Hey guys i just joined if yesterday so decided to write something so heres my 1st ss on asya.
Hope u guys like it. Do comment hows it.
The days in khan villa were goin all smooth...asad zoya fullfilling wishes...nazmas rishta still findin...(same as show)...
The day started with a small sun ray on her face. She woke up to find it was 6 n she had woken up too early. Nor she was felling any more sleepy neither lazy. She decided to have a bath n then have something. She opened her ward room to search some good to wear n suddenly her eyes caught something. There they were-the two musical boxes, one hers n second of her abbu. A tear escaped her eye...
It was 9 when eveyone was done with there breakfast were having some random chats when the doorbell rang.
Nazma-me dekti hu
The door opened n a shock + anger expression occured on her face
N- tanveer tum?
Zoya almost jumped from her seat.asad all angry. Dilshad shocked.
Tanveer-oh ho...itna jayda shock hone ki koi zarurat nahi h kyuki ab sabse bada shock lagne wala h...
She spoke as she came in the house.
Asad-ab kyu ayi ho tum yaha..kya chati ho tum.
Tanu...kuch nahi, bas apki thodi si help karne ayi thi main. Socha bahaut hurt kiya h na maine to thodi si help bhi kardo.
She said as her hands folded.
Tanu...main yaha sirf kuch batane ayi hu.zoya k abu k bare me.
Asad...kaha h zoya k abu. Bolo tanveer kaha h vo.
Tanu...are are.vahi to batene ayi hu me jammy...
But uske pehle kuch calls karne h.
She picked up nazmas phone which was lying on d table and called a number n put it on speaker. She sat on the sofa...
Hello...came the voice.
Every ear knew who it was...rashid
Tanu...to rashid miya kaisi h apki ami.
Asad was angry but wondered why did she call him.
Tanu...oh ho. App hame nahi phechante. Tanver..vahi jike khilaf apne sabut collect kiye the zoya k sath meri sachai sabke samne lane k liya..
Every one looked at zoya all surprised.
Tanu...so. me chahti hu ki ap apke ghar me jo bhi h une bula k phone loud speaker pe rahke. Me sabse bat karna chati hu.
Rashid...me tumhari bat kyu manu. Phlese tumne mere bete ki life kharab karne koshis kar chuki ho. Tume pata bhi h kitna kuch saha asad aur zoya ne tumhare karan...
Asad was all shocked.
Tanu...jaisa me kheti hu vaisa karo warna tum nahi jante me kya kar sakti hu. Ek bar try to karo.
Rashid calls every one n keeps it on speaker.
Tanu...20 min me muje sab ke sab yaha asad ke ghar pe dikne chahiye aur agar kisi ne bhi naa kaha to u never no.
Ayan...ye kya khe rahi ho tu.bhaijan ke ghar?
Tanu...koi sawal nahi.yaha abe ke bad jo sawal karna hoga wo karna.me sabka jawab de dongi. I want everone here warna sabke raaz khul gayenge.
Tanu...kahi raaz h...gudiya factory,zoya k abbu,and all n all...
Rashid...tum kaise ja...
Tanu...20 mins n everyone here...
Just 15mins n every one was der...
Tanu...masha alla. 5 min jaldi ...wow
Siddique(sidi)...kyu bula h yaha..is ghar me aur tum kya jati ho gudiya factory k bare me..
Rashid all shocked
Tanu...thoda sa sabar kijiye bas 2min aur
Asad...kya ho raha h ye sab tanveer.tum sidhe bata do ki zoya k abu kaha h.
Tanu...bas thoda sabar jammay...(flirty)
A car soung is heard n every one is shocked to see razia with cloth on her eyes.tanu open it.
Razia is shocked to see her at khan villa...zoya n every one der.
Raz...y have u got me here n wat is all this goin on.
Tanu...dont worry. Kych jayda nahi but aaj sare raaz khulne wale h. Sari sachai samne ane wali h. is ghar k bare me...
END OF PART 1
HOW WAS IT GUYS..?
SHOULD I CONT.
NOTE...page 3... precap for part 3
Part 3...page 4... part 3
Precap for part 4... page 6...part 4 precap
Summary of part 1,2,3... page 8
Part 4...page 8
Part 5...page 11
Edited by sonia125 - 04 October 2013 at 10:59pm