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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
read it in one go.!!!! its really diff story!!!!
soo finalyy maya comes to know the truth!! wat will happen now??

who is the man talked to aisha???!! is samrat is samar??? or i missed any link???

update soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART: 13 (b)

Maya's heart broke into pieces after knowing truth. To whom she loved beyoned anything was a traitor. In shock mode she goes to her room nd cried her heart out. All team cme to abt it nd Liza was feeling vry guilty to misbehave with Sameer as she also dont know anything abt truth.
Liza to Sameer- Bhai sa i m really vry sorry. But bhai plz help bhabhi. She needs another baby.
Sameer- Liza i cant do anything abt it. I cant force her. It vl be her decision.
Arjun- I vl talk to her.
Saying so he moved inside Maya's room who is staring out of window.
Arjun moves 2ward her nd place his hand on her shoulder. She turns to him nd as expected she is crying.
Arjun- Maya plz dont cry. Just forget everything nd move on.
Maya- Bhai (4 d 1st time she called him bhai) kya life me move on karna itna easy hai. Agar aisa hai to aap kyun nhi aage badhe.
Bhai Maine Samar ko accha insaan soch kar pyar kiya par wo gaddar nikla. Aur sach janne ke bad mere dil me jo pyar tha wo bhi mar gaya. Aur na hi main Sameer ko apna paungi. Isliye maine ek faisala liya hai.
Arjun- Kaisa faishla?
Maya- To divorce him. Maine lawyer ko bol diya hai aur humare mumbai pahunchte hi i vl divorced him.
Arjun- Maya pagal mat bano. Sameer ek acha life partner hai.
Maya- But not i m. Meri wajah se usne bahut kuch khoya hai ab waqt aa gaya hai sab kuch pane ka.
Arjun- Use apna sath aur pyar bhi do.
Maya- Bhai kehna bahut aasan hai but karna muskil. Aap ko bhi sath aur pyar ki zarurat hai.
And plz main apna irada nhi badalne wali. Main Sameer ko is riste ke bandhan se mukt kar dungi.
Arjun listening all dis cme out of room nd inform all abt her decision.
Sameer also agreed on it nd goes out of hospital to get some alone time. Arjun also goes to hospital terrace to calm himself followed by riya. But all r thinking how to stop there divorce.
Aisha nd Chotu goes inside to change maya's decision but they cant.
Liza expect d same.
Shree- Ye Maya na pagal ho gayi. God ne second chance diya hai jo ki uske paas 1st chance tha use gawana chah rahi hai.
Liza- what r u saying?
Shree- Arre Sameer sir uske 1st chance jo ab 2nd chance bhi hai.
Liza- specky stop talking non sense thing. Nd think to stop divorce. Mumbai jate hi ye dono divorce paper par sign karenge.
Shree- Mumbai jane se rok de.
Aisha- shut up shree. Umm... Let me think... Ya kyun na hum inhe ehsaas dila de ki they r in love with each other nd atleat give a chance to their marrige.
Chotu- Par Aisha 1 din me pyar nhi jaga sakte na as we r leaving 2morrow 4 Mumbai.
Shree- Kash aisa kuch hota ki we can stop dere divorce.
All once again goes to thinking mode.

