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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 117)

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Posted: 24 March 2014 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Nice update, continue soon :)

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Posted: 24 March 2014 at 6:50am | IP Logged
So Arnav is very attracted to kushi. Jealous Arnav nice to see encounter;-). 

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Posted: 24 March 2014 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Just caught up with last three parts. It was fabulous. The way you have described every little detail about Arnav and khushi's professional life was just amazing.. Who was that guy, felt that he was shyam but what's his relationship with Arnav??Shocked. Last part you showed the attraction Arnav felt towards Khushi was described beautifully. EmbarrassedSmile

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Posted: 24 March 2014 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Love it

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Posted: 25 March 2014 at 9:47am | IP Logged
So I finally caught up on all the chapters I had missed (chapter 3 onwards). And I can't tell you what a great time I had reading them. Don't ask me what kept me away for so long for I have no proper answer to that. Just want you to know that this story is just as exciting and intriguing for me now as it had been when you had started it. I mean cricket and arnav - oh, your really can't go wrong there!

One of my favourite books, Zoya factor, is also based on cricket and ever since the talks of 22 yards had come up (when I had quite conveniently started hoping that Zoya factor is based on that book), I couldn't stop myself from imagining arnav Singh Raizada (err...I mean barun) in the uniform and on the field...sweat, muscles, hot butt and all. So this story, my dear, is a dream for me LOL


Hoping you'd update soon coz I can't wait to find out about that mystery man who is giving me weird vibes and I can't wait to find out how Arnav's and khushi's relationship progresses. It's quite lovely to see Arnav warm up to Khushi. He's loosening up and slowly becoming less stiff and more open to things. And I must say you have shown the progress and changes wonderfully, taking it slow and taking things forward patiently.

Lots of love!

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Posted: 25 March 2014 at 11:52am | IP Logged
edited My comment on Pg-120.

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Posted: 25 March 2014 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Just read the whole story!
Seems amazing! :D
Cant wait to read more
Asr as a cricketerDay Dreaming


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Loved the update one night out this is the results wonder what will happen once they are closer

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