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Posted: 10 years ago
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glad that all of them are fine... waiting for MG to meet and Khushi to say Yes..

Thanks for the review!
And errr...you will have to wait a long time!
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Amazing update...

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so many injuries and operations in a day πŸ˜• 

shou bu liao (can't take it)πŸ˜•
hoping for a good future for all the patients

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amazing update
everybody is fine..
loved it...

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Hi Analeez11 

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Keep posting & thanks for giving us a pleasurable reading experiance

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: chavvi16

So you back woo

Shall be getting to this soon
wow that long wait sure paid off
but then it wasnt so long or was it
ahhh so they twist shall start


First of all thanks for the review! Now let me read and reply!πŸ˜ƒ

why do i have the feeling that geet will forget the times she was with maan


Because you know me too well! 

her love for him
but i still dont get why a year they shall have to be separate

 

You will get your answer in the start of Chapter 56 or in the title of Chapter 56 itself!πŸ˜‰

it cant take that long to get her to remember spent with maan can it


You just wait and watch ... errr ... read!πŸ˜ƒ

and i know i should know this but how long has geet been with maan  
sorry for troubling you like that but gotta know again


Two months. Before the twist story covered two months and after twist it will cover a month!

well am glad of one thing that all people who were involved in this fight and were critical shall be okay
and pray to babaji and DM that all those hurt shall be 100% and soon


Everyone is fine!

hmmm so lets get down to story of geet
how premature is the delivery
i mean i hope it aint too early for her to deliver and that the baby shall be okay despite the early delivery


Baby is fine! It was born only two weeks earlier than the due date!

dammit ek din mein kya se kya ho gaya
itni saari tragedy and all at once seems it just is bad time for all involved
and it gets worse if what you say is true which it will be


Yep! Ab bahut saare twists baaki hai!

oh no it is bad for them all but what to do it had to be done right
warna story badhegi kaise


Exactly!

but its so hard to see tem like this and all this doom and gloom is making me teary
though i know you shall make it all fine in the end
man it is particularly bad seeing akash break down like this
but all people close to him is in critical condition so he is bound to break down


Aakash ko bahut sympathy mil raha!πŸ˜‰

but now we shall get to know more about geet and her life before maan
and it will give us an idea as to why she had been kept captive
i know payal it was just this afternoon all was well and look what happened by evening
all the happiness snatched and the joyous occasion turned to this
she means a lot to akask that i can see
and it was his thought that had kept geet going when in captivity
he was the one who even though wasnt with her gave her strength to escape and not let her horrible situation get better of her
how can we not forget that thinking of akash kept her firm in her belief that those people wont be able to get to her


Yep! Aakash is to Geet what Anjali is to Arnav. The strength to go on and face all problems!

and now seeing that same sister in such condition is bound to break him even further
wait he is her cousin as well
she didnt just call him veere being her muh bola bhai but he really is her relative
which means this relationship is through his mother
because had it been through his dad even anj and arnie would be her cousins
not that am saying they arent her relatives
kabhi kabhi kuch rishtey khoon ke rishton se zyada maiyne rakhte hain hai naa


No they are not relatives. He is her muh bola bhai. His Daadi and her naani are friends. That is Anjali's naani and Geet's nani were best friends!

okay not really her cousin but then the above line sure comes in hand there
so nani and her grandma were friends that how they know geet
and it all is coming out life history of geet handa
good she was the only one we didnt know much about


From the start I called her mystery girl! Now her mystery will come out!

wait he is her saga bhai
oh my isse badi dukh ki baat nahin ho sakti yaar
now the line about blood relations makes even more sense


Agreed! Brij wanted to kill Geet in the serial too!

kaisa bhai hai joh behen ko marna chahe
waise agar cosuin bhi hota toh bhi achi baat toh nahin thi but still there is difference right
but not in his case
wasie difference honi toh nahin chahiye
bhai toh akhir mein bahi hi hotte hain


So true!

aur kuch aise malayak aur ******* hotte hain
sorry for swearing there but kya karun usne liya hi asisa hai ki i cant help but swear


Go ahead and swear! Brij deserves it!

arrey yaar whats wrong with studying
what just because she is a girl she cant study
that is sad pathetic and too backward thinking man


This happened in the serial too!

for gods sake this is the freaking 21st century where women have same rights as that as men
and they can do almost anything men can do
but guess some people can never change right


Exactly!

yes maan your geet knew these people before you did
and funny thing is she dont remember about them
ahhh so akash got some company when arnie and anj couldnt be there
man she seemed so cute when she was young and still is as a matter of fact


Agreed!

kaisi family thi yaar iski
mot even her parents could say anything about this
awww bless she wanted to be architect and am sure she shall be once all this is over i hope


Yep! She will be architect! I will make sure of that!

yup maan my man kuch cheezen kabhi nahin badalti
and that would be her bak bak hey even you are fond of the same now
aur agar ab woh chup ho gayi toh aapko hi khalega


So true!

wow she was thinking of her job at that tender age this girl is brilliant for sure
so what did arnie tell her about it
hey it was KC wow man even with memory loss you have simply blown us away dear


Thank you!

wow so our love birds had seen each other before
but back then no one realised that she would one day be maan's life and future wife of course
so they had met before but of course with her being young back then none of them would have recognized her


Exactly!

she must have changed since that right
arrey waah she sure was good she topped in whole Punjab now thats good or what
so they did admit her to a good college in Chandigarh
but what happened between that time leading to her imprisonment


Read the next chap!πŸ˜‰

something must have happened or else why would they have taken her away but what
and akash did tryt to contact her but wasnt able to and only got to know about her now
ahhh so the police cam and wanted to know about what happened
hope for now that man shall be in jail


yes, Brij is in jail!