Ariya at hospital terrace-

Riya- Is everything all right?
Arjun- Dont know Riya yeh Maya kyun nhi samajh rahi hai. Use Sameer k sath uske riste ko ek mauka dena chahiye.
Riya- Wo zarur degi bas use samjhana hoga.
Arjun- Samjhaya maine par usne Rathod ko divorce dene ka faisala kar liya hai.
Riye- Aap ne gusse me samjhaya hoga.
Arjun- matlab?
Riya- I dont knw ki aap logo ki kya problem hai but Jo baat aap ne gusse me kahi wahi baat aap pyar se bhi samjha sakte the na.
Arjun- Tumne suna nhi usne kya kaha.
Riya- Sir ek baat kahu hum logo ko rai to badi aasani se de dete hai but jab khud ko unpe amal karne ki bari aati hai to piche hatne lagte hai.
Arjun- Matlab tum kehna chahti ho ki main dubara shadi kar lu.
Riya- maine aisa kab kaha.
Arjun- Maya aisa chahti hai ki pehle me apni zindagi me aage badhu dan wo uske riste ke bare me sochegi.
Riya- to agar maya ko samjhane ka yahi tarika hai to yahi sahi.
Arjun- Riya tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kya bol rahi ho.
Riya- I knw sir. Main jaanti hu ki u cant marry but acting to kar sakte ho na.
Nxt day all headed 2wards Mumbai. On their way RaMaya inform every1 dt 2day dey vl go to magistrat office. Ariya nd shriza luked at each other. Sameer dropped all at etf headquarter nd along with Maya goes to court.
Here at conference room shriza and chotu, Aisha thinking something.
Liza- Specky agar tum mujhse ek wish mangte to kya mangte.
Shree- Yahi ki tum mujhe specky na bulao.
Liza- okay. Ur wish is granted but u hv to do somethng in return.
Shree- my wish ur command. I m ready 4 everythng.
Liza- what? Any way lets go we dont hv time.
Shree- for what?
Liza- to stop divorce.

Inside Magistrat office,
Family court

Magistrate- To yeh aap logo ka final decision hai. Ek bar phir se soch lijiye.
Maya- Yes its our final decision.
As magistrat was going to speak d door of office get open with a bang.
And there is our shriza to stop divorce.
Sameer- Liza tum dono yaha. Is evrythng alright.
Liza- No bhaiya nothing is alright.
Maya- kya hualiza?
Liza- bhaiya & bhabhi meri ek wish thi ki jab meri shadi ho to aap 2no mera kanyadan karo. Kya aap divorce meri shadi ke baad nhi le sakte. I luv some1 nd want to marry him.
Ramaya- kaun?
Liza (look@shree)- Shree.
Shree- yes.
Liza- i luv shree.
Rathod- kya? Tum aur shree pyar?
But suddenly he get shockd to see ariya who r dere to stop divorce in their own style.

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
feeling sad for Maya
she's totally heartbroken after knowing the truth abt Samar
Arjun-Maya n Ariya convo as nice
Shree-Liza's plan to stop the divorce of Sameer-Maya is nice
eager to know what Ariya will be doing to stop the same
thanks for update
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
excellent update...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
beautiful update
love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear.
i just loved it.
please pm me when you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
excellent part ...
your devil comes wrong time😡
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART: 13 (c)

When Sameer was talking to shriza regarding dere so sudden love nd marriage two person cme inside nd seeing dem all went to shoch mode.
They were Ariya who was dere to stop marriage. Rathod was d 1st one to get out of shock.
Rathod- Rawte, Riya ye kya majak hai.
Arjun- Majak nhi hai Rathod maine Riya se shadi kar li. Aur ye bhi prove kar diya ki zindagi ko ek mauka dena chahiye. Thnks maya to make me realise. Tum apna divorce cont karo.
Arjun to magistrat- sir plz cont their divorce.
Magistrat- mujhe mera kaam mat sikhao, samjhe tum. Aur Mr n Mrs Rathod main aap se ye kehna chah raha tha ki main aap dono ka divorce accept nhi kar raha hun.
Ramaya- but sir...
Magistrat- Atleast give one more try to ur relationship 4 six months. And after dt u both dont want to live together dan i vl accept ur divorce.
Rathod- but sir ...
Magistrat- jyada bole to time period badha dunga.
Ramaya nodded their head nd turn back to go but only stopped by magistrat.
Magistrat to Ariya- kya tumne marriage register karwaya.
Riya- nahi sir... Hum abhi shadi karke aa rahe hai.
Magistrat- koi baat nhi aao main register kar deta hu.
Arjun- iski koi zarurat nhi hai.
Magistrat - zarurat kaise nhi. Chalo aao aur papers pe sign karo.
Now Arjun was fuming frm inside nd glaring at Riya along with smacking his head for agreeing on Riya's stupid idea.
Yes u guessed it right they r facking of getting married.
Riya in mind- oh god ye kya ho raha hai. Natak ke chakkar me Riya tu actually me Mrs Arjun Rawte ban ne ja rahi hai. I m sure kal ki news headline hogi ki acp rawte ne apni new wife ka kr diya murder.
Oh god plz save me.
But it seems god r busy in match making game. 1st is shriza nd 2nd are Ariya.

