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Posted: 10 years ago
        chapter 27
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Since most of u wanted me to change the end so i have done it guys. I hope you  all will like it 😊
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They both headed towards Mayank's house and on reaching Samrat said

"I hope sab theek hojaye Nupur. Handle the situation well Nupur shayad Mayank kuch react kare par tumhe samjhne hoga."

"Tum fikar mat karo Samrat. Sab theek hojaega. This time I wont let anything wrong happen."

"Jao Nupur bas mujhe ek call kar dena."

"Ofcourse Samrat and thank you warna main kuch samjh hi nahi pati."

"Shhhshhh.. Nupur go make things perfect for yourself."

Samrat just smiled and left the place.


Nupur with a smile playing on her lips went towards Mayank's room.
Samrat had requested the maid to let Nupur go in when he gave him a call.

Nupur stood by the door of his room. She could see him standing there near the window.
 She could see the dark side of his life when she saw his room. Nupur felt guilty on seeing his condition because she knew she was responsible for it. 
As she made entry in his room she saw a big picture of herself hanged on the wall. She felt really numb after seeing it  she could feel herself breaking down somewhere but she silently moved towards him. 
She took a deep breadth and kept her hand on his shoulder. Mayank slowly turned around to see who it was. 
As he turned around Nupur could see his red puffy eyes.

"Nupur tu yahan?"
"Haan Mayank mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai."

"Nahi Nupur aaj mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai isse pehle tum kuch kaho. "

"Par Mayank..."

Interrupting in between and holding her hand he said
"Nupur aaj sunna hoga tumhe. bohot sunlia maine."

"Mayank mujhe lag raha hai."

"Laga toh mujhe bhi bohot tha Nupur jab tumne meri koi baat nahi suni thi."
Nupur releasing her hand said

"I am sorry Mayank maine tumhari koi baat nahi suni par mujhe ab sab pata chal gaya hai and believe me I am guilty. Please i am really disappointed with myself. That my faith wasnt enough in you but Mayank tum toh jante ho situation kaisi thi."
She said with tears i her eyes. 

On hearing her words Mayank took a deep sigh while a lone pair of tear made its way towards his cheeks.
"Nupur tumhe sab pata chalgaya kaise."
"Samrat mere office aya tha"
"Nupur i am really sorry ki maine uss samay hi react nahi kiya par Nupur ab apologize kar ke kuch to nahi hoga. I am just happy that you know what the truth is aur ..."

"I love you Mayank."
She said interrupting him.

"I love you too Nupur."
Saying this both of them hugged each other and broke after quite a long time.

Nupur on seeing his guitar said
"Mayank please ek song play karo please Mayank."
"Nupur maine salon se kuch nahi bajaya."
"Come on please Mayank."
"Ok ok."
 Saying this he went to bring his guitar. The duo sat on the bed and Mayank began
Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa 
Mayank sang while looking into her eyes while Nupur continued
Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa 
Mayank smiled on hearing the song from her mouth

Itna bata doon tujhko
Chaahat pe apni mujhko
Yun to nahi ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhu tujhe ek baar
He sang while engaging himself in playing the guitar.

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa

Aisi kabhi pehle hui naa thi khwaahishein
O.. kisi se bhi milne ki
Naa ki thi koshishein
Uljhan meri suljha de
Chaahun main ya naa
Aankhon aankhon mein jataa de
Chaahun main ya naa
He said while going close to her and making her blush. Seeing that it was the perfect time he kissed on her forehead slowly.

Mere chhote chhote khwaab hain
Khwabon mein geet hain
Geeton mein zindagi hai
Chaahat hai, preet hai
Abhi main na dekhoon khwaab woo
Jin mein na tu mile
Le khole honth maine
Ab tak the jo sile 
After getting something really precious and finding it really pure and divine Nupur sang all that her heart wanted to convey,all that she couldnt express through words.

Mujhko na jitna mujh pe
Utna iss dil ko tujh pe
Hone laga aitbaar
Tanha lamhon mein apne
Bunti hoon tere sapne
Tujhse hua mujhko pyaar o o..
Poochungi tujhko kabhi naa
Chaahun main ya naa
Tere khaabon mein ab jeena
Chaahun main kyun naa!
While singing she smiled and gave him a small peck on his cheeks and they hugged each other with smile on their faces.
While hugging him Nupur silently whispered
I wish Mayank maine tumhari baat pehle suni hoti and i wish i had much faith in you.
"ssshhh...Nupur."

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Posted: 10 years ago
yeeyeee me 1st

BTW...

dear its awesome update and thankyou for pm,,...

and plzz pm me when u update
Edited by Roses-khushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ye ending tho super duper hein..
loved it...
thanks for changing it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

yeeyeee me 1st

BTW...

dear its awesome update and thankyou for pm,,...

and plzz pm me when u update


dear this was the last part btw thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for changing the end..it was nice
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hasiniangel

ye ending tho super duper hein..
loved it...
thanks for changing it


welcome dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

thanks for changing the end..it was nice


thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thnk god u changed the ending. Lovely end. Lovrd it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

Thnk god u changed the ending. Lovely end. Lovrd it


m glad u likd it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neel11

thanku very much nice ending


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