at least that will be one less headache for raizadas and khuranas
well its so lucky now that maan saved geet
though it still resulted in her being in this condition
but had he not saved her she wouldnt have escaped or got the chance to fall in love with maan
the same love am doubting she is gonna forget breaking maan heart and shattering his hopes i think


You are so right!

chalo at least geet is okay and that matters
after all even if she might not remember him she is fine now
and as is arnie
making the two lovers who were without their other halves sigh in relief
yes they will have to take her statement to make sure that brij is gotten rid for longer
ahhh so he is back our arnie
dont worry dude you are all okay and so will your di and nani eventually
and i guess in such situations its better to think with one's brain and not the heart
well it seems maan is so right so relax all will be okay
they shall be okay and you wont loose any one today or ever
shame i cant say the same about him not loosing khushi


He will loose Khushi over his own stupidity!πŸ˜ƒ

but that matter isnt as important as his di and nani being okay so lets leave that for now
hmmm true but what has pain killers gotta do with you thinking idiotically mate
woh toh aap bina pain killers ke karr lete hai
you dont need pain killer for being idiotic sometimes arnie my man


He he he! That was so hilarious!

sorry for the comedy there but since its so serious had to make you laugh a bit reading my comment


Thanks for the comedy!

okay even though it is silly but it is gonna come true
and i dont blame NT for thinking this way
after when it comes to maan she would do anything to keep him away from any sadness but it seems this time she wont be able to do so


Agreed! But she will help Dev in making sure Maan Geet get back together!πŸ˜‰

she thinks of maan as her veerji means she will be feeling that what if babaji is snatching his love and happiness for a while
how can any sister see her brother in pain and same is the case with NT right now
its not she wants to believe it but the situations are forcing her to think like that


Exactly!

and i cant say i blame her when we all too are thinking the same
she is right if anything happens to geet maan wont be able to take it
and if she dont remember him which seems likely but i hope not he wont be able to take that


Yaad, Yaad, Yaad Bas Yaad Reh Jaati Hai! Thats all I have to say right now!

so yeah she is right in worrying about the same
well good news yipeee anj delivered a baby boy
so out of four critical patients three are all fine
now only nani remains and am sure that good news shall be known soon too
arnie dude dont you go rolling your eyes the poor boy could have lost you and other so it is okay for him to panic like that


Arre! Waah! You understand Aakash so well! You understand each and every one of the character so well! You rock, yaar!

not everyone are able to use their brains and not their hearts in such situation
knowing akash as well as we do he was bound to behave this way for sure
see when you heard about your di even you forgot your brain vs heart thing


Yeh Arnav bhi na, Uff!

uff this man sure gets hyperactive when it comes to his di
listen first mate
inki yehi buri adadt hai he never listens to it all and starts his panicking too and his is even worse

 

Arnav is famous for reacting before thinking! Afterall thats how he married Khushi in the serial!

thank god for MSK only he could have dealt with ASR at that time
so di is fine she had her baby and so is nani
so please relax and chill will ya

 

Yep! Everyone is fine! Khaali fokat sab pareshaan ho rahe the!

excuse me motor motuh aap ke dost maan ki jaan hain
and like you said if geet is like that so is your khushi


You are right! But Arnav called her motor mouth because he remembers her as a kid following him and annoying him with her inane chatter. And small kids tend to chatter on silly things which annoyed a teenage Arnav!

so i wouldnt worry too much about geet in that fashion as khushi is there to do the same to you
well arnie yeh toh sirf shururat hai aage aage dekhiye aapko kya kya shock milte hain


Agreed! Ab Arnav ko bahut jhatke dene baaki hai!

is that geet in the precap


Yes, it is!

must be who else would think like that
well this one sure made us aware of what we might see next
and how many bombs shocks and twists still remain


Many of them!

cheers for pm
and hope your wrist is much better and your exam went well
that was one hell of a filler chapter and beginning of lots of things going and our lovers being away from one another

My wrist is fine and exam went awesomely!
And thanks a lot for such an awesome review!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Mina420

Hello Kalpana,

First of all, I am really really sorry for commenting so late 🀒.

I have been so busy the past few weeks and also away from my dear laptop πŸ˜­ so that I couldn't even read the updates that quickly.


Hi Mina, 
Its ok! Chalta hai yaar! I understand!

Wow, I thought there will be a twist but this was truely unexpected.


Really????? Glad to shock you!πŸ˜‰

From the second Anjali had said that Geet looked like Baby, I thought that there must be some connection. I didn't guess that their granmothers were friends, tough.


Happy to surprise you!

But what a way to bring it all together. Totally filmy but I still liked it. I guess it made kind of sense at least to shock Anjali and Nani πŸ‘ as they are most likely to be affected. I wonder if Geet's memory will return after the operation and if not, will she recognize the Raizadas when they tell her about their connected past πŸ˜•?


Happy that you liked my filmy style!πŸ˜ƒ She will recognize Raizadas but ...just read the next update!πŸ˜‰

I am eagerly waiting to know what happened to Geet. Why is Brij after her 😲? It can't just be petty jealosy or hatred. There must be something big. I am glad that Brij is arrested 😑, at least we don't have to worry about him returning.

You are right! This is not some petty hatred! The answer to your question is in the serial itself. Ab baithke serial ki kahaani ko yaad karo ya aage ka story padhlo!πŸ˜‰ 

By the way, did you take the precap from the serial? I found it to e similar to what Geet said to Maan the day she told him the truth about herself. If yes then I am guessing that they are said in a different context.


