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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update

cont soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
i don't get who is maya's husband? samar ya sameer???

eagerly waiting for next part

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
one question
why sameer bro killed samar
mystery very curious
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
really sorry for late reply
both updates were amazing
loved the kids bonding with the team
n especially with sameer
so we get to know some of the secrets
pics were awesome
thanks for updates
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful dear  kya likha hai wonderful ðŸ˜Š
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Hi frnda back again. I know most of u all r hell confused regarding Maya's Husband bt dont worry u vl get ur ans vry soon. Thnk u guys 4 all ur luv nd support.

PART: 10 (b)

TERE MERE BADALTE RISTEY

When Rathod tried to pacify Maya dt time his mother Mrs Gaytri Damsingh Rathod entered etf premises nd shocked to see broken Maya. She luked at person next to her n understood d whole matter. Soon she went to her nd slapped hard on Sameer's cheek. And after hearing his mothers harsh word Rathod got shattered nd went on his knees nd den started to cry.
All eftians felt vry bad to see thier chiefs condition. Maya saw him crying nd again her anger took over her.
Maya- Bas Sameer Rathod. Apne magarmach k aansu mat bahao. Agar sochte ho ki me in aanauo ko dekhne ke bad tumhe maaf kr dungi den u r wrong. Tum Arjun ko Roshni ke maut ka dosh dete phirte ho na to apne aap ko kitna dosh doge jabki u himself killed him. Aur ab rone ka natak.

And again dere was a sound of tight slap bt dis time its Maya's turn to get. She looked at d person who slapped her nd found nd angry Arjun standing dere to prevent his frnd. Yes frns not boss.
He held Maya by her shoulder nd dragged her to his cabin not b4 telling Riya to take care of Rathod.

FLASHBACK ENDS ~

All Shree, Riya, Aisha nd Chotu r hell worrieds for dere chief. 1st dey dont know wat dere prblms nd 2nd dey cant help even if dey want to.

Scene shifts to Arjun's Cabin

Arjun- Maya mujhe laga tum itne salo me Rathod ko samjhogi bt tum Samar k pyar me andhi ho gayi thi. Tumhe uske alawa kuch nazar nhi aa raha tha. Isliye humne tumse sach chupaya. Abhi bhi der nhi hua hai apni galti ko sudhar lo.

Maya- Jo hona tha ho gaya. Aur der bhi ho gayi hai. Jis riste ke liye me aaj tk lad rahi rhi aaj me usse apne aap ko aazad kr dungi.

Arjun- Maya Samar ko bhula ke aage badho.

Maya- Arjun kya tum aage badh paye ho nhi na. To phir mujhse kaise umeed kar sakte ho. Riya bahut acchi hai!!!

Saying so she left his cabin.

Later dey get a new case. All assemble at conference bt Maya is missing. All see thier chief who is back frm his inner turmoil n ready for action. Rathod feel Maya's absense nd Aisha ans him.

Aisha- Kaphi der se dekha nhi hai.
Rathod- Hmm!!! Ok team we hv a case.Odisha state me ek coal mining area hai Rampur mines. Waha kuch illegal works hone ki info mili hai. Its owned by a vry reputed company so we have to deal with it.
Shree- Kaisi dealings sir??

Rathod- Sayad coal distribution ko lekar kuch hai. Rest waha jane ke baad pata chalega. Get ready to leave nd Aisha inform her also. We need her dere.

Aisha- Yes sir!!!

Next day all r ready to leave for Rampur. They decided to go by road. Arjun, Riya, shree nd chotu in one suv nd Rathod, Aisha, Liza nd Maya in another. Its going to b vry tireful journey frm west side of India to East side zone. In Arjun's suv he was hell irritated by ChoReeYa's nautanki nd in Rathods dere was a pin drop silence.

Its late night so all decided to stop at stop dere drive nd continue it tomorrow morng.
They stayed at a hotel. Arjun-Rathod, Aisha-Riya, Maya-Liza, Chotu-Shree shared room. At midnight Aisha feel thirsty. She luked for water at her room bt cant find. So she goes to reception area to hv some water. There she finds Sameer nd Maya talking with each other. She hide herself behind one pillar to hear dem.

Sameer who cme downstair to call sumone noticed Maya cming out of her room. Maya also sees him. They share a painful eyelock. Just den Aisha saw dem.

Maya- Aap ne sachai kyun chupai.

Rathod- Kyunki Samar nhi chahta tha ki tum sach janne ke bad usse nafrat karo or sayad me bhi.

Maya- Isliye aap ne sari nafrat apne naam le liya. Aap ne sirf compromise kiya hai Sameer par ab nhi.

Rathod- kya matlab hai tumhaara??

Maya- Case khatma hone ke bad jab Mumbai wapas lautenge to sab pata chal jaega. Waise bhi raat bahut ho gayi hai aap ko so jana chahiye.

Saying dis Maya goes back to her room. Sameer also goes back to his room.

Aisha who was listening dem cme out frm her hideout nd poundering over dere talk wen her phon rings nd a small smile crept on her lips. She receives phone.

Aisha (smiling)- Ah to janab ko humari yaad aa hi gayi.

Caller- Kya kare aap ho hi aisi ki aap se baat kiye bina reh hi nhi sakte.

Aisha- Batein banana to koi aap se sikhe, Samrat!!!

Samrat (Caller)- Aap ke pyar ne hume aisa bana diya hai.

Aisha- Ye sab chodiye aap wapas kab aa rahe hai?
Samrat- Bahut jald bus wo sabut mere hath lag jaye to hum aapke paas honge. Anyway aapki team ka kya haal hai.

After dt Aisha narrates d whole incident to Samrat nd hung up phone.

Next mornig all again started dere journey nd reached Rampur at around 2:30 pm.

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I know aap sab ko mujhe marne ka maan kar raha hai. Ek to pehle itne secrets hai ab Samrat naam bhi secrets ki list me jud gaya. Kya karu aadat se majboor hun.
Bt relax sab k ans milenge.
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Posted: 10 years ago
arjun nai maya ko kya batya

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: khemanisarita

arjun nai maya ko kya batya


hv some patience dear. Sab pata chal jaega.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Samara92

hv some patience dear. Sab pata chal jaega.


ok
awesome update