The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS - Page 85

very very nice update...

you beautifully described those days...soo much innocence and purity  in ARHI moments ,each and every line u wrote about them...i do not have words left...her wait, his thank u kiss😉😉😉😛😛😛😛😛...very very touchy...

so pranab is also married, he is getting attracted to kushi,at his age it common i guess...

u r update is one thing and  our fellow readers and (writters )will  give the detailed review..i will wait for them also ...
Aqua Sandhya, Meera, Vgedin, kondhili,vandana sagar,disha,( i like u r pictures yaar in each nd every story) EXPELLIARMUS,Eccentrica, Rasgulla_sp...
no wonder u guys all of them become amazing writters...iam not offending any one sorry if iam miss any body,  these are the people will take first spots right  detailed review thats how i know. them..😊😊😊😊😊😊😊...

thank u for giving us nice update...

cheers...
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Edited by kushiarnav1 - 10 years ago

Wonderful Update!! First gift for Arnab from Khushi and their first kiss means cheek kiss.. It was a bliss to read you writings you know.. I never thought that Khushi is Arnab's second Child wife.. Khushi lost her everyone... Feeling sad for the poor soul... But now she has her Arnab babuu with her.. And after the kiss Khushi's explanation about her increasing heart beat was funny and cute.. Pranab was attracted by Khushi's charm.. Don't know what will the result of all this.. Waiting for next.. Edited by RockDiya21 - 10 years ago

I read it in one breath...I loved the ARSHI moment..I guess u have done a lot of research on bengali novels,culture as well as movies.hat's off to you...👏👏👏👏
Edited by dieforasr - 10 years ago

arre wah!!! updat jaldi aa jao!
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edit~~~~

Haila!!! forgot that i resed here!! sigh...me n my short memory!!!😕

commented on pg136😳
loved the update:)Edited by -HEAVEN- - 10 years ago

Taken

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Such a lovey update! My god! I cannot term those moments as first sign of bonding! It was purely impulsive! I just hope he wouldn't regret it later! I'm sure he wont because he was satisfied with her reaction to his actions!

And how things changed from khushi to his khushi! How he now includes her in his every thought and action!

Sad to read one died of chiken pox and the lady is just concerned that the kid dies with bangles! Senseless people! And more so the second wedding! Eww!

And pranab hmm poor guy! But in a way they seem more fine as the age says so! But arshi! So ya!

CheersEdited by TwilightStar_JP - 10 years ago

Updated on pg 126:) Hope you like it!

Phoole phoole dhole dhole

Awesome update! this one was pretty good then teaser...i was worring over arnab thinking about he being too old for khushi...this time around he is addressing her as his khushi😊

*blush*


Edited by LeenaRocks - 10 years ago

eee jennnyyy

whaaat ann updaaate :D
their firssst kisss...
lalalalal
simply lovedd the updaate :D