MG FF- Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan. /th#2 added - Page 34

Originally posted by: shumaila08

o wow maneet on vaccation nice part do continue 

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Priyanka

ye kya. beech me hi chod diya.

Not fair😡

But I was right you are sending them alone to spend some time. and I loved this Idea👍🏼

Originally posted by: lehr

nice update dear

Originally posted by: gill123

Nice update

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Nice part... loved that car scene..😃 sweet memories of Maneet.. Waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: manikka

superb part dear...

loved it...

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed

nice part

Part 7

firstly congratulations to all those fans who support drashti dhami in jhalak ...i am so much happy drashti win jdj.... 😊😃

is khushi mein i updating this ff today...

so now enjoy the update...😉

maan : packed this

she : yes sir

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He opened the door of car and came out from car and moves towards destination.

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Maan :  ghar mein koi dikh kyun nhi rha

Aur waqt to sb yaha baithke baat kr rhe hote hai.

.

Deepak

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Deepak : yes sir

Maan : sb kaha gye hai

Deepak : sie sb dinner ke liye bahar gye hai

Maan : hmm

Deepak : aapke liye kuch laayu

Maan : coffee

Deepak : ji

Maan : nhi ek minute

Tum rhne do

Deepak : ok

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He come into room and threw the court on couch.

Maan : kissi ne mujhe inform tak krna jaroori nhi smjha

.

Yaha tak geet ne bhi

.

Dad ke office aane se work jaldi khtm ho gya

To socha sbke liye gifts laayunga

To sb khush honge

Pr yaha toh koi hai hi nhi

.

He again called Deepak and said " car mein kuch packets rakhe hai ...unhe le aayo"

Deepak : hmm

   .

Maan : baki sb nhi

Par geet ko toh ek baar mujhe batana chaiye tha

.

He checks the cell and realizes his phone has switch offed.

Maan : galati to meri hai

He opened the phone then plugs the phone on charging and go in washroom.

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Geet : I hope maan ko ye sb arrangements pasand aaye

Sb ready ho gya

.

Par maan abhi tak kyun nhi aaye

.

Jaroor office se late nikle honge

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Shweta : ronit maan office se time pet oh nikal gya than a

Ronit : ha

Shweta : apne usse bataya toh tha na

Usse farmhouse jaana hai

Ronit : ha

Maine usse message kiya tha

Shweta : what

Message kyun kiya

Call krke ya aamne saamne nhi bta sakte the

Ronit : message mein kya problem hai

Shweta : usne check nhi kiya toh

Aap abhi geet ko call kriye

Aur uss se puchiye

Ronit : ok

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Her phone buzzed.

Geet : maan ko honga

She picks the phone and read dad name.

Geet : dad ka phone

Hello dad

Ronit : geet bte

Maan waha puch gya na

Wo office se 6 bje hi nikal gya tha

Geet (think) : maan jaroor puchne wale hi honge

Ydi inhe abhi ye bataya wo abhi nhi puche

Toh sb pareshaan ho jaayenge

Ronit : geet bte aap sun rhi hai na

Geet : ji

Wo puch gye hai

He covered the phone with palm and said to all "wo puch gya hai"

Shweta : thank god

Meri baat karwaiye maan se

Ronit : ek minute

Geet bte

Zaara maan se baat karwaiye

Geet : dad wo washroom mein hai

Abhi abhi aaye hai na

Ronit : ok bte

Apna dhayn rakhiye

Geet : ji

                          ***************

He come out from washroom and sits on couch and sees the phone.

Maan : miss call tk nhi hai

Then ne check the message.

Maan : dad ka message

He read the message and stands from couch.

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Maan : geet waha intzaar kr rhi hai

Aur mein yaha

.

Aaj toh bhut data pitne wali hai

                    ****************

Geet : ab tak toh aa jaana chaiye tha

Maan ko

                 *****************

Geet : maan ye koi aane ka waqt hai

Mein  kbse aapka wait kr rhe thi

Par aap as usual apni meetings mein busy the

Maan : geet maine koshish ki  thi par

Geet : sch mein koshish ki hoti

Toh aaj aap Aryan ke sath hote

Pata hai aapka wait sirf mein nhi har koi kr rha tha

.

Sbne mujhse pucha maan kaha hai

Kb tak aayenge

Last me jaake hume cake cut krna pda

Maan aaj Aryan ka first birthday hai

Pr aap humare sath nhi hai

Maan : geet bs

Maine nhi kaha tha

Party rakhne ko

Ye tumhara idea tha

.

Kitni baar kaha hai tumse kuch bhi krne se phle ek baar mujhse phle puch liya kro

Pr nhi

Tumhe toh khud ki krni hoti hai

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He is sitting in car his phone ringed.

He : sorry sir

Abhi gift lane mein thoda late ho jaayenga

Maan : kyun

He : sir jis car se hmara admi aa rha tha

Wo car kharab ho gyi hai

Maan : tum mujhe uska no. do

.

Aaj hi ye sb gadbad honi thi

Maan is busy in talking with someone and another side geet trying to call him.

Geet : phone abhi tak busy aa rha hai

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Wo khi gussa to nhi hai na mujhse

 

Pr ye plan mera nhi tha...

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He : surprise...

 

now one question...anyone want this type scene... in upcoming parts...😃

thoda jaldi batana mujhe...😉

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Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago

priyanka it was amazing. geet is waiting for maan but maan is not aware about this plan. finally he is going . i hope their relationship become beautiful again. waiting for next dear

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part..

cont.sooon