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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 136)

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged
What a fabulous story, I read it all at one go.

Amazing how you've transported us to the 1920s, with the sights, the smells ( the evocative fragrance of mango blossom in April took me back straight to the moonlit april nights of my childhood in a British town near Calcutta) and the sounds (koels cooing away in competition at dawn was the music that we heard every year of my childhood in that place),

I love the pace of this story, Jenny- it is so in keeping with the pace of the awakening of a child into womanhood.

There is such a parallel in the awakening of the child Khushi and the nationalist movement. an awakening of a people to their right to self government. In Arnab plays a role in both. 

This is a beautiful story, and yet so so poignant. You have such an amazing sense of place, Jenny, that has come through in all you three stories, place is not just the background to the story- it plays an important role in the story itself, in the telling of the story, in the role it plays in the characters' lives. That is so impressive.

Thank you so much for the pms.





Edited by Japonica - 19 September 2013 at 9:06am

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nikita-nair Senior Member
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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
i lvd it jenny..
u hv a uniq way of reprsnting each emotions of the character..
bt um afraid f the upcming lov triangl nd hpe that it wd nt apart arshi..!
w8n 4 the nxt updte..!

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anuprika Senior Member
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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 10:15am | IP Logged
girl...its just a kiss n d cheek..
i keep sayn myself..yet my heart missd sooo many beats..
i hv read the upate many times...
stilll lovn it
rushn to read once more Smile

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged
this is simply fabulous ...  Clap

Jenny u know it very well how to mesmerize the readers by ur writing... i never knew a mere cheek kiss could be that mesmerizing ... Day Dreaming 

here we got to know some past ... how this little khushi become his bride... and Pranab was  married too...

waiting for the next chapter...

  


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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
So Pranab is having feelings for Khushi but he is married and so is she

But Khushi only has eyes for her husband Arnab

I see Arnab is already thinking about moving away with his Khushi

and he definitely is having feelings for her, just like she is starting
to have the first stirring of feelings for him

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
What a beautiful update dear Jenny. Craving for more ...

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
amazing part...my heart is dhuk dhuk tooo.
thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
It was sad hearing about Khushi's loss. Her entire family was perish, and she was given a big responsibility to fill her sister's shoes. At such a young age. Yet she accepted it without complaints. 
I am glad Arnav has started liking Khushi, and that he is willing to wait for her to grow up before showing her the duties of a wife. He is also thinking about taking Khushi with him when he moves out. And that speaks a lot.  

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