That line just popped into my head. But may be subconsciously my memory took it up from the serial! But then the similarity between Geet's past in the show and here is quite similar! Dont know! It just happened! But thanks for telling me!

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Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

First of all LOVED THE UPDATE!!!! I'm so glad that akash had PayAl to support him throughout it. But have to say it was awesome. The stories akash told about geet was just beautiful. That even though they're not related he still loves her as his sister and mami as her daughter.  


First of all, thanks for the review! And really happy that you loved the update!πŸ˜ƒ 

I just loved it how when the nurse came and said the forms were incomplete and that there was no last name of geet written there and akash had piped in and said its geet handa! I was like yesss. Khurana families reaction was awesome to that.


Thank you!😊 I made the nurse come just so that Geet's story comes out in front of Raizadas! 

Awe Anjali gave birth to a baby boy! I'm so glad she is fine and also the baby! Geet is out of danger and Arnav and nani as well. But have to say when arnav woke up and he started worrying about nani and di and how he remember maan telling him about using his brain during the emotional times not his heart, and I'm glad he said that.


I am so happy that you liked the Arnav scene!

Hahah maan singh khurana shouted at arnav singh raizada! Wah wah. Loved it, but a brother is obviously going to worry about his sister. Mami Jee came at the right time akash bitwa, which I'm glad as well. In the update when akash was asking arnav about how he is and all and how arnav was like stop being drama queen akash was one of my favourite.


Wasn't it amusing? The way Arnav quieted as soon as Maan shouted at him. When I remember this scene I always imagine Gurmeet glaring at Barun and Barun sitting with a finger on his mouth and a kicked puppy expression on his face.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

Awe why did khushi stay outside, I know. It was absolutely, arnav was finally at peace knowing all his family is safe and khushi smiling face .

Omg motor mouth hahahah. The way arnav was like keep her away from my room and all was hilarious, bechara he was so scared of her motor mouth that he even locked himself in his room. But he still cared about her and asked if she's okie. Well now arnav knows that soni is geet and why he always thought that soni resembled alot like geet.


Happy that you found it hilarious! 

I have to say, shoutout to geet for following her dreams no matter what, or what her family said. For some reason I knew that geet family would let her study because of the village praising her and her family. But still a mystery to know that want actually happened that brij wanted to kill geet, though he always hated it. Finally I'm so glad he's caught. Go rot in jail brij!!


I always wanted Geet to follow her dreams. I hate it when people think that girls are made only for household work. Infact, I hate the shows were girls have only one dream and that is getting married. Infact, I hated IPK in the start for showing Khushi so weak. That is why in my story she is shown much more stronger. I want all my readers to be proud of the actions of my female characters. I want them to be proud of the way I portray female leads in my story!

I can understand why nt is worried about maan because if something does happen than they won't only loose geet but maan as well! Because maan lives for geet.


NT has valid reason to worry!

Precap looks so interesting! Geets statement would be one hell of a statement. Cannot wait and damn girl I can't believe there are more twists to come.


Yes, many twists are yet to come!

Haha finally reviewed it early! Awe I knew la will do something for arhi which will end arhi being together! Love you lavanya. Your awesome.

Thanks for the pm and do continue soon. Love you

-Rafia

Thanks for the review! And keep on supporting always!
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part 55 A
awesome dear...
if last part was so heavy like stone this one as light as feather...
loved it so much...
the positivity and the lovely recollection was so brilliant in this...
a stress reliever...
loved it so much...


Thanks a lot! And thanks for such an awesome review!
Actually, I wrote this part in such a way so that there will be some good moments just before all the hell breaks loose!

all the 4 are fine...
its like all the 4 are related only to the Raizadas particularly...


Only after writing it, I realised that all are Raizadas in one way or other!😭

and Aakash was so tensed...
and thank God they all realized Geet baby is here...
and the truth is also out...
Aakash is the one who clarified everything about Geet and the one supporting her...
thought Maan would do something in filling the form...


Naa! The only reason I made the nurse bring the forms, was so that Aakash was say those words and Khuranas will ask him about Geet. In short, the forms filling came up so that Geet's story comes out!

par koi na Aakash did it...
Geet is NOT related by blood with Raizadas right?


Yep! You are right!

Arnav's Naani and Geet's Naani are friends...
hmmm interesting...
seems like Geet is a very interesting character in this...
in fact a center one in all these people's lives...


Hey! I realised that only after you said it. Geet is the center of all people's lives. I never realised till you mentioned it!

awesome...
poor Geet her maternal home was not so good...
and that swine Brij he deserves to rot in jail...
hope Maan sees to it...


Ha! Dont worry about that!

and Maamiji wow shes too good in this...
so loving...


Made Maami a darling in this FF! 

the way Aakash is recalling Geet calling him Veere Veere is so so so endearing dear...


Thank you!

i dont know why but throughout the update whenever he says that i get a smile...


I was smiling too while writing it.

maybe am imagining Geet as a very cute, adorable kid...
ahha Maan has finally come to know the person who named Anjai AD now...
these realizations are so heart touching...


Thank you!

OMG she wanted to be an architect and even after she lost her memory she has the talent in her still...
brilliant...


Thanks!

hahaha Maan's amusement of Geet being a chatterbox then too was so nice...
the funny way of Aakash's talking is nice...
excellent Geet wanted to work in KC back then itself...
and wo sapne bhi poora kardi Geet baby ne...
waah...
its like they are destined like this...


Yes, they are destined. I planned this from the start!

not just one but so many times their lives are so intertwined...
oh so they all have seen Geet in Anjali's marriage but Maan is not able to recollect but Daadima did...
and others too...
am so in love with this update...


Really happy to read that!

Paayal and Arnav explained their role in saving Geet two times.
Arnav?
where did he come from wo tho OP mein hai na?


