Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 - Page 69

Story getting more interesting & arshi getting little more comfortable with each other

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Awesome update. Arnav was not only opening up but also intrigued about Khushi. It was quite interesting the way he  observed each expression of Khushi and I laughed when he made that suggestive comment during their dessert conversation😉.  Loved it 👏

awesome updt
so finaly arnav is behaving normal with khushi
dinner help them to behave normaly
thnx for pm

Great update
Thanks for PM :)

Just started to read. Cool combination - cricket & Arnav Khushi!!

congo on the century

I read all the updates of this SS too in one go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arnav as a cricketer is really interesting as this is the first time someone portrayed him in this role!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
there is an enigma and mystery surrounding him!!!!!!!!!!!!
Would love to delve into his past!!!!!!!!
he and Khushi are a little more comfortable with each other now...
Both are equally aware of the other!!!!!!!!!
Is there attraction????????????
Will the interview result in something more!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOTE:

Hello,

I will try to post the next chapter tomorrow night, but I have a few questions in the meantime. I would really appreciate honest feedback if you guys have time!

1. What do you guys think of the length of the chapters? Are they too short or are they being dragged?

2. Would you guys like more or less descriptions of the cricket games? I know that many of you have expressed that you don't have an interest in cricket while others are true fans. I'm trying to balance out the cricket content, but please let me know what you guys prefer.

3. What do you think of the pace of the story too far?

4. Do you have any suggestions that will help me improve as a writer?

I would really appreciate your feedback! Please feel to respond on this thread, or PM/scrap me.

Also, I have a hard time responding to reader's comments for this story as I don't want to give away the story - is that a problem to readers??

I have no complaints...loving it all...