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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 86)

bellacoolio Senior Member

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
Those were some beautiful moments between Arnab and Khushi! The description of the library was perfect...

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karsvinu Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Wow this story is indeed complicated with lot of emotions in it...i'm loving it is allSmile

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Cute6 Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
Childhood lies in the state of your mind, not in numbers
dese lines wer beautiful and brought smile!!
m geeting addicted to dis also now like all your other stories...
wat was the ending...
vaiting eagerly for next1...

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samirao IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Fab update, glad that Arnav and khushi r coming close , but parnab taking interest in khushi , that's not  a good sign , hopefully he realize soon that khushi is his Bhabhi , waiting for next part 

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Nimie207 Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Loving tha development of Arshi relation..slow but sweetly..n Pranab?? Adolescent heart must not fall for Khushi..hoping to c Arshi happy soon..n i thought it wud be Arnab seeing her in the laat sequenc..but u made it Pranab??? y?? intending for a triangl!! n baba ..naa..

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A_BA IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
I finally got a chance to catch up with this story, and I have honestly really enjoyed reading each chapter.

Your detailing of 1920's Calcutta seems so realistic (not that I actually know what it was like, but it seems like you have done a lot of research), I can honestly imagine all the scenes very well in my head.

And you delving into a topic of child brides, which at the time was probably so common, is so interesting. My own grandma's oldest sister was married at the age of 6, and sent to her husband at 12 in the early 1900's; whenever I hear the story about it, I always think what it would be like a girl that age to go through such an experience. I understand that it was common back then, but it is just such a hard concept to grasp for me to this day.

Arnab visiting the courtesans was such a heartbreaking scene for me personally. I understand he didn't actually go through with it, but even then, it was such an intense scene for me...him going there to save Khushi's childhood (but cheating on her as a way to do so), but then realizing that the girl there is younger than his own wife. I'm really happy he didn't go through with it, but I know that most men probably at that time probably would not have exercised that amount of self-control. Arnab waiting for Khushi to become a woman is a sweet gesture, also something I'm sure most men at that time did not consider.

And now this twist with Pranab! I definitely was not expecting this...I really hope nothing bad comes out of this. I can understand that he may be attracted to her, but will it stop at just that or will there be something more? My weak heart can't handle this unknown scary scenario!

I'm glad Arnav is being a little more open to Khushi, but I wonder how long it will last. He clearly doesn't think she's a woman yet, but I'm sure there will be a lot of pressure from his family to make her his "real" wife soon so they can have heirs. I'm curious if Arnav's plan to move into his own place includes Khushi. I feel like he knows he has a responsibility towards her, but he always thinks of her as a burden.

Historical fiction is my favorite genre, and with such interesting twists, this story has really captivated my attention. Really looking forward to more updates soonSmile

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meniranjana00 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
oho.. now pranab also have feeling for her

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JCJS IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Wow simply a superb.loved it really arnav was too cute and khushi as usual adorable. So arnav is getting it and super excited for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

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