Oops! Blooper! I have rectified it!

wow Geet is fine now...
very good...
wow  Arnav too is fine...
very good...
hmmm finally the ASR is awake...
good...
arey waah the guys are too good...
and Maan's advice worked excellently now...
this guy even know thinks so funnily...
oh no NT is worried and scared...
cant blame her...
the incidents that happened with all of them is too very scary...
hope this is the last trouble in the lives of Geet and Maan dear...


Errr...Sorry to say but problems toh rahenge!

hope Geet doesnt forget Maan now...


Oops! You caught my next twist!

enough of that...
Maan wont be able to keep up himself if it happens...


Yaad Yaad Yaad Bas Yaad Reh Jaati Hai! Thats all I will write now!

wow Anjali is fine now and baby boy...
very very good...
my God Arnav idiot is this the time to crack jokes?
and Maamaji is too much...
but it made the place light...


Thats why I wrote those jokes!πŸ˜‰

Arnav's reaction is hilarious...
it made me laugh throughout...
Geet holds a very very very special place in everyone's heart here...


Yep! (nodding my head)

love that so much...
Maan came to THE MSK avatar to control THE ASR...
waah...
the way he controlled him was too good...
the unity and love and understanding and respect and liveliness they have between them is mindblowing...


Thanks for the words! Happy to read that!

wow Naaniji too is fine now...
very good...
excellent...
all are fine now...
such a relief dear...
seriously the most beautiful update...
MOTOR MOUTH? 
really Arnav?
hahaha...


I dont know why but when I imagine a small Geet talking non stop around an annoyed Arnav, the first word which came into my head is Motor Mouth! So I used that!

even when i was sleeping i was smiling thinking about this...


Aww! So sweet!

Geet a motor mouth according to Arnav...
hahaha...
very funny to hear that Arnav was and now shes back is scared of someone and can make him do things he never would think of...


Whenever I think of Arnav and Geet I always think of Geet as annoying little sister and Arnav as annoyed and irritated elder brother! So obviously he is scared of her talkativeness. 

Arnav was not close to Geet back then hai kya?


You are right! They were not that close as Aakash and Geet or Anjali and Arnav! There age gap and different preferences never allowed them to connect. 

why didnt he recognize her when he saved her in that car incident time?


He did not see her face, remember?

so all the things are out and everything is cleared...
Geet baby u have a family here along with ur Maan...
Maan handle the motor mouth?
of course ASR dear...


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yaar my request is this make Arnav and Geet together and Arnav bechara get tortured by Geet's bak bak...


Ok! Wish taken into account and will be shown after all twists are over! In short, after chapter 55 ends!

i want that scene where we get to see bechara Arnav and all the family members enjoying that...
Khusi ka tension is yet to start Arnav babu...
bohut pachtaoge...
but on the whole the whole update was excellent dear...
i loved it completely...
after a long time the enjoyment is back...
cont soon dear...

Once again, thanks for the review! Ab mazaa khatam! Twists shuru! Get ready for some tragic scenes and awesome dramas!
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CHAPTER 55 (B). GEET'S SILENCE IS BROKEN

 

 

 

Place - The City Hospital  

 

     The whole family was in Arnav's room chatting and smiling when suddenly, someone knocked on the door. They turned to look at Shyam who was holding a bundle in his arms. He smiled and announced, "Sabhi log baaju hatiye. Raizada family ke naye shehzaade apne Maamu jaan se milne aa rahe hain!" He walked towards Arnav's bed. When Aakash raised his arms to take the baby, Shyam moved his arms away, "Rani Sahiba ke strict instructions hain. Pehle baby apne Arnav maamu se milega." Aakash mock pouted while Shyam placed the baby in Arnav's arms and Arnav looked at the baby. The baby was sleeping. Arnav smiled softly and mumbled, "Di ne iska naam rakha hai?" Shyam smiled, "Ek buri khabar hai Saale Saahib! Bachche ka naam toh bua rakhti hai par humaari toh koi behen nahi hai!" Arnav frowned while Aakash looked concerned, "Toh buri khabar yeh hai Saale Saahib ki jab aapki Di ne Baby yaani Geet ko unki pregnancy ki khush khabri bataayi thi tabhi hi Baby ne Rani Sahiba Promise le li ki..." Shyam hesitated while Arnav went paler. Maan looked on curiously while Aakash seemed confused. Shyam continued, "ki bachche ka naam Baby hi decide karegi!" While Maan and Aakash smiled, Arnav looked at Shyam with growing horror. Khushi frowned; yeh Arnavji itne dare hue kyun hai? Shyam noticed Arnav's expression and nodded. Arnav growled, "You mean to say is baby ka naam woh motor mouth rakhegi? What the!" "Toh ismein problem kya hai?", Maan asked confused at Arnav's reaction. Arnav smiled sarcastically and sweetly replied, "Maan, we are talking about the girl jisne Di ka naam AD, mera naam AB, Maami ka naam MJ, Maamaji ka naam PJ, aur Naaniji ka naam DJ rakha hai!" The younger generation tried to control their smiles at names chosen by Geet. Arnav shook his head and continued in sarcasm, "Aur toh aur issi ladki ne apni behen Rajji ke liye naam phooljhadi socha tha!" Annie, Aakash, Dev, NT, Arjun and Khushi lost their fight against laughter and burst out laughing. Maan shook his head amusedly and vowed to himself that he would not allow Geet to name their kids. Shyam took the baby from Arnav's arms while Arnav rolled his eyes. Aakash took the baby from Shyam's hands while Paayal came to stand near him and both cooed at the baby. As everyone stopped laughing, Shyam spoke up, "Waise Saale Saahab, Rani Sahiba ne inka nickname soch liya hai!" Annie piped up in a playful tone, "Di ne hi Bhai aur Aakash ka nickname rakha tha na! Toh Chote hogaya, Chutke hogaya ab kya naam socha? Chutke se chota...yes! Is it Chintu?" Arjun replied, "No, No! It must be atom! After all atom is indivisible and smallest!" Again the younger gang burst out laughing while Maan slapped his forehead, Arnav rolled his eyes and Shyam shook his head.  Shyam waited for others to calm down and spoke up, "Inka nickname Kanha hai!" Arnav smiled softly, "Aap hi ka naam diya hai Di ne! Haina! Shyam aur Kanha toh ek hi hai right?" Shyam nodded while rest of the people gathered in the room smiled at the thoughtfulness. Shyam spoke up, "Rani Sahiba chaahti thi ki ladki hui toh ghar ka naam Devi rakhenge aur ladka hua toh Kanha!" All the elders in the room smiled while Buaji piped up, "Haayre Nandkisore! Bahut hi pyaara naam hai!" Arjun looked at Buaji for a second and then sneaked up to Shyam. He spoke up in theatrical voice, "Dude! Whatever you do don't give him the name NandKishore! Poor Fellow! Jab bhi Buaji Haayre Nandkisore' kahegi utni baar woh confuse hoga ki mujhe bula rahi hai ya bhagwaan ko!" Again the younger generation burst out laughing while even Maan and Arnav cracked a smile. Suddenly, Maami, who was standing Aakash cooing the baby in his hands, piped up, "You are at luck, Shyam bitwa! Nandkishore name already taken by my Bhanja! So confusion cleared!" Suddenly, Paayal spoke in a soft voice, "Waise achcha hua ladki nahi hui!" When everybody looked at her in confusion she mumbled, "Ladki hoti toh naam Devi hota, aur jitni baar Khushi Devi Maiyya' kehte hai bechaari ladki toh yahi sochti ki woh insaan hai ya bhagwaan hai!" Again the room filled with laughter while Aakash looked at Paayal in surprise at her joke. Paayal blushed at his stare while pouted and glared at her sister.

