sitting there applying medicine to her hand. She blushed as she realized that she was daydreaming about their dance.


Soon, the music began and Maan put band-aid on her hand. He got up and was about to walk away, when someone caught his hand from behind. He turned around only to see Geet standing there with love in her eyes, the same love he saw in Soni's eyes. His breath caught as she smiled at him.


Meri Hai Yeh Mushkil
Ab To Yeh Mera Dil
Bas Mein Huzoor Nahi Hai

She came close to him and cupped his face with both her hands.


Itna Bata De Mujhe
Kaise Samjaaon Tujhe
Mera Yeh Kasoor Nahin Hai

He kissed one of her hands and she smiled at him with tears in her eyes.


Chaahe Hum Chaahe Bhi Toh
Pehre Lagaaye Bhi Toh
Kaise Din Raat Ko Roke

He shook his head and wiped her tears away.


Aag Bina Yeh Jale

Zor Na Koi Chale
Kaise Jazbaat Ko Roke


She hugged him tightly and he hugged her back.

Yu Chaahat Ho Na Jaaye


Someone tapped his shoulder.


Mohabbat Ho Na Jaaye

He looked ahead to see Geet standing in front of him.


Sambhaalu Kaise Isko


Maan looked away as he realized that he was daydreaming about Geet remembering him.


Mujhe Tu Bataa


Maan walked away from the cabin and stopped by the door.

Yu Chaahat Ho Na Jaaye


Geet looked on as Maan walked away.


Mohabbat Ho Na Jaaye


She placed her hand on her heart which was beating pretty fast. Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai?

Sambhaalu Kaise Isko


She wished he would turn around once.


Mujhe Tu Bataa


She looked at him full of hope.

Dekha Jo Tum Ko

Yeh Dil Ko Kya Hua Hai


She smiled softly as butterflies fluttered in her stomach.

Meri Dhadkano Pe

Yeh Chhaaya Kya Nasha Hai


Maan turned around to look at her once.

Mohabbat Ho Na Jaaye

Deewana Kho Na Jaaye
Sambhaalu Kaise Isko

Mujhe Tu Bataa


Her eyes widened as she noticed him looking at her. She did not know why but she felt content and happy with his glance.

Mohabbat Ho Na Jaaye

Deewana Kho Na Jaaye
Sambhaalu Kaise Isko

Mujhe Tu Bataa


Maan smiled absentmindedly and walked away.




Place - Somewhere in Dilli


     "Waah AD! Mujhe nahi pata ki AB doubles up as a driver also!", Geet giggled as she, Anjali and Khushi sat in the back on Arnav's car. Arnav glared at Geet through his rear view mirror but remained quiet as Geet and Anjali chattered on. He noticed Khushi avoiding his eyes which made his anger stronger for her. He gripped the steering wheel tightly while focusing on his driving. Anjali wanted to go shopping for Kanha and had dragged Geet into the plan. The plan was made in the morning itself. Geet had come home later but Anjali was still adamant to follow her plan. As their car passed near LaxmiNagar, Geet stubbornly demanded that Khushi also joined them. And hence, here he was being driver to Geet, Anjali and Khushi. Soon, his two sisters had decided that they would buy one dress for all three of them just for fun. Khushi kept on refusing for any new cloth but the Raizada sisters were as adamant as Arnav and soon they wore down Khushi's resistance.


   As soon as the car reached the stores, Geet got down excitedly and Anjali followed her excited sister. By the time Khushi could get down, both the sisters had vanished into the stores. As Khushi was about to get down, Arnav piped up, "Waise Saaliji!" Khushi's heart throbbed painfully. She disliked it when he called her Saaliji but wasn't that her relation to him now? She looked at him well aware that he would not loose this chance of taunting her. Arnav gave her a lazy smirk, "Aaj bhi aaun tumhaare liye kapde chunne ya koi aur ladka chaahiye tumhein iss baar?" Khushi looked at him confused. He glared at her, "Arre! Waah! Itne jaldi bhool gayi! Jo engagement mein tumne pehna tha woh meri hi toh choice thi!" Her eyes widened as she remembered shopping for Sharara and buying a blue and white one. She remembered how she had seen Arnav and thought of it as imagination. That was not her imagination! He had actually been there. Arnav gave her smug smile, "Lagta hai yaad aa gaya! Bataao na! Aaj main aaun kapde chunne ya iss baar koi naya ladka chaahiye?" Khushi felt her breath leave away as the implications of his words hit her. Bas hogaya! Ab hum aur nahi sunenge! She got down the car, slammed the door and marched away without showing any reaction. In the car, Arnav slammed his hand on the steering wheel' angry due to her no reaction. Itne jaldi main tumhein chodunga nahi Khsuhi! Main tumhein utna hi dard doonga jitna tumne mujhe diya hai!






And that covered Day 5 & Day 6. Next up Day 7 i.e. Sunday and

Day 8 meaning Monday!





The first song is from the movie Veer Zaara (2004) picturised on SRK and Preity Zinta sung by Lata Mangeshkar and Sonu Nigam.


The second song is from the movie Kasoor (2004) picturised on Aftab Shivdasani and Lisa Ray sung by Alka Yagnik and Kumar Sanu.





Geet hears about a girl called Soni and gets curious about it

while Khushi fights back against Arnav's taunts!


So tune in to IF for an interesting Chapter of DFL next Friday night!

Have a happy weekend and Happy Deepavali!

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