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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
the case proceedings went off well
n the team went as undercover
n finally they recognized  the culprit
maya is in danger
hope sameer reaches there on time
n teach a good lesson to those men
thanks for update
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...⭐️
so mayas life is in danger... hope she gets saved on time😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful dear it is getting interesting πŸ˜Š
Continue soon 
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update.
Hope maya get safe...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late comment...
Read last 3 parts in one go...and they are fab...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Now Who is Samrat???πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Maya in danger...😲😲😲

Continue soon...plz plz plz plz plz plz PM me...😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I m heartly sorry to u all dt i m not updting my work.
Guys i was out of state for some time nd back on 22nd.
Right now i m helping one of my friend to cmplt her project work.
As soon as project vl over i vl try to updt.
Now i m going to take some rest as me nd my friend didn't slept last night. She is still on her project nd i m off to bed.
Guys thoda aur intezar kar lo may b i vl give u updt till midnight.
Sorry once again.
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Posted: 10 years ago
RECAPE- MAYA WAS KIDNAPPED BY SOME GOONS N RATHOD WAS IN HER SEARCH.

PART: 12

~ INTEZAR HAI TERA ~

Maya is lying unconcious nd in dt state she has gone to her memory lane.

FLASHBACK~

Samar- Maya why r u so nervous? Rawte uncle mujhse milne chahte hai par tumhare pasine kyun chut rahe hai?

Maya- Oh god Samar. Dad ne tumhe bulaya hai nd i know he vl never agree for our marriage as u know he hates police officers itni ki unhone Arjun ko apne se dur kar diya. Phir tum...?

Samar- Shhh... Sab thik hoga. Dont worry... Main tumhare dad k sath final meeting k liye ja raha hu. So b ready 4 our marriage.
Maya- I love u..
Samar (taking a pause)- Love u too.
Than Samar went to meet Mr Suryakanta Rawte.
After sometime talking with Samar, Mr Rawte seemed to b vry angry on him. So without telling anything Mr Rawte went to his study room. Samar also left frm dere saying dt he had also some urgent work. Then Samar left frm dere.
So finaly Maya decided to meet her dad nd talk abt his decision. She knocked d door nd enter silently.
Maya- Dad, I know dt u r not happy as i want to marry him bt dad he is good nd all police officers r not bad as u think.
Mr Rawte- U r right my doll. All r not bad. Some r good nd usefull.
Maya (confused)- means???
Mr Rawte- I hv no problem with Samar if u want to marry him u can... Happy.
Maya (shocked)- What? R u serious? I mean really? I LOVE U DAD. Now bye i have to go somewhere.
Bye...
Mr Rawte- Bye...
After hearing dis maya directly landed on sameer's place.
Maya- Sameer... Samar... Where r u guys.
Sameer cming frm behind- kyun gala phad rahi ho. Aisi kya afat aa gayi ki tum itna chilla rahi ho.
Maya- mood spoiler...
Sameer- kya kahaa???
Maya- jo suna.. Any way Samar lets go somewhere to celebrate as dad is now ready for our marriage.
With dt she hug Samar nd he smiled evily.
Samar (smiling nd thinking)- Haa to bolna tha offer exciting jo tha.

Maya- Kaha khoye hue ho. Lets go...
She drags Samar till door bt stopped dere nd looked back.
She went to Sameer nd and hugged him and said.
Maya- Thank u so much. We r together only because of u.

Samar- Ab kya kare tumhe jhelne ki aadat ho gayi hai.

Maya- What do u meaan by dt? Samar one day i vl kill him.

To stop dere fight samar drags Maya out of house nd headed towards Disco to celebrate thier next step to relationship.

Soon their marriage dt was announced by Mr Rawte. Maya and Roshni were hell busy for marriage arrangements and due to this Roshni became frequent visitor of Rawte mansion. Although Mr Rawte dont like Roshni as Arjun married her without his consent, he let her come only because of Maya. As Roshn was d one who can tell Maya how to do well in her upcoming life.

On the other side Roshni was also trying her best to bring father son together. And she vowed dt in Maya's wedding she vl reunite her family.

