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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 38)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update! Khushi's innocence and Arnab's restlessness is very well written...The ending conversation is very cute...Enjoyed it a lot!

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
OMG! That was really cute! Even I laughed when khushi told arnav that she wants a baby!!!! Beautiful update! Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Updated in RED @page 38..

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
Amazing update loved it thank you for pm.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
Poor little Khushi. It's because of this idea that you have to let your husband do whatever he wants that so many Indian women don't think domestic violence is a crime. Thami just tell the girl what she should expect, instead of classifying it under "whatever he does". As for Arnav- I really respect him. He is young,sexually frustrated, finds his very young wife attractive, which makes him feel like a lowlife, and he has ideological clashes with his dad. Khushi is too innocent. A real live baby is cuter than a doll, but also a LOT more work. I found Arnav's reaction quite believable, although I think Khuhsi is gonna be madder than ever.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
poor khuhsi..
she s trying to give away everything only for arnav s sake...
he shouldn t have gone to such a place first of all...
khushi so wants to make things fine between them...
arnav doesn t have the slightest of idea of whats going on in that poor soul s mind...
if only arnav could have understood her better..
marvelous updateClap Clap  Clap Clap Clap Clap
update the next soon dearBig smile

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:33pm | IP Logged

That was a shocker when the girl with Arnab was just 13 years old. If it was a older lady, he would have done it with her.

 

Thammi is very nice. It broke my heart when she advised Khushi to allow her husband to do whatever he wants whether she likes it or not.

 

Good that Arnab noticed Khushi's behavior and went to talk to her. And the best thing was Khushi did not hide anything from him and told why she is trying to become a woman.

 

Very nice update. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Awesome update 

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