ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) - Page 22

wow... new story
awesome starting Tina
very interesting
khushi is now living in sheesh mahal and arnav also lived there!? but payal said they left and if they were living there so why it was covered in dust
maybe arnav and anjali come there at night only!!! as arnav and anjali is not ghost coz khushi heard his heartbeat
very interesting start
looking forward for more
continue soon
thanks for the pm

WOOOW!!! now thats spooky but interesting...he cant be a ghost but what if he is from a another universe...I dont know..very interesting story...and i know it will be amazingly briliant because you must have plenty of surprises for us...I cant wait to read more

tina di! he has to be a ghost! or it has to be khushis dream!

Awesome update
Thanks for Pm
Continue soon

Interesting concept...

interesting start

Looking forward to see how this one unfolds.

Very nice start…After reading the first chapter I really thought it was a Ghost story!

 

As Arnav says if there are so many workers taking care of the house, then why is it in almost ruins?

Also, he behaved as if he has been staying in this room always. Then why is his room dirty and dusty?

 

I thought sister and brother ghosts have come back since new occupants have arrived…

 

Will wait for next chapter to clear the confusion…

Edited by pinkly - 10 years ago

I liked the concept but am really confused what really was that???

nice concept 

update soon