Whereas Both ladies were busy in shopping, Arjun,Sameer and Samar were busy on their cases.
Arjun and Samar were trying to nab the master mind behind d drug racket and Samar was doing raids and capture almost 100kgs of drugs. But in one consignment he failed. All were cheering him not to loose hope.
Arjun- Hey Samar dont b so sad. Its ok.
Sameer- Yes, dude. Arre ite consignment to pakde na.
Samar- But bhai i failed in last one. It was big one.
Maya- Hey my would be dont forget ki after one week its our marriage. Aur tum kisi aur ki barat nikalne mat chale jana.

All smiled at dt. Days flew by and now its wedding day.
Roshni was making Maya ready. She was dressed in beautiful red lehenga and wore golden ornaments given by Rathod's. She was luking very beautiful. Soon Arjun cme in her room searching Roshni and his eyes get moised seeing her little doll in bridal attire ready to be someone else.
Arjun- Mujhe nhi pata tha ki meri little sis itni beautiful hai. Agar us Samar ne pareshan kia na to ek call n i vl beat him black n blue.
Maya- Arjun he wont be. Bt i doubt abt ur so called frnd Sameer. He vl surely make me cry.
Arjun humari shadi k bad uska bhi no. laga dena. Warna wo mujhe bahut pareshan karega.
Roshni- Ok. Uska nhi kuch kar denge. Now sit down or u vl mess up ur dress.
Arjun and Roshni came out of her room and going to see other arrangement dts when Mr Rawte called dem to tell something. But Arjun got a call so Roshni went all alone.
After attending call Arjun seemed to be vry tensed but seeing Roshni's happy face he asked her d matter.
Arjun- kya hua Rosh itni kush dikh rahi ho. Aisa kya kaha dad ne.
Roshni- Dad chahte hai ki hum dono Maya ka kanyadan kare. I m so happy Arjun.
After some tym she composed herself n saw Arjun's face he didnt seem to b happy so she asked him.
Roshni- Arjun wgy r u so tensed?
Arjun- um.. Rosh dere is a problem. Main or Sam jis case ko deal kar rahe the usme hame lead mili hai.
Roshni- Arjun dont say ki tum case k liye Maya ki wedding miss karna chahte ho.
Arjun- Rosh i dont want to but i have to.
Roshni- u sud better explain it to Maya.
Then he went to Maya n explain d matter.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Then Arjun went to maya to explain the complexity of situation.
Inside Maya's room-
Arjun- Um.. Maya actually dere is a problem.
Maya- what problem?
Arjun- I hv to go out for a case. Its important.
Maya- Not u too Arjun.
Arjun- too means?
Maya- Samar is also going for some case. He called me to tell dt barat vl come on time bt he wont b with dem. He vl cme a little late.
Arjun- what how can he do dis. I vl talk to him.
Maya- No Arjun. Dont call him. He is doing his duty just like u. Now go n dont make me wait.
Roshni- oh god i dont believe it. Tum sab ek jaise ho.
Arjun and Maya smiled at frusteted Roshni.
Arjun- I vl try to cme asap.
Maya- aana to hai but sath me us stupid ko bhi lete aana.
Now go!
Arjun pecked maya's forehead nd went to change in formals.
Inside Arjun-Roshni's room-
Roshni- Arjun tum logo ka abhi jana jaroori hai kya. I mean todha wait kar lete. Shadi complt hone k bad chale jana.
Arjun- Rosh criminal maya ki shadi end hone tak intezar nhi karega. Wo jald se jald apne kaam ko pura kark bhagne ki koshish karega.Sys.
Roshni- Tum jaa rahe ho koi baat nhi hai but Samar i m not feeling well.
Arjun- i know dear but its our duty. Like u Maya wont b feeling well. Go to maya she needs ur help.
After consoling Roshni he went to crime spot. And Roshni made her way towards Maya's room.