 

  Suddenly, a nurse entered the room, "Mr. Shyam! Aapki wife aapko aur aapke bachche ko dekhna chaahti hai!" Shyam nodded, took the baby from Aakash and walked away. The Nurse spoke again, "Geet Raizada ko hosh aagaya hai but she seems so scared ki Doctor ne kaha hai ki unhein aapke kamre mein hi shift karde as this room has place for two beds. Agar shift karenge toh she will comfortable enough that she might give statements faster. So Mr. Riazada, can I shift her here?" Everyone turned to look at Arnav who seemed a bit pale, he shouted, "Motor Mouth!" in horror and covered his face with his hands. Again room was filled with laughter while the Nurse looked confused. Poor lady! She could not even scold them for making noises as they were patrons of the hospital and she did not want to upset them. Aakash took pity on the poor Nusre and nodded at her, "Use yahaan leke aao!"

 

   Soon, the Nurse entered the room with a stretcher. The family was shocked to see Geet lying on the stretcher. Geet seemed so frail on the bed. Gone was the lively girl they saw during the engagement. On the bed lied a weak looking girl with head heavily bandaged. Due to the blood loss and operation Geet's body seemed a lot weaker. Her eyes fluttered open and roamed around in confusion. But as soon as her eyes reached Maami, Aakash and Arnav they lit up with recognition. She smiled softly and mumbled, "Veere!" Aakash smiled as he realized that his Geetto recognized him. His tears filled his eyes. He left his brother's side and walked towards his sister. Maami looked sadly at her Geet Bitiya. Her tear filled eyes did not leave Geet's face. Geet pouted and mumbled, "MJ! Roiyye mat. Make up kharaab hojaayega!" Maami laughed in surprise as her happy tears flowed down her cheeks. Geet remembered her! Maan's eyes widened. Kya Geet ko sab kuch yaad aa gaya? The Khurana family was also confused. Geet's eyes looked around when her eyes widened when she noticed Maan sitting on the other side of Arnav. "Aap?", she whispered softly. Maan smiled softly. Aakash sat beside Geet and held her hand, "Geetto!", he whispered softly. The brother sister moment got shattered as the Police entered the room. "Mr. Raizada! Aap apni behen se baad mein baat kar sakte hain. Pehle humein inse inka statement chaahiye!"Aakash nodded and smiled at Geet. He squeezed her hand in support and got a squeeze in return as her answer.

 

 

