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I have officially been rendered speechless. You definitely have a way with words. I'd never expect such perfection and intricate design in an OS that it so ravishing and sensual.
The basic idea is not unheard of but your rendition is truly remarkable. The dinner and her taking authority into her own hands was such a master stroke. How you expressed the effect her sassy and saucy attitude brought in Arnav made the entire episode unbelievably potent and simply amazing.
The intensity of emotion that your words crafted definitely deserves praise. This is the first sample of your work that I have read and you have swept me off my feet.
Actually, I found the song selection a bit weird at first but as you progressed with the OS I was completely convinced and thrilled with the result. The orange color is not even close to my favorite but you worked it in beautifully.
Another thing that I want to specifically appreciate is how you maintained ArHi's innate nature while expanding the horizons and experimenting with possibility. The return call of "Aap ayegein na" and Anrav's reaction were very realistic and charming.
I definitely want to read all your previous work and any future work so please feel free to PM with anything you write.
Meanwhile, I shall remain a greatly impressed and very happy reader.
Also, TaaRey stand to Reyaansh Singhania and Taani Shekhawat from Dil Dostii Dance of Channel V. I find their romance to possess both innocence and intensity and so I really love TaaRey. For the sake of the story moving forward, TaaRey have been shown to separate physically even thought they are very much in love. Many fans of TaaRey were upset about it but I felt that the separation was sensible and respectful to the love of TaaRey. It is to follow Kunwar Amarjeet Singh (Dancer and Actor) and TaaRey that I first joined IF.
I'm sorry for the digression. Please do keep me posted about your works :)
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