Inside Maya's room-
Maya was crying very badly nd Roshni was trying her best to stop her. Thats when Mrs Rathod entered her room. Maya composed herself a bit.
Mrs Rathod- Are ye kya meri bahu ke ankhon me itne mote mote ansu. Ane do Samar ko acche se khabar lungi.
Maya- sab ki khabar lena. Arjun nd Sameer bhi chale gaye.
Mrs Rathod- ok teeno ko dantungi. Now smile. Ab jab tak wo log aate hai hum shadi ke pehli wali kuch rasma kar lete hai.
Maya- hmm!!
Rawte house was decorated very beautiful just like a bride. As Maya was cming down with Mrs Rathod nd Roshni, Maya saw Arjun and Sameer at entrance.
Roshni also noticed dem.
Roshni- Aunty ji wo dekhiye Sameer aur Arjun aa gaye.
Mrs Rathod- Matlab Samar bhi aa gaya. Chalo accha hai. Rasme bhi jaldi ho jaengi. Phir shadi.
Maya was now facing at entrance to see her groom but the next sight shook everyone from core.
Maya saw a motionless body of Samar at wheel chair who is counting his last breath.
All except Maya rushed to him.
Mrs Rathod- Samar yeh sab kya hai. Agar ye koi majak hai to ise abhi isi waqt band kariye.
Samar (breathing heavily)- I m sorry mom but its not a joke. I m here to fulfill my last wish nd promise.
Mrs Rathod- what r u talking abt samar?
Samar- Mom maine Maya se ek promise kiya tha ki woh ek din Rathod khandan ki bahu banegi aur wish ye hai ki main Maya ko hamesha Suhagan dekhna chahta hun.
Hamesha.
But as u know ki mere sare promises bhai pure karte hai isliye ab bhai meri wish nd promise puri karenge.
Mrs Rathod- Samar pagal mat bano kuch nhi hoga tumhe. Sameer kuch kahiye inhe.
Ye kaisi batein kar raha hai.

Maya who was standind there as a statue cme to reality when Maya heard him saying abt his wish n promise ans ran upstair to her room and locked it from inside.
Soon Roshni panicked not seeing Maya dere Arjun and Roshni rushed to her room.
Arjun- Maya open d door.
Maya plz dont try to do something foolish. For Samar's sake open it.
Inside room Maya was going to cut her nerves bt hearing abt samar she openwd d door. Arjun and Roshni cme inside nd make her understand abt her n Sameer's wedding. Finally she agreed but not heartly.
Maya- I m ready Arjun tell Samar dt i vl marry his brother but wont accept him as my husband. I vl b daughter i law of Rathod's but not soulmate of Sameer.
I vl b suhagan but vl live d life of widow.
Hearing her each word Arjun n Roshni's heart sank. Arjun came to downstairs n informed all abt maya's decision. Sameer also agreed for marriage only for his dying brother's wish.

Soon Sameer came to mandap in groom's outfit n took his place at mandap bedi. Now Pandit asked for bride. Then Roshni brought Maya n her face is covered with veil. But she froze at d stairs when her eyes met with Samar's.
She came back to her sense due to loud sound of sehnai.
Ahhh...ahhh...
Sehnaiyo ki sada keh rhi hai
kushi ki mubarak ghadi aa gyi
Sazi surkh jode me chand si dulhan
zameen pe phalak se pari aa gayi hai.
( Roshni shook Maya n motion her to take steps toward mandap. )
aaa...aa...aaa...aa...aa
Dulhe ka sehra suhana lagta hai X2
Dulhan ka to dil dewana lagta hai.
Dulhe ka sehra suhana lagta hai
Dulhan ka to dil dewana lagta hai (Maya cme to mandap n seat beside Sameer bt luking at samar)
pal bhar me kaise badalte hai risteX2
ab to har apna begana lagta hai (both remember their fight)
Dulhe ka sehra suhana lagta hai
Dulhan ka to dil dewana lagta hai
sath phero se bandha janmo ka ye bandhan
pyar se joda hai rab ne preet ka daman (stads 4 feras)
sath phero se bandha janmo ka ye bandhan
pyar se joda hai rab ne preet ka daman
Hai nai kasme,nai rasme nai uljhan
hoth hai khamosh magar keh rhi dhadkan
(now Sameer put sindoor)