    Geet made herself comfortable as the Police Inspector asked her routine questions like her name, her town and her age. Soon he got to the point, "Miss. Handa! Aapke saath exactly hua kya tha? Aur woh log kaun hai jo aapko maarna chaahte hain? Aur aap Hoshiarpur se Dilli kaise aayi?" Geet looked down as tears flowed down her eyes. Aakash intervened, "Dekhiye! Shayaad inki yaaddaash utni theek..." Geet cut him off, "Main aapko sab bataati hoon Inspector Saab..." Everyone looked at Geet in shock. Had Geet remembered everything? All looked at each other happily. Geet was fine! Geet started speaking, "Main Hoshiarpur ki rehne waali ladki hoon. Main Chandigarh ke ek College se Bachelor of Architecture padh rahi hoon. Kuch mahino mein mera last year shuru hoga. Har saal main summer vacation mein ghar aati thi. Aur usi tarah iss saal bhi main ghar aayi. Mere ghar mein main hi ek itni padhi likhi thi aur woh bhi DJ, mera matlab hai Aakash Veere ke Mummy Pappa aur Daadi ke wajah se. Unhonein mere Darji matlab dadaji ko convince kiya ki mujhe aage padhne dein. Varna humaare ghar mein sab bade boodhe gawaar hain aur sab chote sirf dasvi ya baarvi paas. Mere Brij Veerji ne toh saaalon pehle padhaai chod di. Ek din mere gaao mein main ghoom rahi thi jab main ek ladki ko bhaagte hue dekha aur uske peeche kuch gunde bhaag rahe the! Main unke peeche gayi. Mujhe laga ki kuch gunde us ladki ko chhed rahe hain aur maine socha do ladkiyaan milkar un gundon ka saamna kar sakti hai. Achaanak se un gundo ne us ladki gher liya. Mere udhar pahunchne tak ek ladka achanak se wahaan aaya aur us ladki ki jaan bachaayi. Un gundon ke sardaar ke aur us ladke ke beech bahut behes huyi. Paas jaakar suna toh pata chala ki woh ladki aur koi nahi mere bachpan ki saheli Channi thi aur woh ladka aur koi nahi uska pati Gurvinder tha!" Suddenly, she burst out crying. Arnav, Aakash and Maan were alarmed but Maami came forward and pulled Geet towards her. Geet hugged her waist and wept. It took few minutes for Geet to calm down. She continued her narration, "Unki baaton se poori kahaani pata chali. Channi ne ek neeche jaat ke ladke se shaadi ki aur uske bachche ki maa bani. Yeh baat gaao ke kuch logon ko manzoor nahi tha aur isliye in dono ke jaan ke peeche pade the. Kai dino se yeh dono unse chupte chupaate jee rahe the!" Suddenly Geet's eyes widened in horror, "Achanak se woh gundon ke sardaar ne apni talwaar nikaali aur us ladke ke pet mein ghaup di! Woh ladki cheekhne lagi toh usko bhi maar diya!" A hush filled the room at Geet's words while Geet looked at the distance remembering the scene with a haunted look in her eyes. Maami patted her cheek in worry, "Phir ka hua?" Even though Geet was right in front of her she felt fear in her heart and wanted Geet to end her story and put her past behind. Geet continued with desperation coloring her tone, "Maar daala un dono ko. Galti kya thi un dono ki? Bas yahi na ki unhonein pyaar kiya tha! Kya pyaar karna gunaah hai MJ? Bolo na MJ!" She looked at Maami with pleading eyes. Maami shook her head and hugged her again. Geet continued in a painful voice, "Main ghabra gayi aur ghar chali gayi. Wahaan maine Daarji ko sab bataa diya yeh sochkar ki woh meri madat kraenge, un gundo ko sazaa dene mein. Lekin unhonein mujhe baataya woh..." Her breath came in short puffs as her eyes widened. She remembered how she had bowed in front of her Daarji and told him everything only for him to grab her hair and tell her that it was him who had ordered the deaths of Channi and Gurvinder. Maami patted her back trying to calm her down. After few minutes, Geet calmed down enough to continue her story in a emotionless whisper, "Daarji hi the jinhonein un dono ki maut ka farmaan sunaaya tha. Aur un dono ko maarne waala aur koi nahi mera bada bhai Brij tha!" Aakash looked on in horror as Arnav shook his head in sadness. Paayal, Khushi and their family were in tears while Maan's family was alternating between horror and righteous anger. Maan just looked away feeling guilt as he remembered how he had dismissed Geet's pleadings when she had begged him to save her. If he had listened to her, then Geet would have had her memory intact. And if he had brought her to Dilli to Shantivan then Maan and Arnav could have devised a way to deal with Brij and his company. Maan was sure that before Brij could reach Geet, Maan and Arnav's influence would have put him in jail.

 

  

    Geet sighed softly as she wiped her tears. She spoke with anger in her voice, "Mujhe yeh baat manzoor nahi thi. Kisi ki jaan lena kyunki woh aapke mutaabik nahi chal raha, yeh toh galat haina! Maine Police mein complaint karwaane ka faisla kiya. Ma ne roka, Pappaji ne manaaya par main ek na suni. After all ek anyaay hua hai. Aur bachpan se maine toh yahi seekha hai ki anyaay ko rokna humaara farz hai aur anyaay ko hote hue dekhna aur chup rehna bhi ek gunaah hai! Bas! Daarji ko yeh achcha nahi laga aur unhonein mujhe ghar ke baahar waali kothi mein band kar diya! Main cheekhi, chillaayi par kuch faayda nahi hua! Roz Brij Veerji kamre mein aate aur mujhse poochte ki maine apna faisla badla ki nahi. Aur mera jawaab sunkar mujhe daante, maarte. Kai baar toh kode bhi barsaaye hain! Mere khud ke ma Pappaji ne mujhe tyaag diya. Mere kisi bhi parivaar waalon ne mera saath nahi diya. Main bilkul akeli pad gayi thi. Mera gunaah kya tha? Bas yahi na ki maine sach ka saath diya! Bas itni si wajah ke liye mere apne parivar ne mujhe tyaag diya!" As Geet lost herself in her past, Maan felt like smashing something. He remembered when he had taken Geet to the Hospital in Chandigarh, the Doctor had told him that someone had whipped Geet's back. Maan felt anger boil as he thought of how much Geet must have suffered due to her own brother. Suddenly, he felt a hand hold his right hand which was clenched tightly. He looked at the owner of the hand. Arnav shook his head, "Use jail hoga and we will get him the toughest punishment but right now you relax. Geet is safe." Maan nodded and softly smiled. His hands relaxed and Arnav pulled his hand away.

