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Posted: 10 years ago
I m speechless, its sad but wonderful
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Posted: 10 years ago
simply amazing.loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
So beautifully written!
The moments spent wit ur beloved should most treasured and satisfying. Which made her leave to the heavens in peace wit no regret.
I don't think she wanted water, she just didn't want her beloved watch her bid her final goodbye.
Such love between the couple is so precious as a phoenix's tears... And very very rare!
Yes. This made me sad yet she was happy and in peace. Isn't that important?
I have read a few of ur works, u really are a wonderful writer. Who can capture those little heart warming moments between two people in love so brilliantly!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow dear, this was written so brilliantly. Awesome yaar, you surely have so much of talent in you, keep writing, you are doing great 👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW...
Brought tears ...but, that was so beautifully penned...