Far from dem a handsome man is talking with a girl on phone.
Man- hi baby how r u. Listen i hv a surprise for u. Any guesses.
Girl- no tell me na.
Man- I m back. I m in mumbai. Cme back soon, Aisha.
Aisha- Baby its awesome n 4 ur kind info i m also back frm case.
Man- oh thats great. I vl meet u in eve at ur place till den keep dreaming abt me.
Aisha- Samrat i love u.
Samrat- i love u too baby.
And samrat cut d call n thinking in mind.
Samrat in mind- I m sorry Aisha. In sab me involve karne ke liye i m sorry nd u too( thnking abt sumone)
Aisha main tumhe sab kuch clear kar deta but when i cme to knw u r joining den i cant stop myself for entering deep in ur heart. As u r my key to complete my mission and with ur chief i hv some unsettled work.
So Aisha nd etf i m cming.
Scene shifts to etf office.
All r hell shocked to knw abt three couples dt is Ramaya, Ariya n Shriza. And in shock all r congratulating dem. And to their relief Rathod's phone rang indicating arrival of new case. Soon case get solved. After case Whereas Ramaya r trying to act normal our two etf girl Riya n Liza r hiding frm their husband n to b husband who r in search of their girls to kill dem. Both man r cursing himself to follow dem.
Latet Rathod called day of all headed to their home. But Rathod stopped Ariya nd shriza nd instruct dem to seat inside his suv.
They turn to his suv only to find maya waiting 4 dem.
All seat inside suv nd Rathod drove to Maya's house.
All entered inside house except ariya as maya wants to welcome new couple traditionaly. Maya did arti nd welcome ariya. Where riya was hving tears of joy on d other arjun was fuming in anger.
Once everythng get done all settled on sofas. There was pin drop silence. So Maya decided to break it.
Maya- Arjun u made right decision to marry riya. She is a darling. U knw liza also want to marry.
Sameer- but dt doesn't mean ki i vl let her.
Maya- oh cmmn stop being so possessive brother. Liza loves shree n we sud help them. Shree is nice u too knw dt.
Rathod- Main bhi pyar ka dushman nhi hu but remember dere is Maa sa nd her decision vl decide evrythng.
Rathod to shree- aur ek dusre se pyar karte ho to thik hai but not more dan dt. Samjhe.
Shree- ye...ye.. Yes sir.
Rathod- ok. So leave.
Shree- ji sir.
Saying so he stand up to go.
Maya to liza- Liza shree ko bye nhi kahogi.
Liza looks at his bhai where he is busy in glaring maya. Maya shrug it off nd motion her to go.
Maya takes ariya to their room. (Arre guys samjha karo newly married hai SR to banta hai but in a hatke style.)
Giving space to ariya Maya cme back in living area but didnt find rathod. She finds him n atlast she finds him at balcony busy in glaring shriza who seems to be in talk but actually fighting with smiles.
His trances broken by maya's voice.
Maya- Is tarah ghuroge to ankhe bahar aa jaegi.
Sameer chuckled at seeing old maya.
Rathod- purani maya ko dekh acha laga.
Maya in serious- Woh maya kabhi wapas nhi aaegi. Wo us riste ke sath wahi mar gayi.
Rathod- Ok. Stop all dis.
Maya- hmm...
Rathod- Ammm... Maya can i asked u sumthing abt kids.
Maya- cme i vl show u sumthing.
Maya lead him to her bedroom which is filled with Samar and Samaya's pic frm dere birth to till now.
Sameer's eyes filled with tears.
Rathod- Samar aur Samaya kaha hai.
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful
super update
love it
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Originally posted by: khemanisarita

beautiful
super update
love it
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