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i wish.. Mayur ff..#2 updated LAST part 27 pg 33 - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
@Fari aww...so swt of u thanks..do u thnk i shud change the end????
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: mayuloveu

sad ending kyun? nice


Ainvai btw thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
i seriouly didnt expected this ending but sumwhere it goes with the title...
i wished things would have been diffrent tu aur acha wal feeling ati
but it was really nice journey

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

i seriouly didnt expected this ending but sumwhere it goes with the title...
i wished things would have been diffrent tu aur acha wal feeling ati
but it was really nice journey



Thanks...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just a few questions that i
would like my readers to answer.
Did you like the way i wrote?
Yes
Was the concept good enough?
yea
Was it well executed?
yes
Are you disappointed the way it
ended?
yes...aisa q kia..if possible change it..
Should i write more
Yes and that too very soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: ri.mn

Very nice...bt sad

Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: ri.mn

Thanks for tha pm...

Np
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: ri.mn

Just a few questions that i
would like my readers to answer.
Did you like the way i wrote?
Yes
Was the concept good enough?
yea
Was it well executed?
yes
Are you disappointed the way it
ended?
yes...aisa q kia..if possible change it..
Should i write more
Yes and that too very soon


Okkk i'll try
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Faria.



i dont hate u dear and i cant. but yah i m angry on u for this update. Dil tod diya..
though it was nothing but a story but u know na how much we r connected to Mayur. so cant see such a sad ending on my fav. hope u understanding
and i m waiting for ur dhasu comeback
all the best for ur board exam.

I agree with Faru.
I m not liking the  ending.
Actually mayur are so close to our heart even after many years of MJHT ending , bt our love for mayur is still blossoming ,We cant see them apart .
Plz ager ho sakey tu change the ending. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Irum.


I agree with Faru.
I m not liking the ending.
Actually mayur are so close to our heart even after many years of MJHT ending , bt our love for mayur is still blossoming ,We cant see them apart .
Plz ager ho sakey tu change the ending.

ok i'll change by sunday