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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 120)

saruni0109 Senior Member

Joined: 24 January 2013
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Posted: 24 September 2013 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Sory sory sory fr d late comment i got busy wth my studies, k lets coment abt update, an amazing idea dear at first it panicd me nw i got it, but wandryn what wl be hapn in futur, thr childhood adventr was so cute and kushi circld the servant part was funny ;)
chaptr 4 starting was too funny hahaha, ending part was so romantic i jst lvd it, no wondr i knw both wl fall in lv, hope to read sm mre romantic scenes.

penrith Senior Member

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Posts: 521

Posted: 24 September 2013 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
omg this story os wow... i can't get enough of it...
rashikhandelwal Senior Member

Joined: 28 February 2013
Posts: 598

Posted: 24 September 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
suprb update...vry confusing ad really unbeliable update...kuch samaj hi nai araha...but one thing is sure aftr reading ths update i wl be eagerly watng to rd mr cnt soon ad thanx fr pm
Mrs_Darcy_17 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 25 April 2012
Posts: 19196

Posted: 25 September 2013 at 12:36am | IP Logged
beautiful update di
the shooting star scene, n the dawn scene were beautiful!!!!!
finally they had fallen in love
awww... he engraved her name beside him
does that mean k their love can make their wish to hold each other close even in daylight possibleShockedShockedBig smileBig smileBig smile
kaash ye sach ho
cont. asap di
Breath-Mark IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10907

Posted: 25 September 2013 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Awesome update.
So the story had traveled quite abit in this one.
Khushi has the first experience of love with Arnav. The card and rose was a cute idea.
And arnav reciprocated it well. Can't wait for the next update.
gifttag IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 February 2012
Posts: 2651

Posted: 25 September 2013 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Tina loved this chapter sooo much..I just was lost in the time zone myself and also reading with Apprehension in my heart as I saw Khushi falling helplessly in love with Arnav... Anjali is getting married and soon Khushi' s parents will start to talk about Payal and then her marriage too and then how will she cope ?
They are both so aware of each other and they share all their issues with each other like a couple. Khushi is giving Arnsv her emotional support when needed and Arnav too showed a little bit of possessiveness when she mentioned Raj.
Two scenes stood out to me rather than one Tina. I loved the shooting star scene as I can visualise that one and its beautiful plus the conversation that followed. Second one was when Khushi gave a single Rose and a card to Arnav and he did't know what a Valentine day is.. awesome.
Now like that feather this ASR-KKG is also added in the list of things if one or both of them needs to provide it later that this time travel I thinking too much and borrowing problems instead of enjoying the moment ?
Absolutely loved the update.
Waiting eagerly for this surprise ( what is it ???)
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 27 April 2013
Posts: 11854

Posted: 25 September 2013 at 1:23am | IP Logged
what a lovely chapter.
I just loved Arnav's gift to Khushi.
Aww they are in love with each otherEmbarrassed
Continue soon:D
tinsel_akira Goldie

Joined: 08 June 2012
Posts: 2091

Posted: 25 September 2013 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Wwwooowww I just read this Fiction now...
How come I get pm for other updates but not this one?
Well whatever... :P
But this is such an amazing story and kinda weird too...
I mean what's in the future?
No idea!!!!!!

I think this is your writing which I like, but second to Shameless
For me that was the best <3

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