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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 93)

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 6:46am | IP Logged
No complain what so ever.. Loving this story. Though I am not die hard cricket fan, i am loving the way you described cricket in the story. And length of each chapter, I won't mind longer chapter Wink but no pressure Smile.
So please keep up the good work just the way you have been doing. Hope this will help. Smile

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 12:14pm | IP Logged

Ok !
1. I have no issues with the lenghts of the chapter! In fact the longer the better! So no complaints there
2. As for content ! Oh i love the balance you have creates btwn cricket n arshi story! N i dont think you give too much of cricket content! Infact incorporating all the cricketing details gives the story a touch of aunthenticity!
Having said that i know not many follow cricket that too IPL,so i believe one has too go according to what majority wants!
3. I guess pace of the story is fine! In eight chapters we have come a long way! Even in terms of arnav khushi relation!!
4. As a writer you are doing a pretty good job!

My suggestion would be! If you can givs us more frequent updates! I mean its just a request! I know people have their busy personal lives n all so no pressure! Just a request!
Thanks fof the note!
The USP of this story is its cricketing background!
Please retain that!

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
I have no complaints. If you want to give longer chapters then please feel free :-)

Im loving the story and so far there has been a good pace with it too.

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
I don't have any complaints- I think you're telling the story at a perfect pace, and I like how you've developed the characters. Just keep doing what you do :)

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
Hope Khushi doesn't use arnav just for the interview
Loved the update

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
I honestly love the balance you showing...between the two!
You write so well the pace is good too, I think it's coming to a point where their interactions are getting closer, which is amazing! I would love too see the attraction building!

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
Thank for the note,

It's nice of you to question the readers and ask for there feedback,

I personally have no complaints and think the story is a brilliant read and moving at a wonderful pace,

I will admit I'm not a huge fan of cricket (as you know I love my football) but I love reading how Arnav's cricket team is playing and improving in each update,

I was wanting more interaction between Arnav and Khushi but that's not a problem anymore as the last update we got too read a majority of the update on both of them having a wonderful conversation, 

The length of your updates are perfect and you always write long updates which is much appreciated, 

Eagerly waiting for the update xx 

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
I love the story totally, no complaints at all!!!!!

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