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MG FF- Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan. /th#2 added

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged

Hey friends, once again, I came with new ff, I hope you all like it.

I know, I know, many ff ongoing, but what I do, I want write one more.

I hope you all like it.

This ff name is "Waqt" and you all suggest me tag line with this title, after reading below post.

See below post...



Edited by priya_21 - 22 November 2013 at 5:47am

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Part 1

First ray of light enters into the room and disturb her sleep.  She turns and hugged his pillow, then she realizes it's not pillow, it's him.  She opens her eyes for seeing him... she caressed his face and said to him "I missed you".  And here, He slept peacefully..

She came more near to him and kissed on his cheek.. alarm clock ringed...

She: oh no

Aaj to bacho ko jaldi jaana tha

6 bj gye

She stands from bed and takes out clothes from wardrobe & hurriedly enters into washroom.

          #

He : I hate this alarm clock.

Hamesha galat waqt pe bajti hai

Jb bhi hum sath hote hai... tbhi ...

.

In complains mein , mein khud ko toh introduce krwana bhool hi gya

Hey, I am Maan singh khurana.

Now I am fully tired, so talk later.

He slept again.

               #

She came out washroom, water droplets falling down from hair.

She is wiping he hair from towel, some droplets fall on his cheek.

Maan : geet

Ye kya hai

Geet : am sorry

She wipes his cheek. He held her wrist and pulls her, she fall on his chest.

Geet : maan late ho rha hai

Bache

Maan : ssshh

He tucked her hair behind the ear, and pulls her more near to him. Her lips touched his lightly. Again clock ringed.

She came out from grip. And make bun hair style and move out from room.

                   #

Maan : shaadi ke 8 saal bit gye

.

He sees today date and then realizes "today is his anniversary".

Now we complete 9 yrs.


Note :- this is sweet love story of togetherness...




Edited by priya_21 - 18 August 2013 at 5:58am

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            index
part 1 on page 1

part 2 on page 4

part 3 on page 17

part 4 & teaser on page 27 

part 5 on page 40


part 6 on page 52

part 7 on page 61

for part 8 & 9 on page 70

part 8 on page 76

pics  on page 82

part 9 on page 91

part 10 on page 100

part 11 on page 113



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