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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 87)

angel568 Newbie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
heyyy again a beautiful updateStar
u deescribe every emotion so fabously Smile
thanks for the pm

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reggie Newbie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
The myriad of emotions on khushi's face was beautifully described! A question- how come pranab is not married now? As it was the age of child marriages..

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Careless_Artist Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
This story is wonderful... I like the concept a lot.. Staying in Calcutta and knowing the history of marriage Calcutta it's amused me that I felt no bore during read it.. Your way of writing is supab..
Pranab feelings for Khushi in that way was natural as a teenage boy.. Don't know where their Friendship will stay.. Frankly speaking I always believed that child marriage shouldn't be existed.. I'm hell against that.. Nevermind I'm waiting for next update..

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shr1234 Senior Member

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:17am | IP Logged
It is simply beautiful. To borrow your words its as delicate and serene as the pale winter sunshine :)
It's so nice of Arnab to wait for Khushi who is maturing like a slowly opening bud.  I think  in that era, very few had this wisdom that came with higher studies and the new thoughts with patriotism.
Like Khushi her friend/ Bro in law, Pranab is also growing from a boy into a man. These feelings he has started feeling for his sis, it may be an adolescent crush or attraction for the other gender. Will this new development make Khushi grow faster? I cant't wait to read more. Please update fast!!

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siamesecat IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Awesome progress in story.
Thanks for the pm

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Chamkili77 Groupbie

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:44am | IP Logged
I like the fact that Arnab has progressed in this story and is investing in this relationship. He is ready to wait for Khushi to grow up! I hope Pranab doesn't fall for khushi , will make it awkward. But hoping nature takes its course and 15 year old khushi feels the first stirrings of desire for Arnav and so does he!!

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Anony_mous Goldie

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:47am | IP Logged

Where did the Pranab angle came in from??? Having cried out that aloud, that was a freaking master stroke. So many possibilities open up with this twist.

I loved the subtle way that you portrayed Arnab's feelings, his thoughts and his musings throughout the update. Like a mature man would think while dealing with a child. A child who wants to force herself to grow up, as soon as possible, because she thinks that is the key to her acceptance in her husband's room and his heart.

Arnab is right, childishness has nothing to do with age. It's state of mind. So will he accept that the female he is married to is not the serious docile type and whether he waits for a year or five, she will stay the same (incase her personality is not curbed)? 

Also in those days even the most idealistic people have ideals different than what we have today in this age. Social norms were different. Definition of a good husband was different.

I am looking forward to how would Arnab react towards Pranab angle, being THE husband and THE eldest son of the house? And HOW long will he wait before claiming HIS wife?

Update soon :) 

Edited by Anony_mous - 14 September 2013 at 12:58am

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Sweta1495 Groupbie

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:55am | IP Logged
i did anticipate something like this- pranab falling for khushi..after all, what's a story w/o some drama...:-D... Is pranab's admiration for Khushi simply admiration, respect, or lust or love? if it's love, his heartbreak would be collateral damage in this love story... :-(
ab ayega asli mazaa... the love story has begun, i presume?

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