Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:23am | IP Logged
their first meeting.. wow how youthful!!
this is like a story inside a story.. a freaking interesting story.. its stylish, epic, dashing and adorable!
you have different styles di.. be it the cookie story of Ria in addicted which opened virat's eyes about his enemy's plan, be it virat's cancer story to manvi by which he took her opinion in my umbrella, be it the sleep talking of manvi in BILU which told alot to virat from her love for him to her desire for him, be it Diya teaching virat about life in ROS or be it each event that happened in a way to open manvi to virat in sacha pyaar (and a lot more).. every thing has something tactful, something new and something interesting which drives the plot or the particular situation..
what made me blabber the above is the way u drove this first chapter, their first meeting along with a couple of freaking songs.. it is something epic and attractive!! its such a brilliant move by u which carries alot of beauty and style..
song selection is a hard part coz it shud suit the chapter, u did it brilliantly! and to add cherry on top of ice cream, the way u made our couple to sarcastically use the lines of the songs for their first meeting and the first adiue from each other is such a splendid work!!! u just nailed it!! see u are damn different and unique,, u attract me in all the possible ways..
Swetha has checked virat out!! it was shocking and interesting for me.. i so want manvi and swetha to recall the moment and virat to catch them on spot..
virat had been a really smart person,, approaching a girl without getting a slap is a huge task, he not only approached her, but spoke lines that would make any girl drool over and indeed caught a crush in her heart.. OMG his smartness with his words are more than perfect!!! not to forget darling manvi gave back her dialogues equally dashingly!!
i always find virat and manvi's POV poles apart.. not in opinions but the tone.. while manvi's pov used to be very much detailed, soothing and sweet,, virat's pov used to be action filled, funfilled and strictly upto date..
the first thing she notices being his smile and his sparkling eyes, she sensing a pull, a connection towards him,, dat was so lovely.. it was like a character of a sweet girl..
on the other hand, virat like a dutiful boy checking her out and falling for her beauty was rocking!!!
the conversation between viren & virat did reveal dat virat is the heart throb among the twins..
"Sorry, I try to stay away from billionaires. They are very materialistic and soul less."
''He smiles a really wide one with a 'So, you noticed me' expression''
"Don't go throwing money in wells for a kiss. I accept credit."
"Bye weird stranger on the footpath!"
"Bye beautiful girl in the bar."
dialogues,, bang on!!! rocking di!!! so stylish, sarcastic, epic and clever!!
virat-manvi of addicted whom i figured as much matured and perfect have really enjoyed a fresh beginning.. very beautiful!!!
i captured manvi's thoughts that told me that she's a sweetheart... which line you wonder?? ''I really think that love is a matter of heart. Matters of heart are to be left to our heart and we should just wait - wait for that right moment, to meet the right person and seize that day'' very adorable line!!! loved it
Edited by virmanhus - 05 September 2013 at 11:29am