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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 3)

Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 11:46pm | IP Logged


Rathod shows d girls face to Arjun. Seeing her unconcious he inquired abt her.

Arjun- Yeh yaha! Ye behosh kaise huyi.

Rathod- Meri wajah se isse chot lagi.

Now its enough for Arjun. He takes Maya frm his arms n marched to SUV. He makes her lie in back seat n ask Riya to bring some water.

Arjun- Riya jaldi se pani lao.

Riya handed him a bottle. Arjun sprinkle some water on her face n get in her senses.

Arjun- Maya! Maya! R u ok now. Aur tum yaha kar kya rahi ho.

Maya cmes to her senses n sees dt her Arjun is infront if her.

Maya (rudely)- Its non of ur business.And she get out of suv to go bt one voice stop her.

Rathod- It is Maya.

Maya- plz Sameer. U keep ur mouth shut.

Arjun- Maya u hv to ans me. And wat d hell u r wearing.

Maya's dress:

Maya- I wont n frm since wen u r acting lyk him (pointing to Rathod.)

Maya- And why sud i ans u. Who r u ?

Arjun- coz i n ur brother. Big one.

Maya- u r not. We r twins.

Arjun- I m 1 min elder than u. So u r my lil' sis.

Maya- plz Arjun stop behaving like typical brother.

Rathod (angerly)- Maya! Is dis d way u sud talk to ur bhai.

Maya- plz sameer u dont tell me abt relation after all u kill... ( before she can cont he slapped her vry hard n she fell on ground.)

All gasped at his act. Arjun holds him by his colour. Bt stop by her word.

Maya- Stop it Arjun. Stop ur drama as i m going. Plz u both dont show ur face next time.

She goea frm dere. Rathod n Arjun sees her going, den turned to thier team.

Rathod- koi kaam nhi hai kya?

Choreeya goes to cmplt thier work.

Few hrs later~

Scene- ETF introgation room.

Arjun n Rathod r asking question to Nadiya.

Arjun- kaun ho tum or tumhare sathi kaha hai.

Nadiya- Tumne galat insaan ko pakda hai ACP.

Rathod- oh really! Aur yeh galat phehmi tumhe kaise huyi.

Nadiya- I m undercover officer u fools n u destroyed my work f 8 months.


Edited by Samara92 - 15 August 2013 at 11:55pm

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IshitaRocks015 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 12:12am | IP Logged
aawsssuumm part!!!!
finally they caught her..
waiting eagerly 4 d nxt part!!Big smile

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saritak IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 12:24am | IP Logged
cont soon
thanks for a pm

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Amritamalhotra Goldie

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Ahha..good start...
Seems u finished it too early...
Waiting for next update. ..

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ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged
samara it was awesome update yaar.
read both.
nice cs.
so maya is arjun sister.
why she behave roudley to them.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.

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ZaBeerHolic IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13002

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:06am | IP Logged
So,Maya is Arjun's sister...
But,why does she hate Sam bhai so much????
Why did Sam bhai slap Maya?
Arjun ne kiska collar pakra?
Oh God...
Inne saare mysteries'...
Loved Nadia when she told Arjun and Sam bhai abt hw they failed her mission.
Good start.
Continue soon.

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Aabish_02 Goldie

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged
awesome part
maya is arjun twin sister
update next part soon

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Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Both the updates r super fantastic.

OMG Maya is Arjun's twin sis.

But why she hate both of thm??????

Continue soon.

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