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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 33)

ashmifebaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 3:30am | IP Logged
excellent part ...
your devil comes wrong timeAngry
continue soon dear...

Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 7:28am | IP Logged
PART: 13 (c)

When Sameer was talking to shriza regarding dere so sudden love nd marriage two person cme inside nd seeing dem all went to shoch mode.
They were Ariya who was dere to stop marriage. Rathod was d 1st one to get out of shock.
Rathod- Rawte, Riya ye kya majak hai.
Arjun- Majak nhi hai Rathod maine Riya se shadi kar li. Aur ye bhi prove kar diya ki zindagi ko ek mauka dena chahiye. Thnks maya to make me realise. Tum apna divorce cont karo.
Arjun to magistrat- sir plz cont their divorce.
Magistrat- mujhe mera kaam mat sikhao, samjhe tum. Aur Mr n Mrs Rathod main aap se ye kehna chah raha tha ki main aap dono ka divorce accept nhi kar raha hun.
Ramaya- but sir...
Magistrat- Atleast give one more try to ur relationship 4 six months. And after dt u both dont want to live together dan i vl accept ur divorce.
Rathod- but sir ...
Magistrat- jyada bole to time period badha dunga.
Ramaya nodded their head nd turn back to go but only stopped by magistrat.
Magistrat to Ariya- kya tumne marriage register karwaya.
Riya- nahi sir... Hum abhi shadi karke aa rahe hai.
Magistrat- koi baat nhi aao main register kar deta hu.
Arjun- iski koi zarurat nhi hai.
Magistrat - zarurat kaise nhi. Chalo aao aur papers pe sign karo.
Now Arjun was fuming frm inside nd glaring at Riya along with smacking his head for agreeing on Riya's stupid idea.
Yes u guessed it right they r facking of getting married.
Riya in mind- oh god ye kya ho raha hai. Natak ke chakkar me Riya tu actually me Mrs Arjun Rawte ban ne ja rahi hai. I m sure kal ki news headline hogi ki acp rawte ne apni new wife ka kr diya murder.
Oh god plz save me.
But it seems god r busy in match making game. 1st is shriza nd 2nd are Ariya.

Far from dem a handsome man is talking with a girl on phone.
Man- hi baby how r u. Listen i hv a surprise for u. Any guesses.
Girl- no tell me na.
Man- I m back. I m in mumbai. Cme back soon, Aisha.
Aisha- Baby its awesome n 4 ur kind info i m also back frm case.
Man- oh thats great. I vl meet u in eve at ur place till den keep dreaming abt me.
Aisha- Samrat i love u.
Samrat- i love u too baby.
And samrat cut d call n thinking in mind.
Samrat in mind- I m sorry Aisha. In sab me involve karne ke liye i m sorry nd u too( thnking abt sumone)
Aisha main tumhe sab kuch clear kar deta but when i cme to knw u r joining den i cant stop myself for entering deep in ur heart. As u r my key to complete my mission and with ur chief i hv some unsettled work.
So Aisha nd etf i m cming.
Scene shifts to etf office.
All r hell shocked to knw abt three couples dt is Ramaya, Ariya n Shriza. And in shock all r congratulating dem. And to their relief Rathod's phone rang indicating arrival of new case. Soon case get solved. After case Whereas Ramaya r trying to act normal our two etf girl Riya n Liza r hiding frm their husband n to b husband who r in search of their girls to kill dem. Both man r cursing himself to follow dem.
Latet Rathod called day of all headed to their home. But Rathod stopped Ariya nd shriza nd instruct dem to seat inside his suv.
They turn to his suv only to find maya waiting 4 dem.
All seat inside suv nd Rathod drove to Maya's house.
All entered inside house except ariya as maya wants to welcome new couple traditionaly. Maya did arti nd welcome ariya. Where riya was hving tears of joy on d other arjun was fuming in anger.
Once everythng get done all settled on sofas. There was pin drop silence. So Maya decided to break it.
Maya- Arjun u made right decision to marry riya. She is a darling. U knw liza also want to marry.
Sameer- but dt doesn't mean ki i vl let her.
Maya- oh cmmn stop being so possessive brother. Liza loves shree n we sud help them. Shree is nice u too knw dt.
Rathod- Main bhi pyar ka dushman nhi hu but remember dere is Maa sa nd her decision vl decide evrythng.
Rathod to shree- aur ek dusre se pyar karte ho to thik hai but not more dan dt. Samjhe.
Shree- Yes sir.
Rathod- ok. So leave.
Shree- ji sir.
Saying so he stand up to go.
Maya to liza- Liza shree ko bye nhi kahogi.
Liza looks at his bhai where he is busy in glaring maya. Maya shrug it off nd motion her to go.
Maya takes ariya to their room. (Arre guys samjha karo newly married hai SR to banta hai but in a hatke style.)
Giving space to ariya Maya cme back in living area but didnt find rathod. She finds him n atlast she finds him at balcony busy in glaring shriza who seems to be in talk but actually fighting with smiles.
His trances broken by maya's voice.
Maya- Is tarah ghuroge to ankhe bahar aa jaegi.
Sameer chuckled at seeing old maya.
Rathod- purani maya ko dekh acha laga.
Maya in serious- Woh maya kabhi wapas nhi aaegi. Wo us riste ke sath wahi mar gayi.
Rathod- Ok. Stop all dis.
Maya- hmm...
Rathod- Ammm... Maya can i asked u sumthing abt kids.
Maya- cme i vl show u sumthing.
Maya lead him to her bedroom which is filled with Samar and Samaya's pic frm dere birth to till now.
Sameer's eyes filled with tears.
Rathod- Samar aur Samaya kaha hai.

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saritak IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
super update
love it
cont soon
Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khemanisarita

super update
love it
cont soon

thnks sarita n i luv all ur creations.
Sorry for not cmmnting.
But i love all nd u knw i download all ur creations.

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saritak IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Samara92

Originally posted by khemanisarita

super update
love it
cont soon

thnks sarita n i luv all ur creations.
Sorry for not cmmnting.
But i love all nd u knw i download all ur creations.

thanks dear
Harshamara Goldie

Joined: 29 June 2013
Posts: 1224

Posted: 28 November 2013 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by alee001

read it in one go.!!!! its really diff story!!!!

soo finalyy maya comes to know the truth!! wat will happen now??

who is the man talked to aisha???!! is samrat is samar??? or i missed any link???

update soon and pm me
thnks dear for liking it.
And d person is samrat talking with aisha.
After some updt he vl made a grand entry.

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rimi_invisible IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
it was a brilliant update...rathod and maya ka divorce aisehi ruk gaya...bichara arjun phas gaya buri tara se..

now who is this samrat??somehow related to samar and sameer??
sameer and kids missed them so much...bring them back soon...

continue soon...thanks for pm
alee001 Goldie

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Posts: 1625

Posted: 28 November 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
haha!!! so to save one couple here come 2 couples..!!!
AR ki suhagraat??? hahah!!! suhagraat nahi murder raat bolo!!! LOL LOL!! i just loved the magistrate.!!!Wink

P.S: please dnt make my ayesha heart to break.!! she is only sensible char in etf!!! i know u wnt disappoint me Wink Wink!!

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