Dekha Ek Khwaab


Dekha Ek Khwaab
Dekha Ek Khwaab

LOVE IS PRECIOUS ...chappy 4 pg 24 (Page 4)

nityatandon Senior Member

Joined: 25 June 2012
Posts: 669

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Hey... Kritz...
Description acha hai...
Aur title bhi bhut acha hai...
But ek rquest hai ...
Pls apni bki stories bhi update krdo...
And thanx for he PM...
Aur aage bhi karti rehna...

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chocohollic Senior Member

Joined: 18 May 2013
Posts: 461

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 4:46am | IP Logged
This is an awesome start
Really looking forward to read this story
Well remind me of Anni 's PRINCESS
I am glad that I am getting the opportunity
To read a magical story again
But just for clarification I will like to inform you that
You have written her grand daughter will be a wizard
But wizard are referred for boys as for girl it is witch
Please do send me a pmSmile
As I am eagerly waiting to read
Thumbs Up
And please do update your other two ss
As I am growing really impatient LOL
Hope to read this story soon


Edited by chocohollic - 16 August 2013 at 4:47am

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jazsidhu IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 February 2013
Posts: 5732

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 5:38am | IP Logged
hey tis is superb...
luv the concept...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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-Kritika- Goldie

Joined: 03 September 2012
Posts: 1325

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
hey guyz i m glad u like it its a unique concept ... yeah i continue this story lol LOLLOLLOL firstly thanqu so much for ur lovely comments n appriciate me thanqu so much guyz now i gave u prologue ... so be happy n enjoy reading 

love is precious


hey line cutter ... r u blind or something ? i m standing there since 30 min 

everyone was scared 

one girl : now she is dead ... !!! 
2nd girl: he didn't forgive her ... !!

he turn his face ... 

r u talking to me ?

no i m talking to ur ghost now back off man ... !!! 

she push him

r u new in this collage ?

why did u ask me ? 

couz u don't noe me 

n who r u ?

he pull her weast ... he took her hand on the wall she try to go other way but he block her way 

wat u trying to do ?

introduce my self 

really ? i think u try to kiss me ...n than u introduce urself

wow great idea ... !!! 

he go toward her face he took his hand on her lips ... 

u just take off this fingure i warning u mr ... !!!

she try to complete her sentance when his cold lips touch her soft lips ... he kissed her wid more passion he kissed upper lips her soft upper lip than he kissed her lower lip ... she try to push him but her all strngth were vanished n she touch his chest n some lightning in her hands n she pushed him wid full force n he pined on other wall the lightning is brighting ... everyone shocked the guy who kissed her now his hand is fracture ... she luked her hand shockingly ... !!!

wat is that ? 

i don't know ... !!! 

some light in ur hand ... !!!! 

god swear i don't know ... !!!

watz wrong wid u ?

how can i do this ... !!! 

r u ?

wat ... ?

nothing leave .. !!!

vini some thing is litreally wrong 

but wat ... ?

that i don't know ?   

kritz EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
so howz it it gud or its bad ? plz do comment n like ... !!!! 



Edited by -Kritika- - 16 August 2013 at 6:19am

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Jane523 Goldie

Joined: 28 August 2012
Posts: 2497

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 6:33am | IP Logged
awesome prologue dear...
plzzz update soon...

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huma12. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 11 March 2012
Posts: 4638

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Awsssmmm yar kritzzz lovely prologe

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jazsidhu IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 February 2013
Posts: 5732

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
hey great prologue...
pleasa update soon n thx fr the pm...

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Ayesha.behroz IF-Dazzler

Joined: 30 June 2013
Posts: 3401

Posted: 16 August 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged
awsome lovely amazing prologue
continue soon please
jaldi se chapter one de we can't wait more
awsome story kamal ki writter han tu
jaldi jaldi update bhi de ab
or intezar nai hosakta mujhse ab
continue asap
update quickly fast fast
amazing muah lovely

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