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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 39)

mbbsrocks IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
waaao waaao waao update..
I was soo updating for this part..
and this is one of my most favourite stories..
Khushi is soo innocent..
too cute..
I dint find any flaw in this update so no criticism g..Wink

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kaur94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Great update Jenny
She was only 13 :O
Hmm Khushi wants a baby

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opsyellow IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
First I have one question which I did understand ! Did Arnab go through with it with that girl after knowing her age?
If yes then where did his morals go there? He want his wife who is now 14 to have her childhood and doesn't want her to miss that out, but its ok for him to have sex with a girl who is 13? Doesn't she deserves a childhood like Khushi or its that ok because she is a wh**e? And I dont think that Arnab will never find a woman in this world he lives in because every girl have seems to lost their childhood and have become a woman when they are ony 9 or 10! It seems like he have to make peace with his morals.
It mad me sick to think that what kind men will go to that place and have their with a child woman.
It is still nice of Arnab to think that Khushi deserves her childhood. But how long will he push her away? He seems have needs which I dont blame him for. He is human after all!
Poor Khushi! Still naive to think that she is ready to sleep with her husband because she want a baby and that is better then a doll! That made me laugh to but it mad me sad as well. She doesn't want to loose Arnab and ready to become a woman for that without knowing the full meaning of it.

Beautiful chapter!

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smileyhug7679 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Finally some proper talking happening
But Kushi is still so innocent 

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msmarple Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM Jenny.
Loved the update as usual.
Khushi' naivete is so endearing.

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lazylad8-FauZi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Beautiful she wants a innocent!!!

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spsharmila Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update..Big smile

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choochootrain Senior Member

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
How innocent kushi was...n she want a baby??!!!...arnab shd b more understandg towards her...hope they could at least b friends to get to know each othet better...

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