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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 85)

robinhood008 Goldie

Joined: 09 August 2012
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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
That was an amazinggg update!!!

Uhhhooo why did pranab had to fall fr khushi, I hope its temporary and he gets over it and seeing khushi jus as his friend

Arnav has well said, childhood can't be limited to number,its in maturing
Khushi is relli affected by each word arnav says

Amazinggg update!!!

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Snoowfall IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Uh oh teenage harmonies kicking in seems like...

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Chipmunks. Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
'Childhood lies the state of your mind, not numbers'...
Khushi is still a child and it will take time to grow up and know things. She had asked innocently for a baby which shows us there is still time for her to learn things.
There is improvement in their relationship and Arnab confessing he likes her was surprising. He is sure he will love her in future when she become more mature.
If he is waiting for future, we can note the first sign of love in Pranab. I hope its just some crush or infatuation because I dont want his heart to break.

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Ameera. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
good upate
a differnet flavour of arnav and khushi

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harsha.. Senior Member

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
The best part of your narration is that I can visualize the whole scene playing out in my mind , that too in technicolor.The words you used to describe the library were brilliant. The whole scene was described in such a beautiful manner - lacy curtains , sepia hued picture of his grandfather , mahogany bookshelf among others. While reading that paragraph you get a clear view of the high social and financial standing of Arnav's family while getting transported to that era. That paragraph lend a colonial feel to the whole update.

I liked the way Arnab handled the situation. He effectively diverted her mind and also decided to wait for her to grow up. Everyone has their weak moments and Arnab has his too but the intellectual and mature young man that he is , he eventually tamed his desire.

The last paragraph hints at some kind of twist with Pranab experiencing the first feelings of attraction for Khushi.

Edited by harsha.. - 13 September 2013 at 9:48pm

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mishti_17 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update... Khushi so wants Arnav to like her... And Arnav wants to wait for her... I dont want a triangle.. Broken Heart Pranab kyun...?Unhappy

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Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Oh no pranab falling for khushi Cry
Hope our arnabbb doesn't sacrifice
Arhi moments were beautiful jenny

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Anamika100 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 July 2009
Posts: 3526

Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Hope babyis doing okay now.

That was Ike a thirsty person being given two drops of water when they could drink gallons...I need more, I want oh...I am so glad you updated.
I do NOT have a good feeling about Pranab suddenly seeing Khushi in a new light...will he make moves on her...and will she fall for him too?  

Edited by Anamika100 - 13 September 2013 at 10:12pm

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