Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 - Page 86

I really like how you've developed their relationship- it's such a gradual giving of trust, and you make it seem so natural. They're not just jumping into anything- It's very, very realistic, and I think you've done a fabulous job with that. I always thoroughly enjoy your writing, and this story is no exception.

Edited by likeadesigirl - 10 years ago

Thank god Akash was interested in Payal
I'm glad Arnav was able to have a normal talk with Khushi. He ran away from her because he thought her intern was her date
Oh dear
Now Khushi is all confused

Awe...loved the update... Thanks for the pm...

Awesome update!!! Loved it 😊

I like the convos between arnav and khushi. Their encounters have such a natural flow to them.

Oft the physical attraction tendency has just been increased many notches and this girl also click to intellectual level all in all ASR is getting a really good companion from the 'enemy group' that he doesn't want to bow down to the sign from his brain of staying away.

He got jealous with the intern being Khushi's date? That's why he left. Really!

Wow, "I was in the middle before I know it has begun." Mr. Darcy P&P. good job ASR.

Their light banter and easy comrade was nice. So he has prejudice for journalist considering them as the reason to his parent early demise. Wonder what will be his reaction if and when the piece on him will be published pened by KKG?

Khushi didn't like is early and sudden departure and not sure of the reason why. Well 'Aag Dono Taraf Baraber Lagi Hai' 😉

Continue soon would like to read Arnav thoughts of being jealous 😉Edited by rk2127 - 10 years ago

So, Aakash is attracted to Payal.

It's not going to end up well when he finds out about Khushi's boss's plan - which I fear is inevitable. 

🤗aweosme dear 

Enjoying this story so much!😃