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finally arnav knows... i was waiting for this for a long time
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omg.. now Arnav realizes... uff.. when will this solve..
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Omg what an updt dont know from hw lng am waiting for this chaptr at last arnav know the truth this chap is vry imotional pl gv sum romance yaar lead ke sath rotey rotey thak gay hv sum fun nw
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Posted: 10 years ago
ok so finally arnav got to know the truth dat he is the root cause for the mu 
nd geet is heart broken 
nd maan is nt able to give love a second chance 
do update soon
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SO FINALLY GOT TO KNOW THE TRUTH AND THE REASON WHY KHUSHI BROKE HIS HEART
AND POOR GEET AND MAAN
MAAN IS SCARED OF LOVING AGAIN AS HE KNOWS HE WILL NOT BE ABLE TO BEAR A SEPARATION FROM GEET AGAIN

NOW IT UP TO ARNAV AND GEET TO FIND A WAY TO CONVINCE THEM OF THEIR LOVE
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dev noticed Geet's depressed state.Love Dev's charac here.I luv d song u used.u used it 2 show their emotions well.Finally d truth in front of Arnav.he regrets...his heart pains 4 Khushi now.what wil he do now?Waiting 4 arhi union
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Finally caught with the .Thank God Arnav ka MU dur ho gaya. Looking forward to Geet's action and ASR's shatir dimag at work to make everything ok.
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mindblowing... yipeee atlast d most awaited part of d century!!
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 61
awesome...
excellent dear...
too good...


Thank you and thanks for the review!

Dev Naintara
oh wow Tara is expecting...


Yup!

and Dev's strategy to make her talk to Maan to escape from Maan's anger is funny...
awesome...


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junior Dev or junior NT?
hmm what about dono?


Hmmm... Nice idea! Will think about it!

Geet Naintara
oh so now only they are meeting like this...
sigh those days were so beautiful...


I know!

koi na hope NT and Dev's plan work soon...
so they are trying to make her remember the time she was with them and Soni...


Yup!

sigh...
those reminders worked on Geet or not it worked on my memory...
waah kya din the wo sab...


I know!

so Geet is now all the more curious to know about Soni...
so Geet desires Maan to feed her like that...
not to worry dear Maan will surely do that...


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Arnav Khushi
seriously his only way to forget is to drink?
gadha kahin ka...


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then when he regrets and repents what will he consume?
i will send him zeher...


Nice idea!πŸ˜†

OMG he went to her home...
what would have happened if Buaji was there?


I know! The horrors! (Shudder) 

this guy never ever thinks anything except himself...


Yeh toh sach hai!

is haalat mein bhi isse gussa aa raha hai?
duffer idiot...


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poor Khushi...
bechara Maan...
Maan calls Geet when Arnav is drunk now Khushi calls Maan when once Arnav is drunk...
Maan i think has to change his profession at this rate...


πŸ˜† Very funny! Maan the driver who drives drunkards home!πŸ˜†

Geet Maan Arnav
hahaha here once again its Geet who is helping Maan and Arnav...
too good...
bechara Maan and Geet too...


Agreed!

Arnav should hear a good scolding from Maan for turning like this...
oh ho Geet dear ur Ab is enough to have troubled her a lot now u too dont trouble her and hurt her...
hope she supports Khushi later and yells at Arnav...


I have written a perfect scene just for that in Chapter 65!πŸ˜ƒ

Khushi Arnav
oh ho Khushi dear u still wanna see that obnoxious guy?
hope she doesnt hurt herself...


Oh! She will!

oh ho the stupid idiot gadha is back to his angry and irrational form...


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yeh naya naya tarika dhoondh tha hai to hurt her with such words...
but Khushi too is giving back but its not at all enough...
the way hes doing is too much...


Agreed!

Maan Geet
Sasha did a good work...
and Dev well he has got one more chance and plan to implement and execute...
hahaha poor Maan...
Geet and Maan on a long drive and meeting and dinner...
excellent...


Thank you!

how did she mange keeping her mouth shut this long?


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hehehe poor Geet...
and Maan was controlling so much...
had Arnav been here he wouldnt have believed and also would have celebrated this silence of Geet...


He would have thrown a party!

oh ho so Geet is drunk here...
now i seriously laugh at Maan's condition...
hes the one who is caught in such positions with drunken people...


Agreed! Bechaara Maan!πŸ˜†

hahaha...
now Maan has called Arnav to take a drunken Geet...
her antics were funny...
hmmm she almost confessed...
and they were about to kiss...
waise did Maan and Soni ever kiss?


Nope! I am not good at writing kiss scenes yet! I have a feeling it will come out dirty and cheap and I hate that! When I write a kiss scene, I want it to be pure, perfect and beautfiul! (Not talking about the kiss but the way of writing) But will write a kiss scene for both girls once atleast for this fic!

i have completely forgotten about this...
almost kiss but Arnav arrived at that time...
hahaha so Maan too feels like this only...


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hehehe...
lovely dear...
precap
poor Khushi...
and Geet well thats good...
cont soon dear...

Happy that you liked this Chapter so much!
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 64 B
awesome dear...
excellent...
lovely...
this is a relief update in one jodi's love story...

KM
awesome dear...
so Naaiji and Daadima are planning to leave to Lucknow together and early too...

RM
awesome...
Arnav has come to know Khushi is leaving to Lucknow...
and hes so broken...
well seriously i dont understand how come he gave up his anger since last update?
unbelievable...
but good for him coz his already mistakes are too many and huge that he should start undo them...

Maan Geet
oh ho Geet went away with broken heart...
poor her...
Maan that was not fair...
and Dev is shocked with the turn of events...
and Maan is so heart broken...
sigh...
think Geet should make Maan believe her and make him go crazy...
its Soni who made his life like this happy and full of life with her antics...
hope Geet does that well along with her Geet essence too...

both are heart broken and the song sequence u have split it nicely dear between the couples...

Arnav Khushi
awesome...
Arnav is here...
and Buaji is leaving them alone...
excellent...
now the truth is out and stupid Arnav has finally understood everything...
he should have hidden his identity from her this long...
idiot stupid gadha...
and Khushi is so heart broken...
now what will he do?
hope he sets things right soon...
but hope La also doesn get hurt in this...

her Arnav has to do something and there Geet has to take the first step...
nice one dear...
one relief here is the truths are out in front of the jodis...
from hereon how they gonna take is what is gonna be interesting...
Arnav better do something to make it to Khushi...
and Soni comes back in Geet in antics and doings...
cont soon dear...