 

 

      Geet continued her story, "Maine toh ro ro ke apni haalat hi kharaab kardi thi! Aur maine toh wahaan se nikalne ki ummeed chod hi di thi. Lekin phir mujhe yaad aayi woh baat joh mujhse Veere ne kahi thi jab hum aakhri baar mile the." She smiled at Aakash who smiled back at her showing assurance through his expression, "Jab bhi mushkil mein rahegi, toh dil se nahin dimaag se kaam le. Dil jahaan bhaavnaon mein bahega, dimaag waheen bhaavnaon se pare hatke koi na koi hal nikalega. Toh rishton ke liye dil se sochna, par mushkilon ke liye dimaag se kaam lena." Aakash felt proud that his words had inspired his sister. Arnav looked at Maan with a raised eyebrow while Maan shrugged. It was comic how his words had reached Geet through Arnav and Aakash. His heart warmed with happiness as he realized that unknowingly his words had helped his Geet in some way even before they met. Geet started speaking, "Bas maine than liya, rona band aur dimaag se kaam karna shuru. Bas maine intezaar kiya ki kab woh meri chaukidaari mein dheeli padhein aur mein wahaan se bhaag nikloon. Kuch dino mein unki chaukidaari dheeli padhi aur maine mauke ka faayda uthaaya. Ek din unhonein ek ladke ko bheja mujhe khaana dene ke liye. Maine thaali uske sir par patak di aur wahaan se bhaag nikli. Wahaan se nikalkar mein bachte bachaate Chandigarh ki taraf nikli. Wahaan toh mere dost the. Woh toh jaroor meri madat karte. Lekin wahaan kisine meri aane ki khabar unhein dedi! Phir kya tha! Wahaan se bhi bhaag nikli main! Aur phir..." She looked up directly at Maan. "Phir main bhaagte bhaagte inse takraayi!" The Police Inspector looked at Maan who nodded. He looked back at Geet, "Phir kya hua?" Geet frowned, "Phir?" She looked around confusedly and turned back at the Inspector, "Phir mujhe sar par kisine maara aur main behosh hogayi!" The cop nodded, "Aur Mr. Khurana aapko hospital le aaye right?" Geet shrugged miserably, "Mujhe pata nahi! Main toh behosh thi!" The Inspector nodded and walked away to file proper FIR against Brij and his men.

 

      Suddenly Geet looked at Maan in confusion, "Par aapko kaise pata ki main Raizada se related hoon?" Maan frowned "Mujhe nahi pata!" Geet looked at him in exasperation, "Toh phir in sabko yahaan kisne bulaaya?" She looked around and her eyes reached Arnav, "Aur AB ko kya hua hai? Woh bed par aise kyun lete hain? Aap theek toh haina AB? Aur AD, Jiju aur Dj kahin dikhaayi kyun nahi de rahe!" Arnav, Aakash and Khushi looked at Geet with growing dread while Maan seemed paler. Geet looking around spoke up, "Aur yeh sab kaun hai MJ? Aap mujhe inse introduce nahi karwaaogi?" Maami looked at Geet in shock and while Khushi blurted, "Lekin aap toh humse mil chuki hain. Yaad kijiye! Hum dono toh ek duje ko ekhaad mahine se jaanti hain!" Geet laughed softly, "Yeh kya keh rahi hain aap? Main toh das mahine se Chandigarh mein thi. Aur kuch din pehle hi Hoshiarpur aayi thi! Main aapse kabhi nahi mili!" She looked surprised at Khushi while Maan felt terror grip his heart. No! This cannot be possible! Yeh nahi ho sakta! Maami spoke up, "Par bitiya aap toh do mahine se Maan bitwa ke ghar mein ho! Uu ne hi humein bataaya ki kaisan usne tohaar jaan bachaayi aur apne ghar mein rakha!" Maan was jarred out of his thoughts by Arnav's whisper, "You didn't tell them about your romance?" Maan shook his head while his voice shook with tremor due to his fear, "I only told them that I saved her and she stayed at my house and the attacks which happened on her. Not more than that! I thought ki humaare pyaar ke baare mein hum dono khud milkar sabko bataayenge!" Maan's whisper was filled with pain but before Arnav could question on it Geet piped up with fear all over her voice and face, "Par mujhe toh kuch bhi yaad nahi! Mujhe toh sirf itna yaad hai ki yeh aadmi ne meri jaan bachaayi aur main yahaan uthi!" Maama spoke up, "Naahi bitiya Rani! Us haadse ko beete hue du mahine hogaye!" All of the person in the room looked at Geet in worry. Why she did not remember anything? Maan was about to ask her why was she behaving in such a way? When Geet started shaking and mumbling, "Yeh kya horaha hai mujhe! Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi? Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi?" Maan stood up with jerk; Geet seemed to be going into shock. Her eyes were dilated in confusion while her face started sweating. Soon Maan called the Doctor and after a whispered conference between Maan and Doctor Geet was wheeled away for proper checkup. The whole room was silent as everyone was worried for Geet and sad for her current situation. Maan stood by the door worried; Hey Babaji! Meri Geet ko theek kardo!

