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Crazy_soul IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Amazing update!.
Thank god he didn't do it.
Loved khushi's reaction at last...she's still a child.

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Chochoo83 Goldie

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:31am | IP Logged
it was awsumm chap so he didn't do that
khushii is so innocent loved it
thanks for pm

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kushigowda IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
sharing views is goodSmile

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IPK007 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -HEAVEN-

i want a proper redemption of arnav for going brothel...that para broke my eyes became moist...i want him to pay...
i know this kind of behaviour was normal back then but its really hard to except ...arnav did that too.
i love that arnav who promised khushi a secure future not this arnav. i hav only loathing for this arnav.
till the last update, i thought he ll go to the brothal but wont step inside it. he ll get some sense. he ll b responsible...but no!!
do arnav has any idea, how much his doing broke my heart????? i m literally crying now!!! that para affected me sooo badly. i cant bliv i started liking THIS arnav????

laughing at khushi's innocence wont work. he has broken his promise. now he HAS to pay...BAS

Jenny...u hav no idea, how much this chapter broke my heart!!! though the baby wala part was funny but i just cant bring myself to like this arnav again.

can plzzz do something so that i can love this arnav again????? he ll suffer...right??? there ll b redemption...right????
i dont want to hate this arnav sooo much but i cant love him either.

i donno if u r planning for a happy ending or sad ending...i want arnav to pay...BAS!

i know m being silly...but I AM WAITING FOR UR ANSWER SOON JENNY...DESPERATLY! :((((

this chapter...touched my heart,...broke my heart...made me cry!
only u can do this jenny...AMAZING UPDATE.
Aab answer de dooEmbarrassed can i get a answer soonish...plzzz or else i ll read this chap again n then cry cry n cry buckets :'(

NO OTHER FF affected me sooo much the way this one didConfused hats off...

Hey ! 

Thanks dear for taking an interest in TBWD and for your long , detailed and heartfelt comment. I understand your feelings about the current track in the story :) Thanks for being so emotionally invested in this story. The scene where he goes to the tawaif house to indulge in his most basic desires was disturbing no doubt but very much a reality of those days. Those were the days when there was no dating, open relationships with people of the opp sex were frowned upon and men like Arnab who were married to 13-14 year olds had three choices..First.. to just force their wives to grow having intercourse with them(commonest scenario...almost all of our great grandmoms were probabaly married off at this age and had kids soon after). Second, wait for their wives to grow up but succumb to their desires by visiting these places (second commonest scenario...which would have been the case in this story too, if Arnab hadn't discoved the age of the person he was about to have sex with)... Or the third scenario, which my idealistic mind (and yours) wishes had happened all the time...Arnab curbing his desires and waiting for his wife to grow up a little...

In this story...Arnab will  fall  somewhere in the category between 2. and 3...because like I had always maintained that he wasn't a typical young man of his times. But he wasn't perfect either..:) He succumbed to temptation but wasn't at peace with his decision.. and when he was saved just in time..(from being unfaithful to Khushi), he was relieved. This relief is what makes him different from his contemporaries..:)

Hope this helped..:)

Edited by IPK007 - 05 September 2013 at 9:54am

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
just beautiful...loved your update!

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged


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valeyrie Goldie

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Jenny I had a few doubts in my mind, hope you could answer them..
1. At that times, status of the families involved while marrying their children was very important... so does khushi come from similar backgrounds??
2 . As you said in the start that Khushi's whole family had succumbed to death coz of cholera, how did she manage to survive all that difficult time alone.
3. Did Arnab and Khushi's elder sister live a married life and then she died?? or had Arnab never seen her also
4. Also i really would like to know the age of Arnab and Khushi when they were married

nevertheless this Khushi is very endearing.. i get to see a glimpse of everything in her... I know she will grow up to be a real woman.. the woman Arnab wants.. also i would really love to see a glimpse of the Khushi she was before coming to Calcutta Smile

Edited by valeyrie - 05 September 2013 at 10:20am

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starsarun IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Got you dear. :)
But tell you what My grandmother got married at age of 20 with Dadaji. Even she continued to study after marriage. I am proud of them!!

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