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IPKKND OS - Birthday Suit [Romance] (Page 5)

rabid52 Senior Member

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Thanks blayde. You write the best romantic os's ever.

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blayde Goldie

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Alright! I need to Breathe First...

You have just Changed the meaning of Jalebis for me, if was after Khushi's character that made me love Jalebis, But after your OS it has changed the Meaning only! 

My Gosh, How? I mean How? I mean Reallly? You actualllyyy??? 
LOl sorry for being all this Dramatic But Seriously Hats Off my Love what a use of Jalebisss... My God I'm Spell Bounded.  

I thoroughly Loved each word, starting form her command to him to come home at sharp 6 and he coming some seconds before only, then they sitting on the back seat Oh so Close and she being All Prefect for him and choosing the best for him. His thoughts for his gift, but him being Shocked to witness her in that suit. And the part he realising he is wearing too Many Clothes ... LOL ...

and Yesss She having a Jalebi in her mouth when she turned... hehehehehehe I actually imagined her. 

"Don't worry sweetheart, I'll make sure you finish," Arnav let his eyes transfix onto hers as she blushed hotly at his words! - Beautifulll and so romantic EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

and Yesss then the use of jalebisss... SIGH!  I better not go into the detail. 

Thankuuu for a Perfectly Made Jalebious OS! 
Love Youuu
Tia Embarrassed

Edited by Tia_0810 - 15 August 2013 at 6:08am

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blayde Goldie

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Sorry double post! :(

Edited by Tia_0810 - 15 August 2013 at 5:57am

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Maddy1270 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 January 2012
Posts: 3562

Posted: 15 August 2013 at 6:04am | IP Logged

Khushi ordering Arnav about, leaving him speechless, then hesitantly calling him back is adorable as is his eagerness to be with her only to be met with a locked door... he drowning in his wife's ethereal beauty is another awww moment. The description of her smoky eyes is just wow! Arnav's trepidation at the thought of what an outlandish suit she might present him and his willingness to go along so as to keep her happy is cute. Khushi snuggled up to Arnav and he with one arm around her shoulders and the other clasping both hers on her lap is a beautiful image of trust, companionship and love! Her adeptness at ordering at the restaurant comes as a surprise but turns him on, too... looks like he's eager to relinquish control in other spheres of life, too!  Loved this bold yet impish Khushi who came up with the idea of giving her hubby dearest a striptease and a lapdance as a memorable birthday giftArnav yearning to savor his wife vividly shows how much he wants her... Khushi's sling-shot action with her panties, without bothering to note where they fell, is quite bold, thus bringing Arnav to his knees: Arnav's frustration at being overdressed in comparison to Khushi and the alacrity with which he disrobes is damn amusing! He incorporating the jalebi in their foreplay will ensure that a jalebi will never look the same to them hereafter! Lovely how he commandeered her grand finale, turning it into something more explosive! His promise to his lovely wife that he would ensure that she finishes is a double entendre if ever there was one! Their teasing banter after their lovemaking is endearing...Arnav loves Khushi's alter-ego and reiterates his love for his Khushi, bringing a smile to her face. This, in turn, fills his once-upon-a-time empty heart with happiness... you really have a knack for combining sensuality with emotion, thus pulling us in! Beautifully written!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 15 August 2013 at 11:09pm

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Anarocksick IF-Rockerz

Joined: 20 April 2012
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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Aha this was was so goood, Blayde! 

Love how your write the love making scenes. They are filled with so much love and emotions.

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ameena671 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 6:45am | IP Logged
wow amazing os loved it thank you for pm.

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jazmeen IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Loved it
Hot and cute at same time
Best birthday gift for arnav lmao

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luvbug IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
too hot to handle ... really enjoyed reading it... i kept visualizing namak ishq ka :D ... but this goes couple of steps ahead... ahem... Wink Thumbs Up

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