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New Virman FF- Tanhaayi- Ch. 7 pg 19- UPDATED!!!! (Page 14)

Syed695 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 November 2011
Posts: 6481

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Superb and beautifully Wirtten..Loved the flow and liked that u started off with Maanvi's POV...and loved Virat's POV..he actually fell for Maanvi and this will grow deep as they keep goin their connection...Simply Nice...Both found peace in each other...Please Update sooon n Thanks for the PM!

kusharberry IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 08 September 2012
Posts: 19686

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 11:56am | IP Logged
wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dearSmileSmile
devilaonmoon IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 March 2013
Posts: 5086

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
I love the way you use the words and make them alive
in your writing, you make the feelings in those words so simple
yet so beautiful that each time I read your updates... the charm stillkeeps lingering in my heart for so long.
Yes dear.. your writing have that magic in it.
               Thanks for again starting to write after footprints...
             The truth is I still keep reading my favourite chapters 
                      of Footprints whenever I feel like Smile Smile
In this update virats pov rocked... Big smile... Really loved
how you explained the way manvi made virats frustration
of the whole day vanish just like that.
So viru boy was that desperate to be with our cute mannu that
he even proved himself a foody.. haa haa LOL...
Glaring at the waitress part for saying that the cafe was about to
close was sooo funny...
          It was adorable how each time they shook hands virat
                            felt something something   Embarrassed Embarrassed
                          Kuch toh hua hai
                                      Kuch ho gaya hai...
                The best was the sunset part on the roof...
                  Manvi was busy watching the sunset while
    virat was busy staring at the beautiful lady beside him instead,
                            well thats so wise of him... Wink...
         Virat is getting more and more adorable day by day and
               I am falling in love with this story with each updt.
I want to ask you one question if you dont mind... that is
are you interested in airplanes by any chance ??
Thats because in footprints also virat was interested in
airplanes.. I still do remember their awsm parasailing... Star...
Hope you would create such splendid and overwhelming
adventures + romance in this story too...
                               Thanks a lot for the pm...
                    And please dont be late this time cause
                  I will be eagerly waiting for your update...
                                                                               Take care... tada...
drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 27 August 2010
Posts: 22900

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
superb update
thanks for the pm
Jannat94 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 July 2012
Posts: 4794

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
Superb Update DearBig smile
waiting for  next part
update soon
niki795 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 May 2012
Posts: 16463

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
loved their pov 's
virat is feeling strong connection between them
he is getting attracted towards her..
continue soon
waiting for next
ambarsariya Senior Member

Joined: 15 October 2012
Posts: 591

Posted: 07 November 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
that was super awesome Minisha...
I mean the way u illustrated both of their views...was mesmerizing...hope u continue very soon...
will b waiting...
thanks 4 PM...Wink
.Yamin. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 May 2010
Posts: 5843

Posted: 07 November 2013 at 7:30am | IP Logged
i have been waiting for ur update n here it comes perfectly n awesomely ! beautifully written ! it's is terrifically superb ! i really really loved it Heart Lovely n amazing . Do continue soon if possible ! will be waiting :) thanx for the pm !

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