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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 58)

samirao IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 October 2012
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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Just come across to ur story and read all the chapters in one go , awosome story , written exceptionally well , ur one of the genius writters of IF , no doubt about that , in ur story my personal favorite is child women Khushi , really like Arnav and khushis conversation about BaBY , i have a request dear writter , i know that Arnav wants to move out , when he is done with his studies , I don't want him to leave Khushi behind , I understand that Khushi is just 14 , years old and she will b 15 or 16 years old at the time of Arnav's moving , but he have to understand that she is his wife , his responsibility , doesn't matter how young she is , impatiently waiting for the next part

Edited by samirao - 07 September 2013 at 10:04am

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priyatnl. Goldie

Joined: 16 May 2012
Posts: 1805

Posted: 07 September 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
this ff reminds me of balika badhu movie
hope arnab treats khushi with love
don't see a reason of treating her harsh

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adithyan IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 13 May 2012
Posts: 17584

Posted: 07 September 2013 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IPK007

Originally posted by valeyrie

Jenny I had a few doubts in my mind, hope you could answer them..
1. At that times, status of the families involved while marrying their children was very important... so does khushi come from similar backgrounds??
2 . As you said in the start that Khushi's whole family had succumbed to death coz of cholera, how did she manage to survive all that difficult time alone.
3. Did Arnab and Khushi's elder sister live a married life and then she died?? or had Arnab never seen her also
4. Also i really would like to know the age of Arnab and Khushi when they were married

nevertheless this Khushi is very endearing.. i get to see a glimpse of everything in her... I know she will grow up to be a real woman.. the woman Arnab wants.. also i would really love to see a glimpse of the Khushi she was before coming to Calcutta Smile

Almost all of your questions will be answered in the coming updates either in the form of flashbacks or conversations between Arnav and Khushi.. :) 
Arnav's first wife died before she could come and live with him..And Khushi's family were pretty well off zamindars too...Growing up, Khushi got a lot of freedom from her dad...that would explain her free spirited, bold nature..
this is his 2nd marriage???????

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-Roshini- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Fantastic concept read all the parts in one go .update soon

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momo121 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 26 June 2012
Posts: 6316

Posted: 07 September 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
awesome update! :)
thanks for the pm

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Anamika100 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 July 2009
Posts: 3526

Posted: 07 September 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
I read the update and AND and am back with more
I really like the reality and mature handling of e complex subject matter  in this story...that is the whole point of setting it in that period, exploring the child bride situation. It is not a simple boy meets girl but a man who met his child bride and is struck by what a child she is and he is principled, honorable and shamed at the thought of even thinking about her in terms of a wife.  He has not really thought about her as his wife, accepted her as his wife yet.

Yes, I too did not like Arnav visiting the courtesan but that was a reality of that time.  He really does not feel married.  so i see no problem with this action...of course i was wishing with all my heart that he does not go thru with it...and Jenny who is a kindered spirited romantic like all of us contrived that he did not...Thank god.  Khushi is a beautiful soul  and I did not wish her husband to stray and later when/if she ever found out, it would shatter her and make him appear damaged in her eyes.  She has so many hopes on him.  Will he measure up?

He has not yet fallen in love with Khushi because he sees her as a child.  He is married to her but that is still an abstract concept to him.  Marriage as an institution does not have any real meaning for him and he also sees men like his father all around him who are not at all constrained from indulging their baser instincts outside of marriage.

Arnab actually falls more into category 2 and yet I am so glad that the romantic in you made him act in a manner befitting between 2&3.  and me both can revel in the heroes honor that he did not unleash his lust on a 13 year old, nor did he seek out anyone older but return home.

I am really looking forward to the next part...please write soon.

Edited by Anamika100 - 07 September 2013 at 7:35pm

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neevankrish Senior Member

Joined: 30 September 2012
Posts: 649

Posted: 07 September 2013 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Great work...first it was loving a rape victim to death...then marrying a widow n becoming a father to her son...n now it's child marriage just amazing Smile Smile Smile u r really blessed wit writing skills...just keep thinkin abt more incredible plots n do write it for usClap Clap   Clap tc

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Shamz94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Wooow amazing update

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