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I really liked it alot...

It was full on romance.

U did a fantabulous job.

Seriously u rock girl...

Btw mrs.zayn malik

Dnt tel me ur his fan too..

Same here...

I jst love him soo much 

Specially after knowing he is a half pakistani amd a muslim...nd he even knws urdu...

I seriously wanna meet him so badlyy..

Cnt tell...so congo u gt a patner ..nw we both wil fancy him togther ...

Itna Romantic update !!

Too good !!

Mrs. ZAYN MALIK ????? 

i neva knew 😲

Chal ab update soon !

Coming to the update... it was really cute and romantic. A romantic Rey pursuing Taani was flirty and cute. How he quickly ignored romance and thought about her vulnerability was beautiful. How he explained the "trust bites" was really romantic for me. I loved the notion and his rendition. 

Taani's initiation of their intimacy was definitely a highlight as its not fair to forever make Rey chase Taani. She recognized his love and  loved and wanted him as much as he loved and wanted her. I liked that a lot. 

I also loved the rain outside because it further charged up the setting. I must definitely mention the "love bite" because I loves the naughty and flirty side of Taani that was being hinted there.

Keep updating Nimrat. You're good and you know it. I am genuinely sorry but I was very much pressed for time and was unable to comment earlier.

Taarey romance was 😳

LOved the whole chap

update soon