 

 

   It was two hours later when the Doctor came into the waiting hall where all the families had gathered and delivered the most devastated news that he could give to Maan. "I am sorry, Mr. Khurana, Mr. Raizada! But I think that Miss. Raizada has lost the memory of the last two months." Maan looked at the Doctor in shock unable to comprehend what he was saying while NT gripped Dev's hand in shock. Annie looked at Arjun in horror while Arjun looked at Annie with a helpless look. Khushi gave out a sob while Maami sat down on the bench nearby in shock. Daadi, who was sitting nearby, grabbed her head in her hands while tears flowed through her eyes. Paayal gripped Aakash's shoulder tightly while Aakash looked worried for Geet. Arnav, whose room door was open, could hear and see everything from where he sat on the bed clearly. He was the only one who was keeping his eyes trained on Maan knowing very well that he was the most effected by this news. Maan took a few minutes to absorb this shock and reacted in the only way he knew. He roared at the Doctor, "What? Matlab kya hai aapka? What do you mean Geet lost her memory?" Dev moved forward and grabbed Maan's shoulder and spoke up, "What do you mean, Doc?" Arjun came forward too and grabbed Maan's other shoulder in silent support. The Guptas and Raizadas looked confused at Maan's reaction while the Doctor replied, "Brain is a very complicated organ, Mr. Khurana. Geet was hit on the same place she was hit two months back. Maybe that's why she forgot the past two moths." Maan had a lost look on his face while Arjun spoke up concerned, "But when will she gain her memory?" The Doctor shook his head, "I am sorry to say that after looking at her MRI scans I believe there is only 1% chance she will remember anything!"  As the Doctor walked away, Maan looked devastated by this news. He stumbled for a moment but caught himself, shrugged Arjun and Dev's hand on his shoulder and walked away. Daadima felt faint and Annie and NT supported her. Arjun pushed Dev and nodded towards the direction Maan went. Dev nodded and followed Maan's footsteps. While the families looked at each other worry written on their faces for Geet, Arnav collapsed on the bed with worry. How would Maan cope with this? Arnav wondered but before he could think anymore the pain killer given by the nurse took effect and he went to sleep.

 

 

 

A SMALL SCENE (AS PER CHAVVI16'S (kittu) WISH)

 

Inspector Kittu sat on her chair feeling anger coursing through her body. Inbetween she glared at the man sitting in the jail. Suddenly a woman constable ran into the room and saluted her. Inspector Kittu raised an eyebrow, "Hospital se kya khabar aayi hai, Constable Kalpana?" The constable gulped and spoke up, "Woh ladki bach gayi!" Kittu nodded, "Achcha hua bach gayi warna main is Brij ko toh..." Kalpana looked at her anxiously. Kittu noted her expression and growled, "Tumhein aur kuch kehna hai?" Kalpana nodded and glared at the man inside the jail, "Who ladki iski behen hai!" Kittu got up from her seat in a flash and roared, "KYA?" She marched towards the man and pointed at him. She looked at Kalpana, "Yeh apni behen ko hi maar daalna chaahta hai!" Kalpana nodded and told Kittu the main reason behind Geet being targeted. Kittu narrowed  her eyes at the man, "Is aadmi ki yeh majaal! Apni hi behen ke saath yeh badsalooki! Aur upar se do pyaar karne waalon ka khoon bhi kiya! Ise main aaj nahi chodoongi!" She took the danda lying nearby and walked swiftly into the cell. Brij looked up in fear. Kittu raised the danda and started thrashing the man. Inbetween she swore enough to even make a sailor blush. The Constables around her closed their ears while Kalpana smirked gleefully. Isko toh aise hi chaahiye! After thoroughly thrashing Brij, Kittu took a long deep breath. She felt so relieved. She turned and walked out of the jail leaving behind a cowering mess of Brij. She smiled at Kalpana and they high-fived.

 

Kalpana turned towards the viewers and mumbled, "So tell me Kittu, feel satisfied?"

 

 

AUTHOR NOTES

 

I have readied my shield; bring along your jootas and chappals. Infact, you know what, I will learn the shield charm from Harry Potter, so go ahead! Bombard me with your angry comments. I won't feel bad as long as you don't use abusive words!

 

The above scene dedicated to Chhavi16 as it was her wish to thrash Brij!

 

And a loud shout out for spvd (deepa) for noticing my blooper. I had shown Arnav giving statements along with Paayal when actually he was in ICU. Sorry for the mistake! It was the first one! I have rectified it!

 

 

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENTS!

 

The first important announcement is that I am back with regular updates. Every Friday I will post new chapter! But if I don't do that then please assume it must be due to light problems and I will post it on Saturday. If there is no update on Saturday, then please check my dashboard, I will find a way to post a message for you guys in the status bar!

 

Second announcement is that recently I started watching a show called Do Dil Ek Jaan on Life OK and had this concept about that show roaming in my head! Finally I decided to put it in writing as when recently writing this chapter, I started having a bit of writers' block due to the tragic twists. I just could not write few things without feeling depressive. As the other story is lighthearted, it cheered me enough that I could easily get back to DFL. So for the sake of DFL, I will write that SS. The SS is only of 11 chapters and will end by next week. Each chapter is barely of 1000 words. So if you are fan of my writing style then do have a look! You can PM me and I would send you the link!

 

Now for those who are not interested in that SS and want to read only Arhi and/or Maaneet stories, I have good news for you. While planning that SS I thought that the plot would suit Maaneet and Arhi too. So once I end that SS, I will write an Arhi and Maaneet version too. And while the plot will be same, the reactions, scenes and dialogues will be totally different. So if you are lover of both the couples then do read both the SS. I will send you all a PM when I will post it.

 

And the third and the most important announcement is that, I will be changing my user name on Sunday! As already most of you know my real name whats the use of having Analeez11 and confusing you all on what to call me? So on next Friday, if some weirdo PMs you with the username starting with Kalpana, that would be me!

I will be changing my picture too as a celebration on turning a Dazzler!

I will also be changing my signature to my fanfiction index which I will create soon!

So please don't be confused and enjoy the Weekend!

 

 

PRECAP

 

Yaad Yaad Yaad Bas Yaad Reh Jaati Hai!

Maan reaction and another twist!

Waise keep that jotas and chappals handy, abhi aur twists baaki hai!