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i wish.. Mayur ff..#2 updated LAST part 27 pg 33 (Page 25)

Bhatakti_atma IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 2:21am | IP Logged
             NOTE:
Here was the last part friends.Smile

I hope you all liked my work. Do comment regarding it.
 
I dont know if you all are happy with the end but to justify the title i had to do it.
I hope no one is disappointed. 

I had no intentions to end it but since i am not finding time to update as i am in 10th thats why rather than dragging i decided to give you all a end of this FF.

Just a few questions that i would like my readers to answer.

Did you like the way i wrote?

Was the concept good enough?

Was it well executed?

Are you disappointed the way it ended?

Should i write more?

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LOVE YASHFEEN EmbarrassedBig smileSmile

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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Hey i liked the whole part but was disapponted with the ending...
 I hoped Mayank & Nupur got united in the end.

But i really liked ur writing.  Thanks a lot...
hasiniangel Senior Member
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 3:57am | IP Logged
the whole update was too good, but iam not liking the end..Unhappy
i wanted them to be united..
For me only Mayur were the Pair.. no one else can take their place..
if possible change the end yaar.. Cry
anyways a Fab story...Thumbs Up
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetaaga20

Hey i liked the whole part but was disapponted with the ending...
I hoped Mayank & Nupur got united in the end.

But i really liked ur writing. Thanks a lot...

Thanks
Bhatakti_atma IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hasiniangel

the whole update was too good, but iam not liking the end..Unhappy
i wanted them to be united..
For me only Mayur were the Pair.. no one else can take their place..
if possible change the end yaar.. Cry
anyways a Fab story...Thumbs Up


Thank you
ratibob007 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Awesome story.
Your writing style is nice, but i like happy ending.
So next time please write a story with happy ending.
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ratibob007

Awesome story.
Your writing style is nice, but i like happy ending.
So next time please write a story with happy ending.
Thanks for the pm.

Thanks..Hehe for sure
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Fab story...Thumbs Up

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