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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 95)

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Can I res?  I am so excited...waiting...for some fireworks on and off the field ...

Anu and mints ...

Chaka pe Chaka mar ASR confidently 
Your mood will change almost instantly 
On the field and off play the game fairly 
Remember how makes you feel Khushi
And you will shall definitely have victory 
Simultaneously will start your love story.



Edited by vandana.sagar - 15 March 2014 at 6:04am

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and I here?

Ditto VandeeWink.. Lets set the Field on Fire! Embarrassed

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I am the umpire... I decide if I should keep letting ASR play!! Wink

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
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From the beginning itself, i couldn't stop myself from phangirling over Arnav. He was so much sensible and in control and totally reasonable this time. The boost by the previous game + his improving personal front equations bth being the reason. I liked it how sorted he was. He did well by breaking up with Lavanya, not because of the obvious reason ;), but actually there is no use carrying the burden of a non-working relationship, its better to put a full stop, before it takes the bitter route. Although i feel bad for Lavanya, but i know, that she knew, it had to happen. :(

i'm glad Arnav accepts, to himself that khushi is being a 'distraction' in his life. She is affecting him. ;)


more than Anger, in those anger management classes, Arnav would learn to manage himself in situations that is forced, or the point when situation goes out of control.


Clearly his performance, affects him at mental level, as now he is form, he is loosening up, which is nice, not completely though. A good player should be able to hold his nerves, even after a loss or a bad day. But i think, we learn both from our losses and gains and hopefully arnav would do so as well.;)

Khushi and Him, are getting along :) on a very unexpected convo. I never thought she'll ask him about Aman, but them Khushi, she is concerned for everyone, in a nice way :) and Arnav too was indulging, which was refreshing.


And comes in the Snakewa, where was he hidden till now?.. In his hole?Wink


Wanna see Arnav hit a 6, this time the ball being 'Khushi'. ;)

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Fantastic update. I think you are doing a great job balancing the story in the cricket world and the world outside it. 

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I can see why some may say there's too much description of the game but I think it's important. 
It has a significant bearing on Arnav's frame of mind. 
For me the longer the chapter the more for me to read!
Given Arnav's views of the media his relationship with Khushi can only progress slowly. I like the way you are showing how he is slowly opening up with her. 

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Un-resed my comment on Pg-104.

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