New Virman FF- Tanhaayi- Ch. 7 pg 19- UPDATED!!!! - Page 8

Me..First...

nice update..manvi's first day quite memorable :p..love virman 1st encounter, finally the two lonely soul met & virat could feel a sense of connectivity...the one thing they do have in common- loneliness..virat's pov, beautifully written loved it..manvi seems to be like an open book to him...virat is already fascinated by her & mannu was affected by his closeness...  looking forward to see how they will fill that void in each others life..update soon!!
Edited by roshreb - 10 years ago

nice update both of them pov
was nice he is getting attrack
toward her in first meeting
update soon

it seems like yu updated after ages 😛
fabulous update amazingly written 👏👏
virat is a sweetheart even after her kinda rude comments which was not that rude but for him it was something which hewas fighting from or walking away from  he helped her just coz he felt that connection or mere feeling that she needed help ..he could have answered her well but he prefered being silent helper he is a gentleman 😃also a keen observer just a look at her reading her eyes watching her expressions and use of words he gotta read soo much about her and also felt the need to protect her awww 
manvi is a sweet yet being strong and a gal full of life she is kinda nothing to exactly define just goes with the situations ...
waiting to see how they meet again ...
update next part soon 😊

Nice update...
Loved how virat helped manvi...
Virat can easily read manvi...he felt connection with her...
Virat already fascinated towards her...loved itt...
Update soon...thanxx for pm

Amazing update :D ahh manvi first day to college is total hatke n memorable :P
Virman first encounter is superb 😃 although it didn't end well :/ but i m sure they will clear the misunderstanding soon ! :)
Virat pov was beautifully written ! So virat can feel the connection with manvi which is great 😃 he can see the same loneliness in manvi eyes ! He was effected by thier closeness 😳
Can't wait to see how the story unfolds n how virman link up with each other ! Will be waiting for next ! Update soon if possible ! Thanx for the pm =D

SUPPERRR HIT UPDATE...

Wonderful update!! ❤️ Virman first encounter was quite eventful.. Memorable for both of them 😛.. Loved their POV's.. Brilliantly written! 👏👏  Manvi is a strong willed woman but somewhere little judgemental also.. Virat can read her easily.. Though she was kind of rude to him yet he helped her.. He noticed her every action, every expression.. Both of them are lonely and Virat felt some strange connection with her.. Superb! 😃 Her presence, her touch affected him a lot.. Now waiting for their second meeting.. Hope they will sort out their misunderstanding soon.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊 

I miss your writing so much... and was so glad to see your pm... I understand you must be busy but please do try to give at least a small update once a week... you are a wonderful writer and I am in love with your writing ❤️😊

awesome update