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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 20)

Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Ye updt jaldi me diya hai.
Utna accha nhi hai.
Sorry to disappoint u guys.
Bt my health is not gud at all.
So plz frgv me 4 any mistake.
And also sorry 4 not pming.
Now i m not feeling well so i m going to rest.
It may happen dt i wont b online bt dont stop loving my story.
Luv Samara.

Snehajain IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Awesome update...SmileSmile
Continue soon...SmileSmile
rizwanaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 8:46am | IP Logged
amazing part
the kids are really cute
but can be dangerous if someone
messes with themLOL
sameer also met them
eager fornxt update
cont soon
Shanafr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Super mez update
Cont soon
Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 08 September 2013 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
PART: 9 (e)


In d last part d two lil kid knocked down d best officers of ETF n dey all get bailed by Rathod n Arjun. On his way back to home Rathod met d same lil kids nd offered dem lift to thier home. The duo settled demselves at d front seat. Rathod did a little chit chat with dem.

Rathod- To tum dono ka naam kya hai ?

Lil boy- Mela naam Samal Lathod hai aul ye meli sistel Samaya Lathod.

Rathod understands thier problem of calling 'L' instead of 'R'. So he enquired .
Rathod- Samar Rathod n Samaya Rathod ????

Both lil kid nodded thier head in positives. Rathod again asked dem.

Rathod- Tum dono itne chote ho aur is tarah akele bahar itni shopping bags lekar ghum rahe ho koi tumhe chot pahunchata to.

Samaya- Alle uncle dont worry hume kuch nhi hoga. San humali mumma ko jante hai aur hume to unse bhi jyada hum swt jo hai.

Rathod just smiled at kids.

Rathod- But phir bhi bacho is tarah akele??

Samar- Wo kya hai na uncle aaj hum mothel'day pal sulplise dena chahte the. Aul shopping bhi kalni thi. Buboo ne plomise kiya tha ki wo hume shopping pe le jaegi pal unhe ek kaam k liye goa jaana pala. Jate waqt laste me unhone hume drop kal diya or kaha tha ki stole wale uncle hume ghal drop kal denge. Ghal paas me tha to hum pedal hi aa lahe the ki aap mil gaye.

Rathod- Par Mother's day kal hai na??
Samar- Wo kya hai na mumma ek kaam k liye Pune ja lahi hai. 3 din baad aaengi. To aaj raat ko hum celebrate karenge??
Rathod- Phir tum dono akele??
Samaya- Next day se Daycale camp sulu ho laha hai to hum 1 week ke liiye camp me lahege.

Rathod- Tumhare Mom Dad kya karte hai??

Samaya- Mumma Papa ACP hai but humne Papa ko nhi dekha.

Rathod- Kyu??

Samar- Mumma to Papa ke bale me kuch bolti nhi pal Buboo n Dadi sa bolti hai papa mission pal gaye hai.

Rathod sensed dt sumthing must b wrong with thier father so he silently change d topic.

Rathod- To mumma k liye shopping ho gayi.

Samaya- hmm! Unke liye fav chocholate n flowers liya, unki needed softwale, unke liye ek beautiful dless bhi aul ye kya hai (while chekung d bags) bhai ye CD apne li hai.
Samar- Nahi. Sayad mall ki hogi hum kal uncle ko de denge.
Samar- Uncle humali society aa gayi??
Rathod parked d Car near Rama Society. Both get out of SUV n bid bye to him.

Rathod (thought)- Pata nhi in bacho se milne par ek apnapan feel ho raha hai.Kitne cute hai ye dono.

After dropping dem he also goes to his home.

Next Day
At 11:30 am

As usual all r sitting around conference table nt dere is sumthing change in etf.
Choreeya r trying dere best not to make any mistake to anger dere bosses bt thier chit chat help thier chief to lose his temper.

Rathod- Tum logo ki agar bate khatam nhi huyi hai to bolo wapas usi jail me bhej du jaha se chudaya tha.
I dont belive ki tum sab is tarah lock up me band miloge.
Wo to chodo Chotu aur Shree tum dono apne badges ghuma diya. ETF kehlane layak nhi ho. Shame on u guys.

Arjun- Rathod inki chodo inse kuch aspect nhi kar sakte bt Aisha yeh to irresponsibility ki line cross kar gayi. I mean ki itni important case ki detail wali CD isne kho diya just bcoz madam ek bacchi se argue kar rahi thi. Imopossible all of u.

Both boss left the room leaving thier juniors who r cursing lil kids in thier mind.

ChoReeYaSha (in mind)- I swear ager tum bacche kahi mil gaye to tum gaye kaam se.?????

Later ETF get d news dt a Daycare Camp is being attacked by some terrorist groups. ETF swiftly made thier entry in Daycare n kill all terrorist.
All teachers r now observing all kids. Soon a teacher sensed dt two kids r missing. She enquired abt dem. Arjun also came to know dt. Than a lil girl told dem one of d terrorist has taken dem somewhere.
Arjun- Beta aap ko pata hai wo un dono ko kaha le gaye hai.
Kid- Wo un dono se kisi CD k liye puch rahe the to Samar aur Samaya ne bola ki wo unke ghar par hai.

Hearing d name Rathod felt a sharp pain in his heart. He worridly ask d kid.
Rathod- Kya naam bola apne?? Samar aur Samaya??

Kid nods head in positive.

Arjun to teacher- Kya aapke paas inki koi pic hai???
Teacher showed dem thier pic bt most importantly his eyes caught d name of thier parents.

Rathod only see d pics which is taken by Arjun frm register.

Rathod- Ye to Samar aur Samaya hai. Rama society me rehte hai.

Arjun- Tum inhe jante ho??

Rathod- Ha! Kal main in dono se raste par mila tha aur inke society drop kiya tha.
Ye bacche ghar par akele hai. Inki maa kisi kaam se Pune gayi hai. Aur koi Buboo hai jo goa me hai. Hume in bacho ko bachana hoga.

All moved towards Rama society for d rescue mission. Soon terrorist died n d two kid get rescued. Bt b4 dying terrorist planned a bomb n in dt explosion total house was burning in fire. Kids were vry much frightened due to all bt Rathod taken d gud care of dem. When he tried to give dem to other dey clutched him vry tightly n not ready to leave him. So Rathod thought he vl move back to office with kids nd rest of d team vl do pending work.

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Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 08 September 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Thank u Jia03 always liking my story first. Thank a lot 4 ur support. Now its time to share ur views with us.
Plz cme out of ur shell n share ur views.
Luv Samara

Edited by Samara92 - 08 September 2013 at 1:09pm

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jia03 Goldie

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Posted: 08 September 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Samara92

Thank u Jia03 always liking my story first. Thank a lot 4 ur support. Now its time to share ur views with us.
Plz cme out of ur shell n share ur views.
Luv Samara

Hi, your welcomeSmile
i am very bad at commenting so i usually prefer liking the stories rather than commenting...
but i must say ur story is really niceStar and very intriguing... keep up the good workClap
fly.high IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3150

Posted: 08 September 2013 at 1:20pm | IP Logged 1st...

i expected some high voltage drama nd i got i thought the similarities nd coincidnts will click vid Rathod...

continue soon...

eager for th face off


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